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Posted: 6 years ago
#81
Yash has fallen from his mighty high horse and boy the landing was hard .
That said I fill pity for Yash for some reason, he look so lost after learning the awful truth of Aarti disease. He is now desperatly cry for help, metaphorically speaking; although I don't want to appear too lenient cause misery and hurt is no excuse for what he tried to do to Aarti. Anyway, He got the much-needed scolding by his family for his atrocious behavior but he knew he was wrong and it seems that no amount of punishment he is inflicting on himself will easily eased his conscienceπŸ˜•. I really wonder what happened, it must have been really bad for him to came out so cold and calculating. I am really glad to see Aarti standing on principles despite her dire situation . She is now also curious about Yash past.
Such an emotional charge chapter, the next one should be hearwrenching.

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Posted: 6 years ago
#82
heart touching chapter
im really sorry for not comment on previous chapter 😳
it was so shocking news that aarti have cancer πŸ’”
yash couldn't even talk after he heard cancer word 😭
look like something big happened in yash past
now yash felt guilty for how he behaved with aarti 😭
thank god yash mami & aman understood him πŸ€—
aarti's parents families were really horrible they didn't came to help them when they really needed them 😑
aarti & her parents were really lucky to get such amazing neighbors who took care of them like family πŸ€—
poor aarti's mom lost their second child & paralyze πŸ₯Ί
now aarti's cancer her father doing his best to save her 😭
so now yash trying to help aarti for her treatment πŸ‘πŸΌ
before that he confessed with aarti's papa what he did
at first he got mad at yash but all thanks to yash mami she told aarti's papa abt yash past πŸ€—
thank god he understood yash now πŸ€—
ouch aarti return yash money
yash got so angry & went to aarti home
glad that aarti came at yash home to know exactly reason πŸ€—
so yash mom died coz of cancer πŸ₯Ί
continue plz
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Posted: 6 years ago
#83
very emotional part
beautifully written
lot happened in this part
all scenes are very touching
looking forward for the next part
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 6 years ago
#84
Emotional yet so Fantastic Chapter

Yash humble and fragile side was shown today
the guilt he had just knowing that Aarti is Dubeyji's life the fact that he wanted this deal with her all because of his attraction towards her but the moment cancer is known both Yash and Aman are taken back and Aman been emotionally stronger at this point stands to support Yash as he knows the feelings the agony Yash is facing at the moment
at home Aman questions Yash and Yash tells him that he has become a beast he tells Aman just how obsessed he has become with Aarti and this on its own tells me that Yash though portrays an image of I dont care but he is a decent guy , he even tells both his Mama and Mami whatever he did with Aarti and then later confesses to Aarti's father who indeed was outraged but after talking to Suraj and Gaythri learns about Yash past pains and he forgives Yash but Yash anger and guilt makes him filled with shame it almost seems like he was comparing himself to his father
I also felt that maybe Yash was indicating to the fact that he has fallen for Aarti though he named it as lust but will wait for future chapters to know about his feelings
Aarti having cancer yet the money that Yash offers her she refuses it , she has to be a strong cultural and moral person as her self respect means much more then her surviving
Yash and Aarti arguing forgetting about every other person present and when he says she should think about her parents as she will only die once but her parents will die everyday until their breathe
and this is something that he understands well losing his mother to cancer and he could not do anything about it now he wants Aarti to be treated without him interferring and bargaining as a saudagar , but it also seems as if Aarti's financial status reminds him of past pain
Yash telling Aarti about his mother again that was heart felt
Maybe Arpita too become friends with Aman but I feel both Arpita and Paridhi will be part of future chapters
this entire chapter was very touching and held so much pain and anger too
I truly enjoyed this chapter
sorry for been so late to comment
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Posted: 6 years ago
#85
Awesome update i loved it. This is heart breaking. Am totally looking forward to Yash past. Please continue soon.
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Posted: 6 years ago
#86
Will post on the next page
As I want to start from a fresh page.

That's why I'm Spamming..
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Posted: 6 years ago
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I'll have to keep spamming till I reach the next page.

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Next page


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Posted: 6 years ago
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Posted: 6 years ago
#90
Will try to post Characters Sketch soon πŸ˜ƒ
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