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*Anju* thumbnail
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Posted: 18 years ago
#11
uii I lovveee twists 😉 i will really like to write after that twist
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Posted: 18 years ago
#12

😆 Ok..I'll prolly write it either later on today, or early tommorow..BTW..what's the name of our fanfic?
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Posted: 18 years ago
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just name it yourself i couldn't think of any so have left it on you 😆 do inform me so i'll edit my post 😉
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Posted: 18 years ago
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JA OKEY OR what about that kyon na hum If KE MEMBERS SE HI EK NAAM PUTHCLE and the name with the most votes will be the name of aur fanfic?? I KNOW BAD IDEA 😆 😆 😆
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Posted: 18 years ago
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no anju good idea but first we need to have 2-3 names and then create a poll nice idea

ok so lets think of some names
what about Joint Fan-Fict (i know very bad suggestion) 😆
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Posted: 18 years ago
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hmm what about do dilon ki dastan?? 😆 I DONT THINK IT MATCHES TO AUR FANFIC
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Posted: 18 years ago
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no maybe something like "hamare dil ke radhika aur krishna" 😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
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okey guys here is the next part Im sorry guys but mere first part humesha bad hota hai 😭 so lets hope you wont mind 😳

Part 2

After A few Houres all Ranas came back home...

po*nima:Kya hua???

Akshay: kuch nahin ma radhika humein nahin mili...

Kaushalya Devi : in tears hey bhagwan kahan hogi humari beti aur kis hal mein hogi 😭 😭 ???...

Akshay: Dadi dont worry meine har jagan pata lagaya hai bus stations and railway station wo is city se bahar nahin gahi hai is ka matlab hum ushe bahut jald hi dhundlenge...

Vikrant Singh Rana : Koi sarurat nahin hai usko dhundne ki mar gahi hai Radhika humare liye aj ke bad is ghar mein uska koi naam tak nahin lega samje tum sab and leaves 😡

po*nima: ab kya hoga meri beti ka??? wo is sheher mein kisi ko nahin janti aur aapnon ne use marr dala???

Dhanraj Rana :po*nIMA!!!! tumen suna nahin babuji ne kya kaha??? aj ke bad uska naam is ghar mein nahin liya jahega...

AT rathores house:

kRishna: sapna ji mujhe aap se kuch....

Radhika : dekhie mujhe aap se kuch kehne hai mera naam sapna nahin aur nahi mein shaadi shuda hun mein sapna ko janti tak nahin thi jab uska accident hua ha mein uska bag hospital mein dena chati thi aur dab hi mere dadaji babuji aur bhaya ne mujhe dehkliya tha aur jab mein unse bhag rahi thi aap ke dadaji ne mujhe bachaliya tha... mera naam Radhika hai aur meine socha ki jab tak mere partivar wale mujhe dundte rahenge mein jahan par chup jahungi par agar aap ko lagta hai ki mein thik nahin hun to aap jakar sab ko meri sachai bata dejie...

Krishna : mein jeh to nahin janta hun ki aap yeh sab kyon kar rahi ho I mean aapne parivar se kyon bhag rahin hai paar mujhe aap ki aankon mein sachaj dikai deti hai aur isiliye mein kisi ko kuch nahin batahunga ...

Radhika : thx thank you very very much krischna ji

Krischna : krischna

Radhika: Ji??

kRISCHNA ; deko meain nahin chata hun ki tum mujhe ji se adress karo plzz i think mein tumse inta bhi bada nahin hun infact i think we are in the same age..

Radhika smiles and wants to say something but just than she notice Krishnas Massi on the door step....

both krischna and radhika are schocked....

so guys only divya can tell you what happens next... 😉 😉
HOPE YOU GUYS LIKED MY PART ITS A SMAL ONE BUT I HOPE YOU STIL LIKE IT AND SORRY IF MY HINDI were sooo bad .... 😭


Edited by *Anju* - 18 years ago
Nishtha thumbnail
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Posted: 18 years ago
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no i liked it it seems its going on the same line as the serial.. kwelll can't wait to read next version... 😉
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Posted: 18 years ago
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noooooooooooooooooooooooooooo OHH GUYS WHAT A BAD PART PLZZ help me I cant delate it it doesnt work 😭 bad bad bad
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