FAASLE: Fan fic AsYa Part 19 pg 141 Jul 29 - Page 36

OMG!!
I'm simply speechless after reading this part.
Words can't do enough justice to appreciate its beauty.
It was outstanding.
The flow was amazing and ASYA's bickering was really cute.
I liked the way Asad maintained his anger and didn't give into Zoe's nautankis.
Oh! The ladder scene was marvelous.It seemed soo magical.I could actually see ASYA infront of my eyes in that position.
Di do you know how much I love you for writing with such an excellence.
For me,this one was the best part of this ff till now.
I'm so excited for the dance now.
Plz continue soon.
PS-I hope u have noticed my edited comment on page 1
Take care!
Love u
Muah!
PS-My exams are starting from 30th,so I'll be a bit late in comments at times.Sorry.

Originally posted by: shanakyasharan

sigh wat a lovely update sangeeta! the ladder romance was just beyond words, i could feel them do that😳



romantic dance☺️ jaldi pesh kiya jaye pleej😊

Originally posted by: s120

Really enjoyed this chapter 😊

"Detached but earnest. There he was ' her protector, her bodyguard, her savior and her Mr. Khan, she chuckled as she signed 'Z' at the bottom of the page."

Loved this bit. So she's figued out that he'll rush to her rescue whenever she'll land up in trouble. Even earlier she said "aap mujhe girne thodi na denge."

I actually thought he'll reveal it to her here that he doesn't work for her abbu.

Now eagerly awaiting the romantic dance 😳

Originally posted by: Surya.Ravi

Very nice update...really interesting..keep up the good work going going... please do update soon...waiting for the next update eagerly...a bit caught up in work right now will give a bigger comment later...update soon..😊

Originally posted by: ..vidhi..

aha hint...now i will have to ponder over this along with the spoilers🤣

Originally posted by: Didi01

Wow! Beautifully written and I enjoyed reading every single word and details. I can't wait for the dance. Please update soon.

Originally posted by: crazy4KASH_AR

OMG!!
I'm simply speechless after reading this part.
Words can't do enough justice to appreciate its beauty.
It was outstanding.
The flow was amazing and ASYA's bickering was really cute.
I liked the way Asad maintained his anger and didn't give into Zoe's nautankis.
Oh! The ladder scene was marvelous.It seemed soo magical.I could actually see ASYA infront of my eyes in that position.
Di do you know how much I love you for writing with such an excellence.
For me,this one was the best part of this ff till now.
I'm so excited for the dance now.
Plz continue soon.
PS-I hope u have noticed my edited comment on page 1
Take care!
Love u
Muah!
PS-My exams are starting from 30th,so I'll be a bit late in comments at times.Sorry.

Originally posted by: bheegi

Thanks a lot di for the sweet reply.
Studies 😡
They don't allow me to enjoy QH properly these days when we get so many ASYAlicious moments. 😭
Your ff is really a saviour.
One of the purpose of coming on the forum is to check if u've updated this one or not.
Di I'm just a beginner in writing.I aspire to write like and some of the fantastic writers on IF someday.I wish that day may come soon. I wanna be an author in the my 50s 😳
Thanks a lot for understanding my problems regarding the delay in comments.
Love u
Muah!!
Jaldi jaldi update karo 😉 I'm a big despo of ur ff,u know 😆
🤗

@ Asma:

Superb part