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Heyaaa evryone? How are you all? Well sorry for the delay I have soo much work on my head at the moment. Thanks for the replies to the previous part and I hope you enjoy this just as much. Please comment or just press the like button:) Enjoy.....

Chapter Six

'Araina what is this? Care to explain why you are standing here with your arms around this young man?I'm waiting for you're explanation?' Millind asked.
Araina looked terrifed, even though she knew she had nothing wrong, but just the thought of being caught with a guy from her Bahia scared her.
'Bahia, it's nothing. I was walking to the door without looking and I was about to trip but was saved by this man.' Explained Araina.
Millind walked upto Araina who was know standing a few metres apart from Ronak.
'Gudia it's ok, anyway young man, Millind Das' extending his hand forward to be shaked.

'Sir, Ronak Manhortra, maybe you don't recognise me. We met at the party of the Manhortra, Das and Rai contract. Mr Manhortra is my father.' he replied explaining.

'Ronak, I do remember, my apologies for forgeting. Anyway, Araina Dadi se mile?' Millind continued.
'Yes Bahia, I was just about to leave, bur I'll wait for you'

Nodding Millind walked upstaris to meet dadi, along with Araina.

'Yeh Araina ka Bahia toh baree gussa wale he. Save yourself Ronak.' smiling to himself he left upstairs to meet dadi as well.

'Prateeksha, we shall continue this tommorow. I need to go meet Suhanis dadi, unke tabeet teek nahin hain.' Shashank said.
'Kya!!! What happened to her?' She explained
Shashank was shocked as she knew dadi so well.
'I don't think it's serious, but app Suhani or unki family ko kaise jante hai?' Shashank asked.
'Woh meri chote behn or Suhani best friends hai, toh mein uske family ko jante hoon. Aur app?' She replied.
'Well me being a Manhortra are very close family friends with the Rais. Toh mein chalta hoon, if you want I can take you too visit her as well' Shashank offered.
Prateeksha agreed, and both set off to see dadi.

'Hello, Aziz Bahia, woh no one is at home, as we have come to visit Suhanis dadi. She is ill. Toh Bahia told me to tell you not to worry and we will be home soon' Araina said.
'Araina beta, kise baat Karee ho?' asked Sonia.
'one minute Bahia,....... Ur aunty woh it's Aziz Bahia, I'm just telling him no one is home, as he doesn't have the keys. And that we will come soon' Araina replied.
'Araina do one thing, just call him over here, everyone is here anyway, Ronak, and Subhash uncle and Nandita Aunty have just arrived with Dadi, so it fine.' Sonia said.
'Okai aunty. Urm Bahiaa I'm back, sonia aunty told me to tell you to just come round to Suhanis house.' Araina explained the rest, and Aziz told her he will be thee soon.

'So do you know the Rais well?' Shahank asked in the car.
'Araina and Suhani have ben best friends for a while, so we know Vikram uncle and Sonia Aunty well, but Dadi has alway been fond of us kids.' replied Prateeksha.
'Aur koon hai tumhari family mein?' he continued his questions.
'Six years back, our parents died, but my eldest brother, Millind bought us up well. After Millind Bahia it me, then younger to me is Aziz, who is just finishing his studies soon, and then our baby of the house, Araina, who we call 'gudia. That's all, us four brothers sisters are each other life. Aur app ki family mein?' she told then asked also.
'Hmmm, meri family mein hain Dadi, eldest and very lovable, my mother Nandita, father Subhash and my brother Ronak.'

They continued there family talk getting to know more about one another. After twenty minutes or so, bothe reached out to turn the radio on, making the hands touch. Being caught up in the moment, they stared in each others eyes. As they were standing at a traffic light Shahank was not driving.

'BEEP BEEP!!!'

Realising what had just happened they both pulled their hands back and Shashank started to drive again.

The song filled the background from the radio.

Pehli nazar mein
Kaise jaado kar diya
Tera ban baita hai
Mera jiya
Jaane kya hoga
Kya hoga kya pata
Is pal ko milke
Aa jee le zara

Mein hoon yahan
Tu hai yahan
Meri bahon mein aa
Aa bhi ja
O jaan-e-jaan
Dono jahan
Meri bahon mein aa
Bhool Ja aa

O jaan-e-jaan
Dono jahan
Meri bahon mein aa
Bhool Ja aa

Baby i love u, baby i love you, baby i love you, baby i love you โ€ฆ so..
Baby i love u
Oh i love u
I love u
I love u so
Baby i love u

At this point both Shashank and Prateeksha looked at each other. Realising they both looked at the same time they looked away almost immediatly. She sing continued with both know only taking secret glances when the other was not looking.

Har dua mein shamil tera pyaar hai
Bin tere lamha bhi dushwar hai
Dhadhkon ko tujhe se hi darkar hai
Tujhse hai rahtein
Tujhse hai chahtein

Har dua mein shamil tera pyaar hai
Bin tere lamha bhi dushwar hai
Dhadhkon ko tujhe se hi darkar hai
Tujhse hai rahtein
Tujhse hai chahtein

Tu jo mili ek din mujhe
Mein kahin ho gaya lapata

O jaan-e-jaan
Dono jahan
Meri bahon mein aa
Bhool Ja aa

Kar diya Deewana dard-e-Kash ne
Chain cheena isqh ke ehsaas ne
Bekhayali di hai tere pyaas ne
Chaya suroor hai
Kuch to zaroor hai

Yeh dooriyan
Jeene na de
Hal mera tujhe na pata

O jaan-e-jaan
Dono jahan
Meri bahon mein aa
Bhool Ja aa

Baby i love u, baby i love you, baby i love you, baby i love you โ€ฆ so..
Baby i love u
Oh i love u
Baby I love u
I love uโ€ฆ๐Ÿ˜ณ ๐Ÿ˜ณ

The song ended and not being able to out up with any other romantic song, Prateeksha turned the radio off. Five minutes later, the car pulled up infront of Rai mansion.

Walking in together, Prateeksha discovered all her family inside, along with Shashnaks as well. Both came in and greeted everyone. As The Manhortras had met all of the Das's at the party everyone was well settle in at who was who.

After meeting Dadi, who insisted she was much better everyone wa sitting in the eneormous living room full of thirteen people.

'Bas Vikram uncle hum chalte hai, it's getting late.' Millind said.
'Millind beta stay for a while, eat dinne here, as a big family, everyone will get too know each other better as well.' Vikram uncle said. Not being able to refuse he stayed.

It was a huge family affair and everyone had a great time, even the two Dadis who were best friends for over a generation know.

'Bahia, I'll be back, phone ayah hai.' Prateeksha said.

'Hello who is it?' Prateeksha asked.
Hearing no reply she put the phone down, not realising someone was looking at her from the outside window.

Chapter Seven... A small leap, some cute moments, and another stalker introduced.

That's it for know. I'm sure that's long enough. Sorry if you're finding a bit slow, but as soon as the leap takes place everything will be set, with the story picking up. As for know please do comment and tell me where to improve a well.
Love Aluu
xx ๐Ÿ˜ณ
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Posted: 14 years ago
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hey great part
loved it
waiting for the leap part
thanks for pm
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nice part Aluu...
waiting for the leap..continue soon
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wow great job cant wait 4 next part
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Hey everyone, sorry for such the long delay, I was just so caught up with school. Anyway firstly

HAPPY VALENTINES DAY TO ALL MY LOVELY READERS!

So without futher ado, here's the next chapter. I'm sure you will like it๐Ÿ˜‰

Enjoy.....

Chapter Seven

4 months later
Four months had passed and a lot had changed. Firstly all three families and grown very close to each other and where know all meeting regulary. The college had finished for Araina and Suhaani, and office work was soaring new height everyday.

'Suhaani chal kuch karte hai I'm so bored.' moaned Araina.
'Haan, magar kyan kareen?' Suhanni replied.
Thinking or a minute or so, Araina replied, 'Chal cinema chalte hai'
With both girls agreeing to go, they got ready and set off immediatly. Reaching the town centre in about half an hour, Suhaani went to join the tickets line, wereas Araina went to hey some snacks.
Whilst waiting, her phone rang.
'Hello, who is it?' she alsked.
'That's got nothing to do with you,'
Araina realised the voice sounded like a mans bit she could here faint voices in the background of a girls.
'What, yes it has. You are the one who rang me, so who are you?' She asked again.
'Koi nahin.' and put the phone down. Araina was confused but couldn't see who rang as it was a private number.
Ignoring it she put her phone away and continued to wait.
'Araina, tickets milge, mein andar jaree hoon. Seats save karne hain.' Suhaani screamed, and left when Araina nodded her head.
'Hurry up, the film will start.' Araina spoke to herself.
Turning around he saw a young aged man staring at her as it was the end of world. Araina feeing uncomfortable turned forward. He walked forwards giving Araina little space to move. Feeling distressed Araina move forward a little into some room, but the man continued to move forward. The man slowly moved his hand and slaped Arainas backside. Araina know completly angry at how he touched her, turned around and slapped him hard on the face.
'Idiot' she said.
As soon as she was to move up to the vendor, he grabbed her hand and started twisting it. Araina screamed in pain, and looked around for help, but everyone had left for the film, and the there was no queue behind Araina.
'Chodo mujhe! Leave me alone!' Araina begged.

'Prateeksha, you finshed?' Shashank asked.
'Yes all done for today. Ajj jalde finish hogaya.' Replied Prateesksha.
'Chalo, hum lunch kane chalte hai' Shashank asked.
Agreeing both left to eat lunch at a nearby restaurent. In these four months, Shashank and Prateeksha had frown very close to each other and also comfortable around each other.
Arriving at the restaurent, both got a table in a corner. Ordering their food, they just chatted lightly. Looking around Shashank saw red baloons everywhere with roses. He looked at the menu board at the front which said, 'HAPPY VALENTINES DAY'
Smiling Shashank picked up the sigle rose which lay on their table, and held it out to Prateeksha.
'Prateeksha, for you, Happy Valentines Day!' Shashank said. A blushing Prateeksha accepted the rose but said,
'Magar hum dono toh...' not being able to finish her sentance, but Shashank understood fully.
'From a friend to another friend'
Smiling at his decency, Prateeksha put the rose near her plate. Music was playing and some copules where dancing. A voice over then said,
'Please will everyone male there way over for a dance'
Shashank got up and went round the table and pit his hand infront of Prateeksha.
'Care to dance' he asked softly. Prateeksha put her hand in his, and he clasped it gently. Making there way over to the dance floor, a slow song was playing.
(Tera Hone Laga hoon- Ajab Prem Ku Ghazab Khani)

Shining in the setting sun like a pearl upon the ocean come on feel me
Girl feel me
Shining in the setting sun like a pearl upon the ocean come on heal me
Girl heal me
Thinking about the lovin making and life sharing come and feel me
Girl feel me
Shining in the setting sun like a pearl upon the ocean come on feel me
Come on heal me
O aaja tu bhi mera mera
Tera jo ikraar hua
To kyun na main bhi keh doon keh doon
Hua mujhe bhi pyaar hua
Tera hone laga hoon khone laga hoon Jab se mila hoon
Tera hone laga hoon khone laga hoon Jab se mila hoon
Shining in the setting sun like a pearl upon the ocean come on feel me
Girl feel me
Shining in the setting sun like a pearl upon the ocean come on heal me
Girl heal me
O Aise to mann mera pehli bhi raaton mein aksar hi chahat ke haan
Sapne saujaunta tha
Pehle bhi dhadkan ye dhun koi gaati thi
Par ab jo hota hai woh pehle na hota tha
Hua hai tujhe jo bhi jo bhi
Mujhe bhi is baar hua
To kyun na main bhi keh doon keh doon
Hua mujhe bhi pyaar hua
Tera hone laga hoon khone laga hoon Jab se mila hoon
Tera hone laga hoon khone laga hoon Jab se mila hoon

Both Shashank and Prateeksha where know looking inti each others eyes. Both had got lost in the rythem of the music, completly ignoring their surroundings.

Aankhon se chu loon ke bahen tarasti hain
Dil ne pukara hai haan Ab to chale aao
Aaoge shabnam ki boondein barasti hain
Mausam ishara hai haan Ab to chale aao
Baahon mein dalein baahein baahein
Baahon ka jaise haar hua
Hamara maine mana mana
Hua mujhe bhi pyaar hua
Tera hone laga hoon khone laga hoon Jab se mila hoon
Tera hone laga hoon khone laga hoon Jab se mila hoon
Shining in the setting sun like a pearl upon the ocean come on feel me
Girl feel me
Shining in the setting sun like a pearl upon the ocean come on heal me
Girl heal me
Thinking about the lovin making and life sharing come and feel me
Girl feel me
Shining in the setting sun like a pearl upon the ocean come on feel me
Come on heal me

The song ended, and everyone left the dance floor to eat. Shahank and Prateeksha hadn't realised and continued dancing. They where made aware of their surrounding when a waiter came upto them and said,
'Sir, Ma'am, you food has been served' Letting go of each other both realised what they had done, and waked back to the table. Sitting down both ate in silence. A comfotable silence.

After lunch, both of them ordered Chocolate cake with ice cream. Whilst waiting they began talking again.
'Toh ajj ka kya plan hai?' He asked.
'Matlab?' she replied confused.
'Matlab, after this?' he clarified.
'The usual go home' she said.
'Phir kya tum, urm....' he stutterd not knowing how to say it.
'Kya Shashank, bolo.' she urged.
'kya tum... Mera 'matlab hain, kya tum mere saat drive me joygee?' he finally asked.
'Okay, why not. Maza aygaa.' she replied.
Shashank felt extremly satisfied as he got Prateeksha to agree.
With the cake arriving, both ate. Prateeksha enjoye the cake, and as it being her favourite, she ate it all.
'That was great!' she said, know full up. 'Chale?'
'Yes just one thing.' he replied.
'Kya?' she asked.
Shashank moved forward, and picked up his napkin, and wiped the chocolate off the side off her mouth. Embarrased she looked down an whispered a thanks.
'No problem, chale?' he know asked.
Noddiing both left, with Shashank paying as he refused to split the money. Prateeksha had put her rose safely in her purse.

Getting into Shashanks convertible, both left for the long drive.

Meanwhile, Araina had been forced into the guys van, and had drove off to a unknown place.

'Yeh Araina bhi na, proberly didn't find me so sat elsewhere with the snacks. Oh well' Suhaani said to herself.

'Chodo mujhe. Where are you taking me. Leave me' Araina screamed. Hearing no reply she began to think of what to do. Getting and idea she, slowly slid her left arm into he jeans pocket, and got her phone out. Putting it on the seat, she pressed the recent calls button and rang the first caller.

'Hello, Araina?' asked the caller. Hearing no reply, the caller just listened to what he could hear.

'Chodo mujhe. Please. Where are you taking me?' she screamed louder so the person on the phone could hear.
'Just sit there quietly. Warna mujse burra koi nahin hoygaa.' he replied.

With his phone ringing, he stopped driving and picke it up.
'Yea sir, she is with me. The Valley. Seaside Valley. Okay sir, we will reach in about two hours.' the guy said.

Unknown to him, The caller, Ronak, had heard everthing said, and didn't take long to react. Keeping his phone on the call, he left in his car for seaside valley. Araina unknown who the caller was, hoped they hoped they had heard evrything, and also left her phone on, so they could hear what was happening.

'Araina, where are you?' Suhaani searched, after the end of the film. Trying to phone her, and recieving it busy, she thought Araina had left for the Manhotra home, as it was they did everyday, go to each others houses, swoping everyday. Suhaani also left for Manhortra house.

Reaching there, she saw Araina was not there. Know worried, she rang her again, with a still busy. Going in the house evryone asked where Araina was.
'Woh pata nahin, I lost contact with her from this afternoon.' Suhaani said, in tears.

Everyone was know worried, but before calling the police that decided to wait a while.

Ronak on the other hand was driving as fast as possible to reach Seaside Valley. He was sure he had caught up with the driver with Araina due to his fast speed.

Prateeksha and Shashank not informed as there phone were not reachable due to no signal.

Chapter Eight... See if Ronak finds Araina, and more PraSha scenes on the way.

That's it for know, but as I have holidays, I will update more regulary, so the wait is not that long. I will send Pms later as I'm busy at the moment. So do press the like button and commet or critisise. I would like to know where to improve.
Love Aluu๐Ÿ˜Š



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Posted: 14 years ago
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amazing part ...loved it do continue soon....
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Aluu hey sweety iloved ur updt well u know what i am planning to writa a FF but Ermm I am not too sure wheter people would like the Concept ]


I hope I just get a good reception for the story
BTW Please Pm me the next time around

Lekha
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nice updte.. Prasha scenes were really gud... enjoyed it.. waiting for more.. do continue soon..
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Originally posted by: swetha10

nice updte.. Prasha scenes were really gud... enjoyed it.. waiting for more.. do continue soon..



Hey, I'm glad you enjoyed it๐Ÿ˜Š
The next part will be up tmz.
Aluu๐Ÿ˜ณ
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Originally posted by: Irika95

amazing part ...loved it do continue soon....



Hey, glad you liked it ๐Ÿ˜Š
Will post next chapter tmz
Love Aluu ๐Ÿ˜ณ
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