Wings of imagination(open up and behold me a poem pg 28) - Page 18

Title wings of imagination is really good... Nd do i hav to say anything abt ur poem?? I think u urself kno its magical...

Wow srija! Loved the poems, u r tooo good

Hai srija... Awesome poem... really i loved it...

thanks for the pm...

@khusi:thanks khusi.well the title u gve was the best.i lovd it n used it.thanks a bunch 4 the title.

@alicia:thanks yar.wil update soon.

@madhuri16.:straight 4rm the heart i luv u too n ur comment.thanks madht.y is everyone thanking hospital bed hun?ya wil continue writing.

@prerna:u too.mujhe toh aab sachme hospital bed ki puja karni padegi.he he.anyways thanks 4 liking my poem.luv u too.

@TISA07:no need 2 apolosise dear.it doesnt matter u commented or nt.u liked my poem thats all i want.ur words said everything dear no need 2 find more words.thanks yar.

@sohiniluvsabhay:thanks sohini.pata nahi jab ek word bheje me ajata hai toh uska rhyming words vi apne aap ajate hai.

@sonia:aww..soni my dear partner lv u 4 ur comment.everything i say,i say it frm heart.he he.glad it touched ur heart.

@mossgreen:thanks dear.glad it touched u.ya wil defo continue writing.

@dikshi92:hi dikshi.welcome my new buddy.thanks yar.all i need is ur love nd support.

@seabeauty:aww..thats really sweet of u bt i dnt have any intention of being poetess let alone famous.

@bebO,priya.1,disha_Maan.GC,Akshi0019,pratiksha2009,neytiri,HAFRA.:Thank u guys 4 loving my work.

@shivanirajput:thanks shivani.
The words frm my heart touched urs
that made me really happy
2 have such nice readers
i consider myself damn lucky.

@princess_xeelan:thanks tanzie.m really glad that u read my poem despite ur bg schedule.u really made my day wid ur comment.

@snitchseeker.:hey harry potter.sorry snigs ur username remind me of HP.anyways u dnt need 2 find words 2 describe ma poem.i understand wat u were trying 2 say.he he.

@cuteteddy:thanks deepa.wel ya even prerna n madhu r using dat joke.kuch naya try karo.ur one word LOVELY is enough 4 me.m nt dat greedy 2 want more.

@piyali:kitni taarif karti ho yar.thoda kam kiya karo.mujhe 7th heaven me mat vejna warna lautkar nahi aapaungi.anyways thanks 4 lovely comment.ya wil defo continue.

@aamirkhanfan:thanks dear.actually its rather straight frm my mind than heart he he.

@abhiyan_soni:sonu thanks dear.itni perfect vi nahi thhi.ya wil defo continue.aab toh mujhe poem likhna accha lagne laga hai.

@shafaq_abhiya:ya i liked the title myself.all the credit goes 2 khusi.c suggested it.thank u 4 considering my poem magical.

@MiniMouse810:thanks aanchal.if u say so then i'll believe dat i can write well.he he.

@sanaR1108:thanks yar.m nt too gud just good.

Yipee m discharged.no hospital bed now.

open up and behold me

The wind is wishpering against the tree
roaming around wild n free.
Ur company is treasure 2 me.
My heart n soul is tribute 2 thee.
Its a moment of passion n glee.
Just open up ur reserved heart nd see.

The moon is shining above us
winking at me nd making me blush.
The silvery light is painting to gloss.
Ur hypnotic eyes won the toss.
Its a moment of passion nd glee.
Just open up ur reserved heart nd see.

The light breeze is playing wid my hair
nd making me shiver square nd fair.
Y do u pretend nd hide though u care.
Y do u create a barrier.
Its a moment of passion nd glee.
Just open up ur reserved heart nd see.

The dim glow of the candle light.
This moment of love in romantic site.
Come on hold me,embrace me tight.
Dnt think its wrong,its absolutely right.
Its the moment of passion nd glee.
Just open up ur reserved heart nd see.

U taught me 2 love,u taught me 2 hope.
We're destined 2gether tied by the rope.
Whatever is ur secret i can cope.
Just trust me darling,dnt try 2 shove.
Its a moment of passion nd glee.
Just open up ur reserved heart nd see.

U confronted with danger 4 my sake.
Ur harshness nd hatred,i know its fake.
This beautiful site around the lake.
The silence around us is the piece of cake.
Its a moment of passion,love n glee.
Just open up ur heart nd behold me.

Guys hope u like it.waiting 4 ur response.
With love
srija.

great poem plz update soon

again srija a beautiful poem
and this time it was pia speaking her heart out
u r a gr8 poet srija truly deserve a big🤗
please continue writing even if the show ends

lovely poems...

Its amazing again thnx for the pm😊

Congo dii nw no hospital bed nd tasteless food bt still u need to take care of urself... Nd nw abt ur poem it was the best poem u hav written it was really touching