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Posted: 14 years ago
#61
hey Fiz Well u know I was supposed to reAad this yesterday power went off
nd stuff I got hung up in the evening even if I wanted top read I wz at my naanu's house as hew was un well so sorry for this delayed comment

now coming to the chapter

IT WAS


BAD REALLY BAD i tell u

Joke

it was the best chapter I ever read

Lekha
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FF was just awesome.......๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ƒ
i liked it..........
update soon pls.........
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nice part plzz update soonnnn...
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: -Destiny-

hey Fiz Well u know I was supposed to reAad this yesterday power went off
nd stuff I got hung up in the evening even if I wanted top read I wz at my naanu's house as hew was un well so sorry for this delayed comment

now coming to the chapter

IT WAS


BAD REALLY BAD i tell u

Joke

it was the best chapter I ever read

Lekha

LEKHA KI BACHI,!๐Ÿ˜ฒ๐Ÿค”
haha ๐Ÿ˜ƒu almost gave me a heart attack๐Ÿ˜• ๐Ÿ˜ต well i gusse it was a late april fools joke huh๐Ÿ˜†? good 1 u really got me ๐Ÿ˜›
by the awys no problem in the late comment and hope ur nanu gets well soon๐Ÿ˜‰
tc,
fiz
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hey Fiz
alright i havnt commented for ages
but awsome parts love the way story is moving
plz pm me so i can stay on track
if you dont mind
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hey every 1 here it is ch6 enjoy n dont 4 get to comment n press like button๐Ÿ˜ƒ

Ch6

Preteeksha shocked looking down at her white sari which was now covered with chocolate cake :tum ne mere sari ko ruine kardeiya mein. Muhje kaheen jana tha already mein late hoon aur phir yeh.uff kya problem hai mere saath koi purani dushmani hai kya .

Shashank hiding his face with his hands after being yelled at : oh no I'm extremely sorry here let me help u clean up (taking some napkin and whipping her sari)

Preteeksha: don't u touch me (grabing the napkins from his hand )

Sardar ji talking to his wife: oye suno ji woh dekho kitni cute hai yeh dono larhaee

Sardar's wife: haan lag tha haan ki nye nye shaadi hai, hai rabba humare din yaad aai tusi bhi muhje asise tung karte tha. Oye munde tenu ki apni pyari moti ko thang kare

Sardar: arey haan aur bhabi ji tusi bhi maaf kardo gaalti se slip hua

Preteeksha and Shashank looking at each other

Shashank pointing at preteeksha: yeh mere moti ha ha ha ha and starts laughing

Preteeksha looking at the sardar ji : dehko mein tumhare bhabhi ji nahi hoon aur na hi mein inki moti hoon hum dono Ajnabee haan .(preteeksha is walking away )

Shashank calls her from behind and walks up to her: suno I really really very sorry

Preteeksha: kya tum ko sach mein lag tha ki sorry bhol ne say everything is ok? If I had done that u would forgive me

Shashank: haan it does and I would

Preteeksha: really fine ( just then takes some cake in her hand and rubs it all over shashanks face) : I to am sorry (starts to walk away )

Shashank(grabs Preteeksha's arm and they have a eye locking session he totally lost in them (Aisha this is for you! Just like I promised hope u like it ๐Ÿ˜ณ)

Sardar Ji watching all this starts singing : ((jhoot Nahi Bolna - 4), Yara Sach Kehna
Jis Tarah Pyaar Hai Mere Dil, Hai Tere Dil Mein Bhi
Yaar Jhoot Na Bolna, Sach Kehna
Yara Dil Na Todna, O Yara Dil Na Todna) - 2
Ho Jhoot Nahi Bolna

Preteeksha and shashank look up at the sardar ji then preteeksha storms out

Shashank follows Preteeksha goes in to a store and buy's a new sari and wears it and walk outs she stops and buys balloons and chocolates and has a lot of bags in her hands

She walks up a hill and goes in to a orphanage all the little kids come running to her :didi didi didi

Preteeksha: kaise hoon sub mein aap sab ki liye kuch hai laken bua kahaan hai?

Bua: Preteeksha beti hugs her bhot dino baad ? kaise ho?

Preteeksha theek hoon the kids gathering around her

Kids: didi and pulling her

Shashank see's her playing with kids then he gets a call and leaves

Preteeksha is on her way back when her car breaks down and she is stuck

Then Ishita's car comes and stops: she gets out um do u need any help

Preteeksha: a yeah my car broke down

Ishita: driver go and help him with the car give me the keys I will drop u home:

Preteeksha :thank u driver jab car is fixed break it home (she is getting out her things whenshe bumps into ishita both their cell drop and get switched)

In the car

Preteeksha: thanks again I have never seen u around

Ishita : no problem yaar any ways mein apne bare mein baath karte mein abhi abhi London se aye hoon apne bhaiya aur bahabi ka saat hoon aur my only close friend is my bahabi so I don't know that many ppl yet been so long

Preteeksha: well now u know me so when ever u want come over and we will meet aur u know mere bhi bahabi is my best friend in fact I married her bro n she married mine so we have that in come

Ishita: really wow toh tell me na yours was a luv marriage cool' I'm waiting for my mr. macho just like hrithik in dhoom 2 in fact I think aaj muhje laga ki I saw him hopefully I meet him soon

Preteeksha um turn left that's my house haha cute I hope u find him soon nice talking to u c u soon

Ishita is going for her late night shoot

Manhotra's house

Shashank and Araina on the sofa

Shasahank: where's ishita

Araina : late night shoot

Shashank: it's 2:00 a.m

What she should be home by now call her

At the rai's

Cell rings Preteeksha picks up her cell sleepy voice : hello

Shashank : hello B 4 he say n e thing else he hears a guys voice

Raunak: Baby kaun haan

Preteeksha : not sure jaan

Shashank close's the phone he is angery : Araina ishtia koi larke kay saath thi aur it' seem she was asleep

Araina: what aise kuch nahin she's at her shoot mayb it was wrong number lets go 2 sleep na?

Shashank : u go 2 bed araina I'm waiting for her

4:35am

Ishita walks in tired; bhaiya tum u haven't gone to sleep

Shashank: jab I called u who was that guy calling u baby

Ishita : what guy u called me when bhaiya u never called I was at the shoot the whole night u can even ask the unit I'm going to sleep

Next day

Ishita comes to c preteeksha

Ishita: hi yaar how r u gusse what mere college mein ek play aur I got lead the role can u help me with lines (gives her a copy of the line sheet)

Preteeksha : yeah sure no problem yeh mere ghar ka # and cell # call when ever u need'. U never told me ki tum college mein hai

Ishita: actually I'm a model but I'm also in my final year so yeah aur kya y don't we meet for lunch tommrow take care (she hugs prats)

At home

Ishita is in her room practing her lines for the play she calls the male lead for the play to practice from the house phone mean while downstairs shashank pick up to make a call and hears ishita saying : Yash mere family ko mere upper such hai ki mere koi chakker hai, main tumse kitna pyaar karte hoon 'I luv u jaan if I don't meet u my day is not complete with out u that's why lets meet and talk ki hum kya kare.

Guy actor(yash):ok lets meet at the road side coffee shop in 10 min, I luv u 2 baby mein bhi I cant live without u c u soon:

Ishita close's the phone and gets ready in her room

Shashank upset : ishita lied to me about last night she had to be with this yash guy aur aaj bhi she's meeting him lets see how much she will lie and hide all this from me I want c how far she will go.

Ishita coming downstairs wearing a pink short sundress

Shashank: ishita are you going some where?

Ishita thinking to her self until iget the lead 4 sure I wont bhaiya or he will feel disappointed : um bhaiya yeah had to go a friends place for some college related work ok I'm getting late bye and leaves

Shashank is so irrated and hurt

Next day at the beach

Preteeksha , ishita, sumo, devika together

Preteeksha:ishita these are close friends suhaani n devika

Ishita:nice 2 meet u call me ish all my family does

Sumo: cute pet name u can call me sumo every calls me that

Ishita :oh pani puri lets eat it yaar the whole they spent at the beach n shopping

Shashank comes back home from work he see's ishita throwing up

Shashank: kya hua u ok

Ishita: yeah bro I ate too many pani puris n got sick that's all

That night ishita calls prats at her home phone from her home phone

Hey prats u busy?

Prateeksha: no kyun need help with the play

Ishita : yeah ok um lets start (shashank is passing by the room)

(Crying ishita)Yash main tumhare bache ki maa bene wale hoon,yeh sab hoone kay baad tum muhje nahin choor saktha, tum main abb kya karong gi agar mere family finds out main kya jawab 'u always said u luved me now tum aise act Karen ki u don't even know me '.(silence )

Outside the room shashank is shaken up by hearing all this thinking to himself all the flash backs night he called wrong number, pani puri, meeting guy all that'

Ishita: kya instead of thinking about shaadi tum'no I will not abort baby and starts crying ,then she smiles for her great acting and walks out of room without cing her bro and she goes to meet yash for practice )

Shashank what the hell he thinks of himself has had enough : he gets in car n follows her she supposed to meet yash but she says hi to raunak ,he thinks raunak is the guy.. and grabs and turns raunak hand and punchs him in the face and then grabs his collar says sala kaminey .

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That's it for now don't 4 get 2 comment n press the like button precap ch 7

What will raunak do will ouch shanks back , and some more PraSha n Arnak Meetings.

Edited by lalmirch28 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#67
Ooo lala PraSha messy chocolate cake encounter ๐Ÿ˜ณ and Pratz as usual don't touch me and all that ๐Ÿ˜†
For the first time I've read one whole chapter within 10 minutes, this phone story is so intersting ๐Ÿ˜† lagey raho lalmirch jee, and I hope Raunak doesn't fight back and instead clears the misunderstanding, I know you're not like Ekta, lalmirch, I'm sure you won't drag this situation ๐Ÿ˜†
Oooo and the PraSha eye to eye contact ๐Ÿ˜ u dedicated it to someone, but I loved it tooo so much!!! ๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜
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Posted: 14 years ago
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omg!!amazing part waiting for the next one
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Posted: 14 years ago
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awouch Kya baat hai yaar

AWESOME
lekha
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Fiz I dont knw what to say u just blew me away....โ˜บ๏ธ
So magical ...๐Ÿ˜ณ
And thank u sooo much, the eyelock was amazing ...
Loved the Pratz rubbed the cake on hes face ..
Totally awasome update.. ๐Ÿ‘
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