This chapter was lovely Sangeeta. I loved your description of Bombay - it reminded me of my childhood and the places I used to visit.
Asad and Zoya's growing feelings for each other and their inability to control it completely was sweet and cute. I love Zoe's gift for Dilshaad and Asad's to her.
Can't wait to read the repercussions of the kiss.
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OMG! That was perfect. I read it twice in a go. Brilliant. You write so so beautifully man. Asad-Najma scene was cute. Loved Zoya's gift to Dilshaad. How could I not guess the painting?:( But that was so sweet and amazing. Their terrace scene was so well-written. I love how Zoya is so straight-up and doesn't hide her feelings at all! His first gift was so unexpected and amazing. I love how he wanted to see her jumping with joy but when she didn't he announced another gift for her. SO CUTE<3 Mumbai Darshan is wonderfully written. the way you have described all the places, their moments and everything is just lovely to read. I love how Zoya is hitting on him😆 Go girl! It's good to see how Asad was fighting the attraction and in the end gave in! THAT KISS! You made them KISS! How perfect was that? That was totally unexpected! You described it so well and beautifully. I read that part so many times. BEAUTIFUL in every sense! Can't wait to read the next part. I wonder how Asad's going to react after the kiss. I'm sure he'll distance himself once again-_- But he'll be leaving soon. It'll be interesting to see if he talks to her before leaving or not. UPDATE SOON Bheegi please! Can't wait!
The description of Bombay, the tonga ride - the reference to the evergreen number (Maang ke saath tumhara... ) and of course the kiss... Wonder what the aftermath will be.
Zoya & her painting 😆😆😆 ... Both Mother-Son have different perceptions of the painting 😆😆😆 Mr.Khan is seeing past...& Mother is seeing future😛😉
Mr.khan got reminded of the days 😆😆 he shudn't have asked boat ka idea kaha se aaya...Wasn't it obvious kaha se aaya 😉😆😆😆...
For once i also thot envelope had return tickets for Zoya 😆... but exhibition invitation that was very thotful of Asad 😃😃😃 ...hope he was not actually setting her up with Ayaan 😆😆😆...
Mumbai darshan 😃😛... more than that guess zoya enjoyed doing photoshoot of her model 😳😳 & all the best to Zoya 👍🏼...hope one day she gets to hear the words "Aashiqa ho toh Zoya farooqi jaisi ho" 😳 ...after all the hardwork she is putting in to get her love 😳😃
aww the end ☺️ hope it doesn't turn out a dream for either of them 😛😛😆 & if its real hope it doesn't distance two of them 😛 with either of them regretting 😊😊😊
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