Fiction - 'Saudagar!' Chapter - 5, Page - 21 - Page 5

Originally posted by: ksen

amazing start

very interesting part

loved it

looking forward for the next part

thanks for the pm

Originally posted by: _SharmeenLuvsGC

Amazing Update Nikki ji 😃

Yash's character is so interesting here.. what promise he was talking about?

And now he's lusting after Aarti.. but poor girl has cancer.. now how will he react to this?

Love the whole update

Originally posted by: lovely_nikki

Thanks so much Soni 🤗

Yes Yash is attracted to her and didn't hesitate to tell her exactly what was on his mind. And Aarti is not some damsel in distress, she gave him the reply that he so deserved, that one slap 👏

I don't know when I'll post the next chapter as right now I have to post the next chapter of my another story 😳

And thanks Soni for the wishes 🤗

Originally posted by: lovely_nikki

Thanks Madam Ji 😃

Isn't Yash's character always interesting in most of my stories? 😉

And ma'am I can't answer all your questions in one single chapter 😆. So you'll have to be very patient with this story 😳

Originally posted by: Sharlene1410

A Beautiful story sad for Aarti plight she has no clue about her illness a shock for Yash her parents wants her to be happy maybe this is why they have not told her as yet.

Yash what he assumes to be a deep lust for Aarti's body was shaken when he saw her faint and her lack of response. What he thinks is stubborn pride by the poor is actually their belief and self respect for them self and happiness with what little they have they are content their little family has all that is required but tragedy has struck because of Aarti illness he is will to work with Yash for the extra much needed money.

Originally posted by: premap

Gosh ! You have got a real gem of a story ! It pours real 'cold water ' on all Yash's plans, knowing Aarti's illness! You have built up the story to a point of 'increased temperature ' before we landed on 'ice cold water' ! Enjoyed reading and hoping for the next update. Thanks

Originally posted by: alekhika20

Asum start,cont soon

Originally posted by: Shashi1984

Hey Nikki! First of all, Congratulations for completing five years and that too successful five years.👍🏼.

Glad to see a new SS from you. After long time I checked forum. The first chapter is awesome. There are many shades of emotions in this chapter. First of all, Yash is behaving like an arrogant businessman who can go to any level for what he want. But there is some past of him maybe responsible for the way he is behaving. Who is the girl whom he promised to be not involved with anyone and where is she now. I know it will get clear as the story progresses, but curious to know.

Now Aarti, she is the type of girl any father would proud of. She loves her father. Loved the characters of Satyendra and Kailash. Not yet say about Aman as Yash had not given him any chance to speak.

Yash asked Aarti to sleep with him to have money to save her father. It's very shocking to hear Yash made that demand, but maybe he had reasons to behave like that. And it's very shocking to know that Aarti suffering from cancer.

Waiting for Yash's reaction...