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Posted: 18 years ago
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OK everyone here we go I am starting from today the joint fan-fict

For those who don't know what i am talking about : From today Me, Divya_p, and *Anju* will write fan-ficts together this means today i am writing and then divya and Anju will continue with the story and then again me

Hope you understood it .

So lets start

the story of fan-fict starts with Radhika calling poornima to tell her where she is and poornima spots uday (just where it ended in the serial on Thursday)

Poornima gets scared and thinks

poornima - hey Bhagwan abb mein kya karu

suddenly gets idea and tells Radhika

poornima - haan ji kaun chahiye kya dekiye kuch sunayi nahi de raha he ...

radhika realises that someone has come so she asks

Radhika - kya hua koyi hai vahan

Purnima- haan .. kya ..

Radhika says she'll call later and hangs up

Poornima turns and uday asks her

uday - kiska phone tha (looking at purnima very suspisously

purnima - (gets tensed) wohh... kuch sunayi nahi de raha tha to pata hi nahi chala ki kiska phone tha

uday - (thinks a bit) thik hai koyi baat nahi phir karega jo bhi hoga

purnima - haan ...

uday - Radhika ka koyi phone aya ?

Purnima- ...ummm .. nahi ..uska... uska koyi phone nahi aya

purnima starts crying

purnima - pata nahi kahan hogi meri beti

purnima leaves

uday leaves as well

Yash was seeing everything and thinks

Yash - kuch garbad to hai ...... kahin aisa to nahi ki bhabhi ko pata hai ki radhika kahan hai???

yash goes to purnima, purnima is in her room alone

yash - bhabhi ...

purnima - app kahiye kuch kaam tha?

yash - bhabhi, radhika ghar chod kar kyun gayi ??

(meanwhile all ranas are out to search for radhika)

purnima tells the entire story to yash and says now even i don't know where she is, she called to say her whereabouts but uday came and i had to hang up..

yash - hmm ... bhabhi aapne bilkul thik kiya use jane ko keh kar .. lekin abb .... aap ek kaam kijeye ga abb agar uska phone aye to use kahiye ga ki woh apna address de aur mein kud use wahan milne jaunga aur dekhte hai kya ho sakta hai....

purnima - thik hai.

yash leaves

Ok divya you can continue now 😳

Hope you liked the story.

Edited by pari0706 - 18 years ago

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Posted: 18 years ago
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well i don't know bout shows TRPS but this can beat even Kyunki!! well done.. parii totally loved it.. πŸ‘
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Posted: 18 years ago
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well nish thanks a lot for the compliment but i thought you won't like it as there are no radhika and krishna sequence in my today's fanfict πŸ˜†
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: pari0706

well nish thanks a lot for the compliment but i thought you won't like it as there are no radhika and krishna sequence in my today's fanfict πŸ˜†

nah.. i loved it..yaar..waise bhi u can't get to see KRISHNA or Radhka in fan ficπŸ˜†..so i m totally ok with it!!! n story should be gud otherwise even dey can't do nething ryteπŸ˜‰

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: nishtha

nah.. i loved it..yaar..waise bhi u can't get to see KRISHNA or Radhka in fan ficπŸ˜†..so i m totally ok with it!!! n story should be gud otherwise even dey can't do nething ryteπŸ˜‰

πŸ˜†OH thank GOD you're fine πŸ‘i am very happy πŸ˜†

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Posted: 18 years ago
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me tooo. but the real reason of it.. is very..personnel just kidding πŸ˜†
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Posted: 18 years ago
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it was awsome........... i would love to know what happens next............ keep it up
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Thx well we all are waiting for the next scene!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Awesome Pari..I'll continue it in a bit! πŸ˜‰
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Posted: 18 years ago
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ya divya continue it soon i am waiting to know what twist you give to it now πŸ˜† 😳
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