Originally posted by: Tacker_Holic
I loved the last two updates dear! They were mindblowing...so Pankhuri is staying at the Deewans in Mumbai and PaYa's friendship is sweetening. Pankhuri is defo attracted to Adi and is more open than Adi. Cant wait for more. Really liking the scenes you are creating which is making the story progress beautifully! Keep it up!
Chapter 7
At Deewan Mansion,
Adi: Mom we're home
Avantika: How was Mumbai, Pankhu?
Pankhu: It was beautiful Aunty. Just a bit too busy
Nanu: Now head off to bed.
Adi, Pankhu, Rubel, Kaira: Goodnight everyone
Everyone head back to their respective rooms. However, Pankhu is unable to sleep. She walks out to the Porch and sits on the staircase, enjoying the breeze. Suddenly, she hears someone call her name. She turns around.
Avantika: Pankhu, are you okay? I saw you leaving the room so I followed you. Is everything fine?
Pankhu: I can't seem to sleep.
Avantika: Come with me Pankhu.
Avantika heads back to Pankhu's room.
Avantika: Come and sit here with me. I know you miss your family back at home! Here, call home!
Pankhu looks at Avantika and immediately gives her a hug. She later calls home and speaks with her family. After ending the call,
Pankhu: Avantika Aunty, thank you for solving my problem. I feel much better now.
Avantika: It's no longer Aunty. Call me Mom just like Adi. I can't replace Ambika but I can definitely fill in the gap!
Pankhu and Avantika embrace. Avantika then tucks Pankhu into bed, before kissing her forehead. She then leaves.
Unknown to the both of them, in the dark corner of the corridor, a figure witnessed the happenings.
The next day was spent as normal, getting ready for classes next day and completing assignments. However, Adi was quite shocked to see Avantika fond of Pankhu. Being the only child, Adi never had had to fight for attention. Today, however, was a total opposite. Eventually, by that night, Adi was sick and tired of the sudden attention on Pankhu. Despite various efforts to explain things, Adi refused to listen to anyone and headed back to his room to be alone. Despite various efforts to sleep, he simply could not. He headed to his balcony to take a breather.
At the balcony, he heard a voice.
Avantika: Pankhu, don't worry too much and stop crying. Adi will be fine.
Pankhu: But Mom, I didn't mean to hurt Adi. In fact, I don't even know what is my mistake that Adi is showing so much of hatred on all of us. Maybe...
Avantika: Adi will be okay soon! He is just not used to me showering attention to others.
Pankhu: Maybe, I should just leave mom. Just give me a week and I'll leave. I never wanted to be a burden to anyone! But it really looks like Adi doesn't like me here!
Adi felt very bad upon hearing the conversation. He waits till Avantika leaves and goes over to Pankhu's room. He slowly pushes the door to see Pankhu crying at the corner, her back facing the door.
Adi: Pankhu
Pankhu wipes her tears and pretends as if all is fine.
Pankhu: Adi, what brings you here? It's late, shouldn't you be sleeping?
Adi: Oh really? Then shouldn't you be sleeping also?
Pankhu: Adi, I think you should leave now. If someone sees us together, they might have wrong thoughts.
Adi: Pankhu, let me say what I want to first and I'll leave.
He turns Pankhu around, looks at her in the eyes.
Adi: Pankhu, I'm really sorry. I don't know why I behaved like that but I really didn't mean to hurt you. I never thought that you would miss your family so much. In fact...
Pankhu: It's okay Adi. Forget it. Now get to bed.
Adi: Not until you've forgiven me.
Pankhu: Okay Adi. I've forgiven you. Now go and sleep.
Adi: Promise me something first.
Pankhu: What is it now? Adi, someone might come
Adi: Promise me you'll never have the idea of leaving. I heard you tell Mom that in a week's time, you'll look for another place. You are not going anywhere Pankhuri.
Pankhu: Okay Adi. I'm not leaving.
Adi: Great. Goodnight Pankhu
Pankhu: Goodnight Adi
Adi leaves Pankhu's room happily.
Originally posted by: Tacker_Holic
Love the way Adi got jealous of Pankhuri for the attention she was getting! Love the bond between Pankhu and Avantika! She tucked her into bed...so sweet! Loved the way Adi apologised and made sure she would stay at DM and not move...loving the progression of the story!
Also you can call me Sonia!
Originally posted by: NISHADEEP
I'm really loving this FF...reminds me of the old days of pkdh...
loving the adi-pankhu-avantu bonding...super keep it up!!!!
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