FAASLE: Fan fic AsYa Part 19 pg 141 Jul 29 - Page 13

Originally posted by: roses.09

I have a fan of your work and really happy to have come across ur ff on my fav. couple. Please add me to your pm list. Cant wait to read the nxt part! 😊

Originally posted by: jasw

Wonderful FF, bheegi! Reminded me of Dil hai ke manta nahi. One of my favorite movie!😊

Liked the twist, how Siddiqui became Farooqui! Aaah, Asad and his Ms. Farooqui.❤️ No other combination for me!

Asad is already feeling protective about her but Zoya has to make inroads!😆 Will wait for your updates regarding this! 😊

Originally posted by: neenabinu

loved it...

read all 3 parts in one go...

waiting for the next...

Originally posted by: Surya.Ravi

Sangeetha it is always so good to read one of your writings...I have already read this fanfics original with Angad, Kripa a long time back..and now reading Faasle yet again with Asad, Zoya and a few changes in the story i'am actually liking this very much...well i'am so looking forward for Asad and Zoya's journey on the ship...really very well written..keep up the good work going...as always your writing has bowled me over and left me in awe...really good going..please do update soon...waiting eagerly for the next update..😊

Originally posted by: Annu..

is it so easy to go scot free while carrying fake passport? she didn't get caught at NY airport nor at Barcelona..

Zoya reminds me of Pooja of DHKMN.. both are highly immature brat, run away from their house for a guy without thinking its consequences.. the difference is, Pooja wanted to marry a guy of her choice, and here Zoya didn't want to marry a guy of her father's choice..

but hero's characterization is completely different.. Aamir was over smart, intelligent, opportunist.. maukey pe chauka lagane waala.. but Asad is judgmental and egoistic.. it looks kinda funny how he is getting personal with her.. love the way Zoya is crushing his big ego.. aisa hi hona chahiye..😆

you are writing hindi or urdu here? bhaasha, shobha are hindi words.. in urdu its zabaan, zeb..

Originally posted by: pinkss

Hi Sangeeta...

I think i've read this FF of your's before with the characters of KYPH...plz correct me if i'm wrong...

It was one of my most fav. FF's ofcourse, so i cant be mistaken...though the main theme of that FF was distances due to religions, but here both the protoganists are Muslims right? Zoya and Asad, so i'd LOVE to read what exactly are the changes you're gonna bring into this famous FF :)

will comment again once i'm done reading :)

and Thank you so much for the PM!!

tc, lotsa love

JIA

Originally posted by: princessradhika

wow😊..loved ur ff..just read it in one go...nice concept..👏..ye siddique ka kuch nahi ho sakta, i thought he would be different here aur ye akram yaha bhi tapak pada.😡..loved asad & zoya's interaction..do continue soon...will wait...

Originally posted by: Starrydee

That was awesome 😳

Loved it

Asya nok-jhok was the best 😆

Asad felt the need to protect her

It makes me go all awww 😳

Ur US n Europe thing I could totally relate too

Having been stayed in US n visited London there is actually a lot of difference 😆

Continue sooon

I just can't wait 😃