FAASLE: Fan fic AsYa Part 19 pg 141 Jul 29 - Page 30

i cant believe it O_____o i spent ages to comment on this part And i just realised that i dunno where i posted it xD i guess i posted it on the wrong ff or os :S wht to do now -_-"
Anyway in short version i was saying tht the part was awsome and tht i loved it and tht it wwas too good and the complents just didnt end xD continue soon
wanna read more
Love, Laiba

di it was too short part .😕 i know aap kitna b likh lo ,i won't get enough . Awesome part . onec again ur magical words took me into Asya land . loved it .

this is one of my fauvorite ff...

interesting update Sangeetha..loved the Jet-Ski bit..Asad & Zoya are getting used to each other slowly and steadily..it is nice...the story is progressing really well...keep up the good work going...please do update soon..waiting for the next update eagerly..😊

Originally posted by: shanakyasharan

And then with a jerk, she accelerated the jet ski forward. Asad almost fell down but quickly regained his balance and held the support bar behind his seat firmly. Instead of moving ahead, they kept going in circles as if in a whirlpool. She yelled and screeched, "this jet ski doesn't work! Yeh aage kyun nahin jaa rahi Mr. Khan?"

Before he could reply, there was a loud splash, thud and wobble. They were toppled over, the jet ski made a loud gurgling sound in the water as it had turned upside down. Asad was buried under the jet ski.

🤣🤣i laughed my ass of at this part! lol

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im loving it sangeeta, read all d parts in one go yesterday! loved it! im so happy u started writing sumthing new after d previous os

Originally posted by: MisHumptyDumpty

QH will be the reason to my death, and this update will be the reason for tonight's dead.

Di, jo bhi kuch atma bacha tha mere andar woh bhi marr chuki hai! ☺️

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Originally posted by: Mayurnarti

amazing as it always is...👏

and jet ski scene lol...🤣

asad in bathtub wearing nothing but towel

conti soon...

nice story..pls do cont soon..

Wow! Sexy update!😆

Originally posted by: ..vidhi..

NOOO!!!! ;(
U know i was just wondering where is the link to next part...thought its in anothe thread or something.
Now i am stuck.i want to read more...plz can u complete it...i really loved it...its so awesome!!!!!
Please*puppy dog face*

PS-i already read definitely yes... Nd tera mera rishta...nd i loved them both sp. Def yes..
But i really want to read it had to be you :(