Wings of imagination(open up and behold me a poem pg 28) - Page 8

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Posted: 13 years ago
#71
OVER THE CENTURIES

Over the centuries i roamed in darkness
with dark desires n dark insight.
But when i met u my sunshine
i found myself,i found my light.

Over the centuries i walked as dead
with nothing 2 loose nd nothing to gain.
But when i met u my soulmate
i felt alive,i lived again.

Over the centuries i lusted 4 blood
my greatest love,my greatest need.
But when i met u my only drug
u became my greatest need indeed.

Over the centuries i was harsh n cold
lacking humanity nd lacking emotion.
But when i met u my strong hold
my dead heart leapt up n showed motion.

Over the centuries i roamed alone
i was careless,i was carefree.
But when i met u my true love
u gained me,ur love bound me.

Guys its just a try,. very short poem.
After such wonderful response,i thought of writing again.


With love srija.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#72

Another brilliant one, dear!!
Partner !! Hospital mei doctor ne kia khilaya hai...jo itni multitalented hogai...lol
superb..loved it
the happiness of meeting ur love & the lonely life spent has been described beautifully..
Take care
luv u...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#73
It's really another great one dear.
Glad you wrote more.
Keep on writing!
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Posted: 13 years ago
#74
Awesome srija lovely👏
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Posted: 13 years ago
#75
thanks alicia.wil update one everyday.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#76
Wonderful Poem.. Written perfectly..!

Each sentence para is so true!! You are becoming marvelous writer Srija!!
Thanks for the PM.. Write more poems!😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
#77

Originally posted by: sohiniluvsabhay

Awesome srija lovely👏

thanks sohini.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#78
Dii wonderful poem it was indeed very beautiful loved it...yesterday u poure out pia's heart nd 2day u made us feel abhay's death heart beating it was really good!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
#79
hey shrish both of ur poems were fab
sorry for getting late i was preparing for the updates of my ff
i always knew that you are a fabulous writer but never guessed that you such a nice poet too
please continue writing
my best wishes are with you for ur good health
may you recover soon and return back with a bang

May the angels protect you
May the sadness forget you
May happiness Be around you
May ALLAH bless you forever

My Best Wishes are for you today, tomorrow and forever

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Omg srija its perfect. U described abhays feeling very well.
U know what u r awesome poet 👏 . Hey I will read ur ff later.
U continue ur poems as well. Bye n tc
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