Kaise Batayen, Kyun Tumko Chahen:PKB FF update p18 - Page 6

The_May_Rose

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Posted: 14 years ago

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Originally posted by: vista90pro

One more quick question to all my readers and please don't take this to mean anything more than a clarification, I certainly don't mean to offend anyone. I think many of you are from outside India and thus may have Hindi as a second language, so do you think I should include the meanings of some of the more hard Hindi/Urdu words used in the dialogues?

Like astitva = existence, being

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mukammal = complete

Again, just a question, no offence intended.😊

Thank you.

Bless Vista😆.....Don't worry no one will be offended.....But I don't think you need to put the meaning in, unless the other readers want them.....Those words really add to the beauty of the scene......This reminds me of the time we were dicussing Shanky's words ' Latait' and ' Akarah', it was a riot on the forum😆......He said them in the 'Chotela sar' scene😆🤣.....

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Vistaa

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Posted: 14 years ago

#52

May,

I know......that scene and the ensuing discussion on IF was a hoot.....and "lathait. akhara" were so solidly UP Hindi ...made my day to hear Vivan spout them with such ease....😃Though I still think "chotela" was coined by them /creatives on the sets.....lol😃😃😃. I had never heard the word before!!!😛

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Vistaa

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Posted: 14 years ago

#53

Originally posted by: curry-sistah

np; don't worry Ur a talented writer⭐️ so i know it wont be hard for u to come up with the next part(s). :)

thanx.... :) lakers are out for revenge!!! hopefully they can put their best game on and creme the celtics . :) go lakers!!! 😆 Who are you rooting for?

Rooting for.....Orlando Magic 😭😭😭😭😭

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vasudha

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Posted: 14 years ago

#54

absolutely beautiful visata...u brought prasha alive ..i could almost see vivan and kritika mouthing the words....please please do continue...i want some nice romantic scenes between prasha now that both know they are in love...naughty shank can be back...please give us the closure of prasha wedding and beyond...

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Vistaa

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Posted: 14 years ago

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Originally posted by: IFaddictinUS
absolutely beautiful visata...u brought prasha alive ..i could almost see vivan and kritika mouthing the words....please please do continue...i want some nice romantic scenes between prasha now that both know they are in love...naughty shank can be back...please give us the closure of prasha wedding and beyond...

Thanks Vasu, so happy you liked it...😊

To be honest, my mind is going in hundred different directions, trying to decide what comes next in this....🤢 but I will plod on and hopefully will find PraSha heaven soon😉😉

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Ekaloa

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Posted: 14 years ago

#56

WOW looks like the drama yet to start, its very well written, needs to continue, some times well written episodes are better than TV, yet to prove, I never watch dramas, but PKB was one drama really stuck me to watch and now this written drama seems a continuation to me.

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Vistaa

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Posted: 14 years ago

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Originally posted by: Ekaloa
WOW looks like the drama yet to start, its very well written, needs to continue, some times well written episodes are better than TV, yet to prove, I never watch dramas, but PKB was one drama really stuck me to watch and now this written drama seems a continuation to me.

Wow, thank you Ekaloa 😊. Your praise is much appreciated and encourages me to write😃

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Ekaloa

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Posted: 14 years ago

#58

Vista, I dont want dilute your excellent ideas, but many of us like PraSha a happy ending forever, in that sense its important Shashank gets his life back too. The drama needs to clarify why Subaash did what he did, is that because of Rai's instructed to do so, that makes sense and clear his name So Shashank get his father back and Pratheeksha will get father in law too. There is no one to loose as Rai is not part of that family,and Rai is the one always made trouble to separate them.

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The_May_Rose

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Posted: 14 years ago

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Originally posted by: Ekaloa
Vista, I dont want dilute your excellent ideas, but many of us like PraSha a happy ending forever, in that sense its important Shashank gets his life back too. The drama needs to clarify why Subaash did what he did, is that because of Rai's instructed to do so, that makes sense and clear his name So Shashank get his father back and Pratheeksha will get father in law too. There is no one to loose as Rai is not part of that family,and Rai is the one always made trouble to separate them.

I would also like Shashank to get his life back and nice comments Ekaloa😊.....

I think Subash has motive enough for wanting Raunak out of the way.....Remember he wanted to get Sumo and Shanky married to help his business....Also we know Shanky's Aunty ran away from her marriage, the Malhortra's business and family suffered....Because of this Subash might still be bitter....Maybe Vikram Rai also knew about Raunak and wanted him out of Ariana's life, but would he let go of the fact that the accident killed Sumo?......

Vista you hinted that PraSha are going to tell the family about their relationship now.....Well Biyoya could insist on meeting Shanky family....Subash will rant.....Pratz feels split between Shanky and wanting acceptance.....Miland offended and protective over his sisters marriage......Shashank cross over Prateeksha's thinking about everyone esle's happiness....Prateeksha reasuring Shashank how much she loves him😍

Sorry Vista, I am getting carried away.....But you can see what a gem of a concept, the creatives just didn't understand how to use....P.S. Go with whatever you think is right, these are just my thoughts and I don't want to take you in a diffrent direction from your own thoughts😊......

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Vistaa

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Posted: 14 years ago

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Originally posted by: The_May_Rose

I would also like Shashank to get his life back and nice comments Ekaloa😊.....

I think Subash has motive enough for wanting Raunak out of the way.....Remember he wanted to get Sumo and Shanky married to help his business....Also we know Shanky's Aunty ran away from her marriage, the Malhortra's business and family suffered....Because of this Subash might still be bitter....Maybe Vikram Rai also knew about Raunak and wanted him out of Ariana's life, but would he let go of the fact that the accident killed Sumo?......

Vista you hinted that PraSha are going to tell the family about their relationship now.....Well Biyoya could insist on meeting Shanky family....Subash will rant.....Pratz feels split between Shanky and wanting acceptance.....Miland offended and protective over his sisters marriage......Shashank cross over Prateeksha's thinking about everyone esle's happiness....Prateeksha reasuring Shashank how much she loves him😍

Sorry Vista, I am getting carried away.....But you can see what a gem of a concept, the creatives just didn't understand how to use....P.S. Go with whatever you think is right, these are just my thoughts and I don't want to take you in a diffrent direction from your own thoughts😊......

🥳🥳 Finally, some audience suggestions and participation....love it. Thank you Ekaloa and May...ideas are awesome.

Here's my take....to my mind the tale of two fathers in PKB boiled down to just this: Vikram Rai and his shenanigans stemmed purely from his love for Araina and his fear that he would lose her to her real family.....now Subhash Malhotra was a different cup of tea altogether....his machinations were a result of his greed ...he was ready to essentially sell his son to get money, power and prestige that came with the Rai name...May, your point about his sister and her elopement makes great sense too👏

But Ekaloa, your point about Prateeksha getting a pa-in-law is a very worthy one 👏cause she grew up without a father figure.......h'mmmmmmm

Lots of food for thought and thank you

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