I have no idea if you've read the poem called 'The Raven', but this story had such an uncanny similarity to it. The melancholy portrayed in the poem was here too. The loss of a loved one was there, too. Well written. 😊
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Absolutely loved your FF..It's so intriguing :)) The mystery surrounding her visit to India,Asad's sudden entry and his relationship with Aunt Amana is so so interesting :)) As I went on and on I couldn't help but run a million thoughts in my mind..Great work ;) Please continue soon and add me in your PM list :)
P.S - i actually got excited reading 1st part thinking how can it be so similar wth vamp diaries nd thn the 1st line of ur p.s... i thought woww... supernatural elements!! but u pour a bucket of chilled water over my excitement.. like seriously.. lol..😆😆
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