FAASLE: Fan fic AsYa Part 19 pg 141 Jul 29 - Page 38

Originally posted by: delena90

This update was beautiful bheegi. I loved how you took the time to describe and set up the feel, mood and atmosphere that ultimately culminated with the dance. That was just really well done. I could imagine them sitting on a ship with moon glinting of the water and their faces. It really does set up this nice romantic feel to it. Great job!

Can't wait for the next update!

Originally posted by: AsyaManic

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OMG! Dis ws a bumper one. I loved it... Dey r slowly lost demselvs wid each other... I love how you describe each and every action... Great one
TWIST! Oh i love Twist. UPDT SOON

lovely update...especially with the two of them not sniping at each other every chance that they get...

oh my...new twist now m so eager to read it...thanks 4 pm nd this updt

This was amazing. I have been waiting all day for you to update. And the wait was worth it! Loved everything. The whole set up was beautiful and I could imagine the whole scenario. Fantastic job. Can't wait for next one and I wonder what the twist is gunna be. Can't wait. I wait for your updates like I wait for the episodes!

di here one statement is TRUE. Opposite Attracts. Clumsy Zoya nd OCD freak Asad .poles apart ,yet together . You wrote it brilliantly . I always loved your writing skills . "Tera Mera Rishta 'is one of my all time favorite nd i think the way you are developing this story ,would make its place next in my heart...

Oh, Bheegi, this was lovely! I love how gradually their romance is blossoming and I especially love how Zoya's bratiness is being toned down in a very realistic fashion : )

Originally posted by: rennie

lovely update...especially with the two of them not sniping at each other every chance that they get...

Originally posted by: Asyalover

oh my...new twist now m so eager to read it...thanks 4 pm nd this updt

Awww! So romantic😳