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Hey nice character sketch... looks interesting.. cant wait to read more.. do continue soon n add me onto ur PM list..
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Gr8 start Love Angel ..👏👏

Luved the Prasha meeting ..!!
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Hey everyone. Thanks for all the lovely comments. They mean a lot. So here it goes with Chapter Two. Hope you enjoy it as much as the first one. Leave your comments, good or bad. Enjoy

Chapter Two

'Ronak, Ronak, where the hell are you man? I've been looking for you for ages?' Shashank asked his best friend who he treated more like a brother.
Ronak was only two years old when his parents died. The Manhortras were good friends with them, and also very good hearted so decided that they would help him. They gave him a shelter, food and most importantly love. Although Ronak knew he was an orphan, he treated Shashanks parents as his own. Know he was old enough he did ask to move out as he thought he was a burden, but he was told he was their son, and sons weren't burdens, so he continued living with the Manhortras, like a family.
Shashank caught Ronak staring at something. He looked in the direction he was looking in and saw what had caught his attention. It was a young women. No more than twenty. She was very pretty and had a beutiful laughter. She was enjoying herself, and from her face you could tell she had mo problem in the world. She was amazing. Shashank turned back around to Ronak, and tried to snap him out of the gaze.
'Ronak, Ronak. Baad mein dekna use. Pehle ider dekh. Eh Ronak,' as he was not getting any attention he decided to do something else. He looked at him and then lifted his hand to his face, and then with all the force he had he slapped him across the face. This caught his attention.
'Oh you idiot why in the world did you smack me?' Ronak asked in a very angry tone.
'Mein kitne deer se idhar kara ho, or tu hain' toh udhar dekh ra hain', waise yeh kaun hain'?' Shashank replied, winking in the process.
'Woh... yeh.... Mujhe kya pata. Mein toh nahin janta use.' replied a blushing Ronak.
'Acha, chal let's go meet her. Waise be Suhaani is there. Use toh janta hai?' Shanshank joked.
Ronak laughed an nodded but before they went he stopped Shashank and asked him something.
'By the way, did you need something?' Shashank looked confused, but then remembered.
'Yes I did, but 'woh baad mein, pehle teri life ki tori setting ho jaye!' winking at him, both of them set of to where Suhanni and her friend were standing.
'Suhanni!! How are you?' asked Shashank, whilst giving her a hug. Ronak did the same and then both stood back.
'I'm fine guys, how are you both' she repelied.
'Good' both said simultainuously. It went silent and then Shashank broke it.
'Suhani apne dost se nahin milana?'
'Oh yeah, I'm so stupid I forget. Araina meet Shashank and Ronak. They are the Manhotras, and you two meet Araina Das.' Hands were shook and everyone become familiar with each other.
'Araina, what a cute name. Magar kitne sweet hai.' Ronak thought.
'By the way. Kya tum dono ek sath parte hoon?' Shashank asked.
'Kitna idiot hai. Ek sath puree inquiry karega. Not suspicious at all you duffer!' Ronak said in his mind.
'Hain', mein or Araina ek college mein hain, and were are best friends.' Suhani replied not relising the Shashank was trying to find out some information about her.
'Before yeh Shashank idiot isle puree bio-data puch le, I have to do something. Stupid duffer, kab badle ga. God please make abut sensible soon' Ronak though again.
'Wow I love this song! Urm Miss Araina would you like to dance?' Ronak asked ever so sweetly.
'Sure, I would love too.' She replied shly, looking down. Ronak held his hand out and Araina slowly put her's in his. He led her to the dance floor, were a slow song was playing. Both started to dance, and were not able to look at each other. The song continued and know both were stealing glances at each other. When both eyes met they would both look down and blush. They carried on dancing, enjoying every minute of it.

'Didi, where have you been, I've been looking for you?' Aziz asked his elder, and the sister he was most closest to.
'No where. I was in in this party.' replied Prateeksha. Bothe brother sister continued to talk. When they caught Araina dancing, they were both shocked at first, but when the saw that the guy she was dancing with seemed very nice and rspectful, they thought they looked quite cute together.

'Abb is ladke ko kya karo. I'm such an idiot uska naam puch la ta. Hmmmm, payback but what? Kya karo. Something mean but not mean, kya karo. Uff my head is hurting with so much thinking, right think Shashank, think. You can do it.'

'Didi, yeh Bahia kidar hain?' Aziz asked.
Pata nahin Aziz. Mujhe lagta hai ke 'woh Subhash and Vikram uncle ke sath hai.' Prateeksha looked around to see if she could find her Bahia when she saw the same man staring at her. His gaze was making Prateeksha very uncomfortable, and also very self-concious. She turned around and started talking to Aziz trying to take her mind of the man but it was not possible as his gaze was peircing through her.
'Aziz mein abhee aye, tum idhaar hi wait karoo' Prateeksha said. She slowly started to walk off and the the guy started following her as well. Prateeksha picked up the pace and left forthe garden outside Manhortra house. The guy still following her.

'Mein kya karon? Sochh Shashank. Wait yeh toh wohi ladke hai. Why is she leaving the house and going towards the garden. Mein bhi dekhta hoon.'

Shashank started to follow Prateeksha, but what he didn't notice was the guy who was following Prateeksha and was infront of him.

'Vikram, I am sure this deal will be a great success. I'm sure this deal will become very profitable very soon. Millind who will be working on this deal from your office?' Subhash asked.
'Well I was thinking to let Prateeksha work on it. She is very intelligent and has recently finished studying so I think this will be a great chance for her' replied Millind, with the faith in his sister visible in his eyes.
'I agree, you know what this might be a chance for Shashank to become more responsible as well. This would be a great opportunity forthem both' said Subhash.
'That true Subhash, and if they have any problems on the way we are always here to mentor them' Vikram said.
So it was decided the project would be worked on by Shashank and Prateeksha with the three elders as mentors.

Chapter Three... Urm well the party ending, and find out what happened between Prateeksha, Shashank and the mystory guy.
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Hey luv_angel.... Loved the cute moments between Raunak and Araina.... Shashank as usual was the funny guy...😆 Anyways I loved it and please continue soon.. Can' t wait to read the next part....😊
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nice part loved Raunak and Araina..
do continue soon..
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Hey guys. How are you all? So good news, I have a day off because of the snow, so you all get and update. So here it goes, and please leave your comments. Enjoy....

Chapter Three

'Toh Suhani ki dadi kaise lage meri party?'
'Baas teek thi Shashank ki dadi, mere party tori better hoti, magar koi baat nahin'
'Nahin Suhani ki dadi, batyee na, app kya teek nahin lagaa?'
'Shashank ki dadi. Choryee na. App koi aur baat karee'
'Mujhe app se app se koi baat nahin karne Suhani ki dadi'
On that, both dadi's turned back to back from each other and stopped talking to each other.

'Bahia, Bahia, kya karee' hain? Mein idhaar 'kitna bore hor ra hoon aklee.' Aziz said to his elder brother.
'Aziz, mein tumse zaroor baat karta, but I have to be with Vikram Sir and Subhash Sir. Tum samajre ho na?' replied Millind. On that he walked off leavin his brother alone once again. Looking around he saw Suhani alone as well. Smiling he walked upto her to chat.
'Hi Suhani, how are you?' Aziz asked.
'Fine thank you very much. Baas getting bored waiting for Araina. This is fifth song they have danced too' Suhani replied looking over at Ronak and Araina who were dancing very cutely.
'Koi baat nahin, we can talk.' And on that note both Aziz and Suhani began chatting. They were like friends, and nothing else.

'Pata kaun hai. Mere peeche he pargya hai.' Prateeksha was speaking to herself whilst trying to escape. She looked behind her, and saw the guy was closer than she thought. This time she started to run, getting scared. She turned around and tried to run back into the party, so she could tell someone. Running toward the door, she turned her head too see ofthe guy was there. He was. Prateeksha scared started to cry softly. She ran a bit more when she bumped into Shashank. Shashank fell back right onto the floor, and Prateeksha came tumbling after and fell right on top of him.
Both were silent. Shashank looked into her eyes.
'I just noticed, she has the most prettiest eyes. The perfect shape and colour. They are beautiful. Wait Shashank, stop thinking like that. You need get revenge, she pulled you on the floor. No-one messes with me'
Prateeksha was scared out of wits. So as soon as she fell on Shashank she knew she wasn't alone, and atleast someone could help her. She stood up, and looked around, and she could still see the guy hiding behind a tree. As a reflex action, she turned around and saw Shashank who was straigning himself off, and hugged him. Shashank shocked at why the girl in front of him was hugging him, he tried to speak.
'Urm....., woh....., yeh app.....' Pratteksha was sobbing quietly, which was noticed by Shashank.
'What's wrong, why are you crying?' he asked. Prateeksha hugged him tighter and was scared to see if the guy had gone. Shashank asked once again, but recieved no reply.
'App mujhe to batye?' He urged her.
'Woh...Woh... E..ekk b...banda h..h..hai j...jo m...m...mera p..pecha k...kara h..h...hai. Mujhe b...baut da...daar lagra hai.' Prateeksha finally managed to say. Though all her nervous stammering, Shashank was able to understand the problem, and put his arms around Prateeksha, protectivly. His gaze went around the garden and saw no guy, but was sure the girl wouldn't lie.
'Don't worry, whoever it was has gone, calm down and let's go inside.' Shashank said. Prateeksha realised what she had just done and let go and moved back. Her gaze fixed downwards she shly fixed her kammez.
'Woh, I'm sorry. Mujhe itna daar lag ra tah, ki meine anjane meh appko.....' Prateeksha couldn't finish her sentance, and Shashank saw she was getting uncomfortable.
'Koi baat nahin. It fine. Right let's go inside' He said trying to ease off the mood. They both slowly started walking toward the main hall, when Prateeksha stopped.
'Please will you not tell anyone about this. I don't want anyone to worry. If somoine was there it would be a different case. But even you didn't see anyone.'
'Don't worry, you're secret is safe with me' Shashank replied.
They continued the walk in, which was more comfortable, and entered the hall. Both looked at each other, smiled, forgetting every bad thing which occured with them, and left in opposite directions.
'He is not as bad as I thought he was. Baas naam nahin pucha.' Prateeksha said to herself.
'I think she sweet and very different from others. I don't think revenge is needed here. The only thing i didnt ask was her name' Shashank said also to himself.

On that note, the music was ceased and everyone turned to look at the stage. Once again Subhash Manhortra was on stage ready to give his speech.
'I am hopeful you all enjoyed this memorable evening as much as I did, along with my partners. So before we call it a night, I would like to call on stage our inspirations in life. Firstly I would like to call up my two sons, who are everything in life for me, and who have kept me going everyminute of my life. Mr Shashank Manhortra and Mr Ronak Mahortra.'
Both came up and hugged their father and then walked of stage. This went unknown to Prateeksha, who busy sorting out something in her foot, so she didn't hear or see anything on stage. When she was done she stood up, and saw Aziz right next to her. She smiled at him and looked back to the stage know.
'Out next inspiration is of Mr Vikram Rai, who has always done everything in life for one person only, his daughter. Welcome Miss Suhani Rai.'
Suhani also walked on stage, gave her father a tight hug, and then drifted off the stage.
'Finally, our new business partner. He has became a self made man at such a young age. He had a hard time choosing who inspired him most in life, and has finally come to decision that his two sisters and brother inspire him.'

'Ronak, I'm just going to the washroom. Be back soon' Shashank said and then left.

'They are, Miss Prateeksha Das, Mr Aziz Das and his little 'gudiaa', Miss Araina Das' All three came on stage and together hugged their Bahia. It was a happy day for all of them today.

'Thankyou very much for attending. I hope you all enjoyed yourself. I take your leave know.' Subhash ended.

With this as the the cue for the party ending, the guests slolwy left, leaving the Manhortras, Rais and the Das's left.
'Subhash sir, we will take your leave know. Thankyou for such an eventful evening.' Millind said.
Goodbyes were exchanged and then the Das family left as well.
'Chal Subhash, we must leave too, it's getting very late' Vikram said.
Some mote goodbyes were said and the Rais left as well.

'That evening went smoothly Ronak. Were is Shashank?' Subhash asked.
'In the washroom. He will be back soon.' Ronak replied.
Subhash left for his room along with Nandidta, and Dadi went for her room.
Just then Shashank entered.
'Everyone left without seeing me?' he asked.
'It's not my fault you took so long' Ronak replied and left for his room too.
'Chal Shashank, tu bhi jha' he said to himself and walked off as well.

Chapter Four..... Urm a normal day. Inccident at the college, and some office drama.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Nice chapter!

I wonder who this guy is... Lallu by any chance??
Loved PraSha's encounter, especially how Prats hugged Shanky , when she felt scared, and he soothed her. Cant wait for them to start working on the project together.
The way you portrayed ArNak was really cute!
Do continue soon
Anjali
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Nice part Luv angel ..
Liked the Prasha part ..😳
Update sooon ..!!!
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Nice chapter!
I wonder who this guy is... Lallu by any chance??
Loved PraSha's encounter, especially how Prats hugged Shanky , when she felt scared, and he soothed her. Cant wait for them to start working on the project together.
The way you portrayed ArNak was really cute!
Do continue soon

Anjali
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Hey Anjali!
Thankyou for the lovely comment. The mystery guy??? It will be revealed later, but keep the guess's coming. PraSha scene had to be special, it was there first hug. I'll try to continue soon!
Love Aluu
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Nice part Luv angel ..
Liked the Prasha part ..
Update sooon ..!!!
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Hi Dew drop. Thanks for the fab comment.
You can call me Aluu instead if luv angel. I'm glad you liked the Prasha part.
I'll try to continue soon.
Love Aluu
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