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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: Shashi1984

As usual superb update Nikki. Yash's story is heart-wrenching. He had gone through so much and his mother suffered so much because of that Prakash Sinha. Glad that Janaki was there with her in this bad phase and saved her from breaking down. It's nice that Aarti came to him and he willingly shared his past with her. Still there is one question if he suffered so much and that Prakash Sinha used his mother, then why he make such a deal with Aarti to sleep with her. Desperate to know how Yash's mother took care of him and how Yash cope when he came to know that his mother had cancer.



Thanks so much Shashi πŸ€—

Had Janaki not been there with Maya, who knows what would have happened to her and Yash.

There is a reason why Yash is so easily sharing his painful past with Aarti. All will be revealed slowly as the story progresses.
You are the only one who's asked the most important question about Yash's conduct. You are right when you ask that why would Yash made such a deal with Aarti after the way Prakash had treated his own mother.

I have something in my mind about this. I hope I'll be able to do justice to why he behaved this way with Aarti.
Like I said, everything will be slowly revealed. You have read MTB from start till the very end and you know very well what I'll try my best to cover all loose ends and do justice with actions (good or bad) of every character,

But the answer for Yash's conduct won't be revealed so soon as now the story is revolving around his childhood and how Maya will survive and raise him. There's so much to show on their journey and I'll try my best to keep updating whenever it's possible for me.





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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: cuteariya

its sure I love strong women rather then weak helpless

I'm fed up seeing that kind of character in tv show that's why I stopped watching them
But it doesn't mean I will skip ur stories as I trust u as passing time u will make them stronger
So no way I'm gonna skip any ur stories as I love u & ur storiesπŸ˜ƒ


Manita you are one crazy girl. And I love you for what you are πŸ€—. It's really an honor to have readers like I do who are still interested in reading my stories ⭐️

You are right, sometimes I show my characters to be weak, but then I also tend to show them becoming strong and standing up for themselves. Like I said, Maya was strong when she left Prakash after learning the whole truth about him. And you will see this strong Maya in the upcoming chapters.

You'll have to be a little patient with me for my updates as I'm going through some tough times. Because of which I'm not able to work on any of my stories. That is why it's taking me time give you any updates.

I'll still try my best to give you a update (on any of my stories) soon 😊





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Posted: 6 years ago



What to do I see this thread on the first page has not moved in two days
tomorrow will spam my own threads πŸ˜†πŸ˜†
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Posted: 6 years ago
Hi Manita, she is still on vacation in India dear πŸ˜ƒ ...
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Posted: 6 years ago
Will try to post the next chapter in few hours πŸ˜ƒ

But on next page πŸ˜ƒ
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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: cuteariya

How r u feeling now dear?


Hey Manita πŸ€—


I'm feeling much better now.

Thanks for bumping my threads and keeping them active πŸ€—

I'll be posting the next chapter soon πŸ˜ƒ
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Posted: 6 years ago
Will try to post the next chapter in few hours πŸ˜ƒ


But on next page πŸ˜ƒ
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Posted: 6 years ago
Reserved for characters sketch
(Which I'll try to do soon) πŸ˜ƒ
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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: lovely_nikki

Reserved for characters sketch

(Which I'll try to do soon) πŸ˜ƒ

hi nikki how r u?
I'm manita & this is my new account as my old account didn't work😭

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