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Posted: 18 years ago
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Umn...didn't know whether I should carry on in the sticky or a new post...so I just did it here 😊

Ok so we know that Radha is getting married to Rohit..as I said before...it's not taking place in the village because I wrote the previous one before watching the India episodes so the story in here is completely different from what's happening in the show 😛

It's the wedding day and Radha's Dad, sister, Jiju and Sonu (😳) are making last minute changes to the mandap annd decorations. Everyone is looking very happy.

In Radha's room, she is all ready, looking very pretty and is standing by the window, crying.

Radha: (To herself) Why am I crying like this? It's not like I am marrying a bad guy...Rohit is very nice, and he'll keep me very happy. Then why am I wishing I am marrying Shyaam and not him?!

Suddenly, Shyaam appears beside her (in her imagination.)

Shyaam: (Putting his hand on her shoulder) Because you love me.

She turns to him, shocked.

Radha: No, I don't luv you! I don't...

Shyaam: (Smiling) Then why are you thinking abt me, and not your pyaara Rohit?

Radha: (Turns away, walking across the room) Because..because..

Shyaam: Because?

Radha: Because...I don't know! Just go away from here! Go Shyaam...GO!

She turns, screaming out 'go!' and there is nobody there.

She breaks down, crying and sinking to her knees.

Radha: Haan Shyaam, mein tumse pyaar karti hoon. Mein tumse pyaar karti hoon Shyaam...pyaar karti hoon.

"Itni si baat ko kehne mein...itni dher kyun lagayi?"

She looks up, tears still streaming down her face. It is Shyaam.

He kneels down, and holds her face in his hands.

Shyaam: Chalo Radha....chalo mere saath, hum dono yahan se bagenge, apni ek nayi zindagi basayenge...sirf tum or mein. Chalo Radha...chalo.

He takes her hand and pulls her up and walks to the window but she pulls back.

Shyaam: What...what now?

Radha shakes her head,

Radha: Nahiin Shyaam, pyaar ka matlab sirf pane ki nahiin hain. Mein tumhare saath baag nahiin sakti, mein apni parivaar ki saath aisa nahiin karsakti, Rohit ki saath nahiin karsakti aaisa.

Shyaam: (Getting angry) Shyaama!

Radha suddenly gets a flashback...w/ the PKDN theme music in the background!

Enjoy..😛..will be back later w/ more..had to rush to the optician to get contacts so finished the fanfic quickly..Divya x


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Posted: 18 years ago
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👏 👏 👏

wow!...hmmm...i like the scene of raadha & shyaam... and the way raadha gets the flashes...& w/ the background music..hmm...i can imagine it already..👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
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well divs... in simple words
I LOVED IT WOW.. I WISH THE SCENE WHERE SHYAM HOLDS RADHA'S FACE COME TRUE, it would be soo nice i can't wait for the time when Radha will confess her love to Shyam.. oh god i get... s oexcited even thinking of it.. 😳 and Divs u rock sweetie just rock!!! 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
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😆 Thanks you guys! Glad you liked it! 😃 Will continue a little later..😛
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Posted: 18 years ago
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omg its awesome..... 👏 👏
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