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Posted: 18 years ago
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Umn..I dint know how 2 carry on the nxt 1 bc it's been soo long since I've updated..soo I'm here w/ a new FanFic..a completely different 1 this time!

Ok..so..FIY, It is the day of Radha and Rohit's shaadi, Shyaam has given up, and says 2 himself that if God really wants us 2 meet, then Radha will cum 2 me herself..

(BTW, I'm not entirely sure of wots been happening in the show in India, jus been skimming thru the updates, so if my FanFic starts in a situation which is completely diff from wots been happening in the show, then 4give me!)

Ok, so Radha is in her room getting ready in her wedding dress, when Sweety cums in,

Sweety: Radha, jaldi karo, bharaat anewali hain or tum ab tak tayaar nahi howi?

She sees Radha's face looking sad and puts her hand on her shoulder.

Sweety: Kya hua Radha, aaj tumhari shaadi hain, lekin tumhari chehre par khushi hone ki bajai, dukh hain?

Radha: (Smiling weakly) Nahiin Sweety, aisi koi baat nahi. Bas yunhi, Papa, Sonu or Didi se bicharne ki gham hain.

Sweety: (Shaking her head) Main tumhe janti ho Radha. Haan, tumhe acha nahiin lagraha hain sabko chorke, lekin koi aur vaje hain, jo tum mujhse chuparahe ho.

She stops and thinks for a while.

Sweety: Kahiin..kahiin yeh Shyaam..

Radha suddenly gets up.

Radha: (Intrerrupting Sweety) Mujhe tayar hona hain Sweety, mein abhi ayi.

She walks into the bathroom, and closes the door behind her, leaving Sweety upset and confused.

MEANWHILE..

Shyaam is sitting in his room, crying silently to himself, looking at Radha's picture. His mum cums into the room and sits beside him, wiping his tears.

Ma: Aise himath nahi harthe beta, ab bhi waqt hain. Roklo use..uski zindagi ki sabse bari galathi karne se roklo unhe.

Shyaam shakes his head, shattered.

Shyaam: Nahiin Ma, woh kabhi nahin manegi. Bahut senliya hain maine Ma..bahut. Ab agar kuch hogi..tho Radha ki marzi se hogi. Mein dekhana chahta hoon, ki unki duniyaan mein (God's world) pyaar sacha hain ya jhoota.

He points to the ceiling indicating God.

Shyaam: Dekho tho Ma, woh mujhe kitna satharaha hain. Janta hain woh, ki main Radha ki bina nahiin jeesakta..lekin phir bi..hum dono ko milne seh rokraha hain. Ab mein kuch nahiin karoonga. Agar hum dono ke pyaar sacha hain..jo mujhe pura yakiin hai ki hai..tho Radha khudh mari paas ayegi. Aur woh be, shaadi hone se pehle.

Ma: Aur agar woh nahiin ayi tho..?

Shyaam: (Looking at the murti (statue) of Radha-Krishna) Tho is duniyan mein, pyaar, mohobbat, rishte...sab jhoot hai.

Ma: (smiling) Mera beta itna samajhdaar hogaya hain.

She walks to the door and turns back to him.

Ma: Tum shaadi par arahe ho nah?

Shyaam: (Smiling) Kyun na ayoonga...Radha apni Shyaam ki intazaar karahi hain.


To be continued..(and this time I promise it will be within 1-2 days! Last time I was really busy w/ school work..but now I'm on holidays. I'm not writing 2 much now bc its late and I'm kinda tired! Lolz so..kal tak intazaar kijiye!)

Divya 😛

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Radha apni Shyaam ki intazaar karahi hain.

I'm not 2 sure whether it's supposed 2 be apni or apna..so plz correct me if it's wrong! 😊
Edited by divya_p - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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well to say the least.. I LOVED IT DIVZ JUST ADORED IT..!!!! 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Lolz thanks guys! 😊
Edited by divya_p - 18 years ago
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