Fiction - 'Saudagar!' Chapter - 5, Page - 21 - Page 8

Hmm,it's complicated and emotional,thanks for the update.please continue the story soon.i'm really enjoying it c

Gosh that was such an emotional update. I was glad that Arti's father was able to learn the truth. Also liked that Yash went over to Aarti's house to return the money and she in turn came to him to learn of the truth. Great job as always and looking forward to what is in store next.

beautiful and emotional story...so now we will all get to know yash's past story...why he did what he did...arti true to herself returned the money...glad her dad understood and was ok with yash finally

Nikki as always very detailed and well thought out plot. You have shed a little light on Yash's past however I think there is lot more past pain and suffering that will be revealed in the coming chapters. I don't blame Arti for refusing to accept his money, as she does not know about his past. Let's see if she will forgive him enough to use the money for herself. I hope so as otherwise Dubey's will not be able to raise the required funds for her treatment. Can't wait for the next chapter. Really enjoying the story so far. Thank you.

Nice update...waiting for the truth that changed Yash's life completely... Update soon

Will read and comment by the weekend

Mind blowing update Nikki..

Originally posted by: Sharlene1410

Hi Nikki a beautiful emotional post ⭐️I feel for Yash's loss his mom died of cancer now he has met Aarti whom he is attracted too diagnose with the same money was a major factor then and now.

Aarti has her principles and she is right in her own way but I think she should think about her parents and accept the money. Dubeyji too defended his daughter's dignity but thank god he listened to G3 and did not behave stubborn he understood the situation and he judged Yash correctly

Originally posted by: VICKY126

Hmm,it's complicated and emotional,thanks for the update.please continue the story soon.i'm really enjoying it c

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