Hey Bheegi,
You used 'Just the way you look tonight' - I like the song very much. Perfect for the setting. Who knows, some day Asad may remember this evening and the way his lady looked tonight.
Ambience was nicely set - song, dresses, sunset and moonrize. Everything well done.
You touched Asad's financial situation here and Zoya's casual dismissal of it. From the start of this FF, I have wondered how these two will fill the great financial divide between them. It's not very important and may not get explored in this FF. But, if you have any plans for this aspect, I am very curious.
And, what's the twist? Has Gafoor tracked her? Has something happened to Dilshaad? Has Asad's spy cover gone bust? I love to guess your story line 😉😊
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