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wow... i could totally imagine asad and zoya dancing like that..hmm wonder what the twist will be?update soon and plz pm me :)
Really Aesthetic and Beautiful Update Bheegi!! Loved the Description of the Dance! and frank sinatra song choice was good!!! ooh Twist coming up!! and i loved loved the dimples part!!
Asad as a navy officer and zoya as a spoilt brat wow.and dancing with each other.you write very beautifully sangeetha .nice work thanks for the pm dear.the dancing part was described superbly.
Originally posted by: shanakyasharan
BEAUTIFUL!
asad bandar khan n his dimplewali smile...hayeee
Originally posted by: Surya.Ravi
Sangeetha that was a beautiful update..while reading the update i was in awe and it really transported me to the dreamworld where i'am seeing Asad, Zoya's story from this fanfic unfolding in front of my eyes...even now the scenes in the update are revolving around my eyes..Asad and Zoya from this fanfic are just too good...their characters are well defined and i like this very very much...Asad and Zoya unknowingly have got attached to each other, from being mere strangers on the ship now there is a bond formed between the two of them and i suppose both Asad and Zoya are unaware of this fact too..really very well written update dear...simply awesome, too good, fantastic, marvelous, rocking, fabulous, wonderful, simply brilliant... keep up the good work going...i simply loved the 'Dimples' ,'Bandar' bit in the update.. it was really very sweet, very cute...the fanfic is progressing very well... please do update soon..waiting for the next update very eagerly...😊
This was such a beautiful update Bheegi 😊 Loved the dance. Loved how you described the entire set up. I could actually visualise it.
Really looking forward to the next part.
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