Fiction - 'Saudagar!' Chapter - 5, Page - 21 - Page 14

Sharmeen

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Posted: 6 years ago

#131

Awesome Update dear 👏👏

So much happenings Maya and Janaki bored so much😭

Loved this chapter.. 😃

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Mbakwe

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Posted: 6 years ago

#132

Awesome update. Maya finally reunites with her family. I am just loving this Maya; the way she carries Janaki and her children along. She didn't forget all the good things she did for her and her son. Good work. Keep it up

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Taahir

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Posted: 6 years ago

#133

Good to see you around but do take good care of yourself

please give me some time

I promise to read and comment soon

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cuteariya

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Posted: 6 years ago

#134

very emotional chapter

poor yash I feel really bad for him 💔

somewhere I felt sorry for maya also but it was her mistake that landed her in this situation🤔

in fact her 1 mistake cost so much to herself her families especially to yash💔

if janki & her husband wouldn't have help her she & yash would have been death

all thanks to janki & her husband who took care of maya & yash 🤗

all of them became families it was hard time but together they passed the hard time😊

oh hell that bloody monster Prakash still came to maya for his selfish needs disgusting😡

I felt like to kill that disgusting pig right there😡

that asshole even tried to force himself on maya crap😡

poor yash got hurt while saving his mom🥺

seriously poor yash saw so much hard time in his childhood🥺

glad janki & badri was there for maya & yash to support & stand by them🤗

finally maya got courage to fight back with that asshole Prakash & deal with the way he is👏

once again maya & janki got hard time when badri died😭

but both women stand strong for their kids

after all the hard time finally good things came to them😃

wow akash trun out to be suraj son who got so well with yash & amen😃

finally maya got her families back it was so emotional reunion😭

now at least they can be together as happy families😃

continue plz

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pari454

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Posted: 6 years ago

#135

Reserved exams 😭

I will read after exams 😊

Edited by pari454 - 6 years ago

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ksen

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Posted: 6 years ago

#136

amazing update

loved it

thanks for the pm

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Sharlene1410

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Posted: 6 years ago

#137

Hi Nikki Have not checked my pms for a while

so I need to read and comment 😆 please bear with me 😆

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saf24

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Posted: 6 years ago

#138

Superb update as always. Loved the bond between Maya and Janki. Janki and her husband really did lots for Maya and Yash. Fab job as always. Looking forward to what is in store next.

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Taahir

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Posted: 6 years ago

#139

Excellent , Emotional Chapter

The hard and tough reality of life , the difficulties that a person or a family has to undergo

only because financial burdens are so strong but I totally admire both Maya and Janki

these two woman fought against all odds and stood up

made an effort and worked

whether it was been as maids or cook and librarian they worked earned they honest

living and provided the best for their kids

Prakash is just a sore thumb , having his wife and kids still he lusted over Maya promising her he'll treat her just like a queen but she was a respectable woman she had thought she was legally married to him only to find out he was already a married man and all she was , was just a mistress to him

many woman would succumb due to financial pressure but Maya was strong she didn't need his money or luxury apartment and clothes and this very fact was something he could never accept

though he had many other beautiful woman none could match up to Maya

with Janki's husband's death again these two woman were the target of men but they strong persona had led them into a different area opening doors of avenues for them

Aakash a new boy came to the very school that Yash and Aman attended and he immediately became a good friend with their friendship Maya's family had found her after years

yes Parents can never truly stay angry for the rest of their lives they would always seek their children

and likewise Maya's family coming into her life gave her the much needed happiness

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sass8

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Posted: 6 years ago

#140

Hi Nikky,

First sorry for late reply. but as I keep saying all over the place 😳was too busy the past few days to read anything and enjoy it .

Anyway yay for posting 👏 and most important glad that your health is improving (well minus the toothache).

So it got worse before it got better , well for a while, Maya life turn into one tragedy after another 😭but at least she had Yash who helped her survived and fight. Still it was no life, just living on borrow time it seems. I had a feeling that something bad would happened to Badri becasue if his drinking. Its really sad cause he wasn't a bad man but had a fatal flaw.

And the years passed, at least it was not all bleak and the two mothers had each other and there wonderful kids. The less said about Prakash the better 😡. I did wonder if Akash will led her to her family. I am really really happy that her family found her and forgave her.. she has paid for her mistakes far too long, beside everyone deserve a second chance. Of course she couldn't leave Janaki behind after all they have become more than family , they are sisters..

Great chapter now onto the next one..😊 soon😉

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