Kaise Batayen, Kyun Tumko Chahen:PKB FF update p18 - Page 5

Anushka

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Posted: 14 years ago

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HELLLLOOOOOOOOO again!! 😃
I'm so sorry I was unable to comment on ur last update 😔!!! But YAY!!!! I'm first to comment on this one. I REALLY loved this chapter!!!! It was so totally PraSha!!! 😍 That's exactly what pratiksha could've said, and I thank you for such a great update!!!! 👏
To be continued? OF COURSE YES!!!!!!!

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The_May_Rose

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Posted: 14 years ago

#42

👏👏👏I just finished reading, that was perfect and I could just picture them😍.....There was purity and beauty in the PraSha scene, just as it should have been. Shashank and Prateeksha's reactions were just right too.....Well worth the wait and thank you for the kind words Vista.....All of us who come to the forum keep it alive and your FF has played a part in that too😃......

Should you continue, what do you think?.......Yes ofcourse!......

Going to read it again😊.....

P.S.@ To all PKB forum members - Please visit the ' PKB member count ' thread and press the like button in the second post, thanks!

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naththu

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Posted: 14 years ago

#43

wow vista this part is gr8👏. Really loved the prasha scene😍.

OFCOURSE, IT HAS TO BE CONTINUED😊

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Vistaa

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Posted: 14 years ago

#44

Thank you so much ...really appreciate all of you who read and doubly appreciate those of you who liked it and took the time and trouble to comment. You make this really worthwhile, so thank you.😊😊😊😊 I was nervous that I had made a hash of the PraSha scene,😕😕😕, so I am glad that you all liked it.😳

Any suggestions where this should go now....now that PraSha are united?😆😆😆

Thanks once again.

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The_May_Rose

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Posted: 14 years ago

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Originally posted by: vista90pro

Thank you so much ...really appreciate all of you who read and doubly appreciate those of you who liked it and took the time and trouble to comment. You make this really worthwhile, so thank you.😊😊😊😊 I was nervous that I had made a hash of the PraSha scene,😕😕😕, so I am glad that you all liked it.😳

Any suggestions where this should go now....now that PraSha are united?😆😆😆

Thanks once again.

Don't be nervous Vista you have a way with words and you re-create PraSha and PKB well....The PraSha scene was perfect, nothing was out of charactor👍🏼. Regarding the rest of the story, well the hint you gave at the end was good, just go with the flow and there are loose ends from the siblings too. There is plenty of material for you to work with. Take you time and trust in your ability😊......

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Posted: 14 years ago

#46

this was perfect!!!!!!!!!!!

loved the PraSha reunion. this is how it should have been!

and yes please continue!!!!!

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Vistaa

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Posted: 14 years ago

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Originally posted by: curry-sistah
this was perfect!!!!!!!!!!!

loved the PraSha reunion. this is how it should have been!

and yes please continue!!!!!

Curry-sistah,

😃😃Thanks for your vote of confidence and I am really glad you liked it!!! Now, if only I could get my thoughts together, and decide where to begin the next part,🤔🤔😉😉😉

And by the way, congrats on the game 6 win and all the best for the game with Boston Celtics 😊😊

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Vistaa

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Posted: 14 years ago

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Originally posted by: The_May_Rose

Don't be nervous Vista you have a way with words and you re-create PraSha and PKB well....The PraSha scene was perfect, nothing was out of charactor👍🏼. Regarding the rest of the story, well the hint you gave at the end was good, just go with the flow and there are loose ends from the siblings too. There is plenty of material for you to work with. Take you time and trust in your ability😊......

Aww May, you are so sweet ...thank you😳😳. As you know, I started this to give a proper ending to PraSha love story..... that I think was accomplished in this last part. But I guess, there are still some loose ends and maybe a bit more loving confessional by Prateeksha will not hurt😆😆😉

We need to ensure Shashank gets back all the love that he showered on her, don't we?😛

Though how I will write more of all this lovey-dovey stuff, I don't know😕😳 Will try.

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Vistaa

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Posted: 14 years ago

#49

One more quick question to all my readers and please don't take this to mean anything more than a clarification, I certainly don't mean to offend anyone. I think many of you are from outside India and thus may have Hindi as a second language, so do you think I should include the meanings of some of the more hard Hindi/Urdu words used in the dialogues?

Like astitva = existence, being

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mukammal = complete

Again, just a question, no offence intended.😊

Thank you.

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Posted: 14 years ago

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Originally posted by: vista90pro

Curry-sistah,

😃😃Thanks for your vote of confidence and I am really glad you liked it!!! Now, if only I could get my thoughts together, and decide where to begin the next part,🤔🤔😉😉😉

And by the way, congrats on the game 6 win and all the best for the game with Boston Celtics 😊😊

np; don't worry Ur a talented writer⭐️ so i know it wont be hard for u to come up with the next part(s). :)

thanx.... :) lakers are out for revenge!!! hopefully they can put their best game on and creme the celtics . :) go lakers!!! 😆 Who are you rooting for?

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