Fiction - 'Saudagar!' Chapter - 5, Page - 21 - Page 3

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Posted: 7 years ago

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lovely_nikki

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Posted: 7 years ago

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Hey Friends,

On 11th November, 2017, I completed Five Years in this forum. Yes it's my 5th Anniversary in this forum. This is the first forum I had joined. In the last Five years I made so many nice friends whom I'll remember as long as my memory doesn't become weak.

On this occasion I want to Thank All My Readers who've been with me since the time I started writing.

I want to thank all those readers who joined me later.

But most of all I want to Thank All of You for staying with me, encouraging me and motivating me to keep on writing. And I hope and pray that you'll continue to do so.

From the bottom of my heart, I wish All Of You Good Health and Joy and Happiness.

Bless You All

And

Nikki ❤️

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SillySoni

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Posted: 7 years ago

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Awesome start Di...love it...and in first meeting itself Yash is crazy behind Aarti. When he told Aarti what he want she get angry like any other girl should done but in the end yash get shock of his life that Aarti suffering from cancer..feel so bad for her, poor girl..waiting for Yash reaction.

Lol my slow mind finally got what is cancer actually😆

Continue soon😊

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SillySoni

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Posted: 7 years ago

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Congratulations di for complete five years🥳

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Divya333

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Posted: 7 years ago

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Congrats for completing five years.

Nice update... Loved Arti's family how they valued their principles over money...this Yash is shocking...have to see how his feelings change after learning about Arti's health issue...waiting for next update

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Mariam

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Posted: 7 years ago

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The tittle reminds me of shah Rukh khan's movie baazigar(gambler)

The first chapter was awesome now, I really want to know why aarti's father needs a job badly or will aarti survive?

will yash feelings from obsession change to love? Or will he stll want to have her at any cost

update soon

happy 5 years anniversary ❤️

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ksen

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Posted: 7 years ago

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amazing start

very interesting part

loved it

looking forward for the next part

thanks for the pm

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Sharmeen

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Posted: 7 years ago

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Amazing Update Nikki ji 😃

Yash's character is so interesting here.. what promise he was talking about?

And now he's lusting after Aarti.. but poor girl has cancer.. now how will he react to this?

Love the whole update

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Posted: 7 years ago

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Congrats on completing five Years in this forum 👏 🥳

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Posted: 7 years ago

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A Beautiful story sad for Aarti plight she has no clue about her illness a shock for Yash her parents wants her to be happy maybe this is why they have not told her as yet.

Yash what he assumes to be a deep lust for Aarti's body was shaken when he saw her faint and her lack of response. What he thinks is stubborn pride by the poor is actually their belief and self respect for them self and happiness with what little they have they are content their little family has all that is required but tragedy has struck because of Aarti illness he is will to work with Yash for the extra much needed money.

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