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Posted: 8 years ago
amazing part
well written back story
hope aarti tells yash before it becomes too late
hope yash understands her
looking forward for the next part
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Posted: 8 years ago
This is becoming more complicated from daddies to children,oooh that fool prashnt is yash half bro
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Posted: 8 years ago
awesome updt i luvd it
i wasn't expecting tht prashant is sp n radha's son
he is a bitter greedy evil little man n he needs a beating from yash whch will liv him blck n blue he deserve 2 b g3 son not radha's
plz cont sn n tnx 4 d pm sis.
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Tessaloni

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WOW! VD, I'm blown away! I never saw this coming! I knew there was some back story to Prashant's attitude, and I knew that he was not alone. I never expected such a complex web though! Kudos to you VD!

Coming to the update: I told you I blame SP most for this mess. He was a spineless man and his inaction lead to the seed of hatred being sewn in his own son's heart against him. He especially worsened that by not even including him in his will. I do get the feeling though that whatever amount he gave Prashant would never have been enough.

Prashant had not only become hateful, he also turned into a greedy maniac. I can see that he not only wanted to kill Yash for revenge, it's also because Aarti loved Yash but never loved him. To him, he is just losing another thing to Yash: his father's love, his inheritance, and now Aarti as well. This makes him unstable and all the more dangerous!

Shreya is as evil and crazy as her family. Imagine running after a man, getting close to him, going too far in a drunken state, and not accepting your part of the blame.

Then there is Prashant's uncle. Did he hate SP because he dishonored his sister and never took responsibility? Honor is very important to men so I can see how it can easily transform to hatred. Radha was so good and self reliant yet had such a greedy and hateful man for a brother. I can understand his hatred for SP but to turn his own son against him? To turn a brother against his own brother? That is just sick! Not only is he hateful, he's greedy too! Poor Aarti's father suffered for trusting such a vile man and never even learned the truth!

You said it will grow dangerous and in light of this chapter, I fear just how dangerous it will be. Yash will feel so betrayed and Aarti would only have herself to blame. She was so innocent and really just a pawn. Prashant chose just the right way to ensure that AarYa's love did not stand a chance! Still we all know that there is a very thin line between love and hate, that thin line will be AarYa's one chance!

Loved it VD! Now hurry up! ๐Ÿ˜ก

Excellent analysis. I know it's not my story but i just had to put my 2cents worth๐Ÿ˜ณ
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Posted: 8 years ago
Wow, I guess this explain that. I am impressed by the background and it totally justify the revenge plot, even if it is wrong. ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘.

So it all started with that spineless, coward SP (never took responsibility for anything) ๐Ÿ˜กand even Gayatri was little hard because as she said it wasn't the boy fault but couldnt she has found a little heart and raise him even if she was very hurt. I suppose it was not in his destiny. And Prakash Dubey, what a resentful, hateful man, only put hate in the children heart and raised a spoil brat, Shreya. They will be the one more hurt that Yash or Aarti in the end cause revenge is never satisfying in the end. Poor Prashant unlucky at birth, unlucky in love, no wonder he set this plan in motion, however now his greed has increase and taken over his life; he can only blame himself now if thing turns tragic. Too many people wanted to hurt SP. The sins of the fathers fell on the children it seems, both SP and Prakash.

It was no surprise that Aarti felt for Yash since she has like him since college days but since she is the slaying amour I shudder in advance at Yash reaction when all come to light because Aarti now realize that maybe , just maybe she let herself easily manipulated and now is in too deep to get out.
wonderful chapter๐Ÿ˜ƒ
Edited by sass8 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
Wow what an update didn't see this coming, how deep this hatred goes,looking foward to what comes next, lovely update dear continue soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
omg...what a scheme...from where to where right...and who started all this...prakash/prashant/shreya/...in all this poor yash/arti got trapped...without knowing the truth arti is taking revenge on yash because of her so called friends
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: saf24

Superb update. Liked the background to the characters and the circumstances that lead them to the current state. Looking forward to what is in store next.


Thank You Saf.
I hope the background is clear by now
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: B-onesie

Loved it.

I saw none of that coming, Wonderfully executed plot.๐Ÿ‘โญ๏ธ

I knew there was a puppet master but i never envisioned what transpired in the past. How cruel and unforgiving to go to such extremes. What an awful family. Full of hatred and unforgiveness. to use people so mercilessly to gain their objectives.


I blame SJ's spinelessness for a lot of the events that followed his rejection of Rhada and his son.
But having said that, Prashant had a choice whether he wanted to forgive. He could have extended an olive branch to his brother. But he chose to remain the victim of his own forgiveness, spurred on by his uncle. You would think, being the elder he would have not been so self serving. If he had Prashants best interest at heart,he would not have fueled the hatred, he would have been a kind and loving father to him. That could have made all the difference in Prashant's life.
And this Shreya. How dare she blame Yash for what was consensual in their drunken state. Once again I say an awful family.

They use Aarti as a pawn on this game of theirs to gain wealth and to hurt a man that's only mistake was that he was the son of a man that had no back bone and denied the woman he loved and his son. And for this his innocent was targeted by unscrupulous people.

I am eager to see Yash's response to Aarti's revelation. He will be crushed I'm sure and how will she win his trust back after that I wonder.?

Great going, Beany. Not such a long break this time please.๐Ÿ˜ƒ


Sadly the person is reason of this is no more. He had repented his part but indirectly the seed was there already and Aarti became the pawn of this master game.
I agree with you that Prashant's reason is sonething else. He didnt getvthe right of elder son and that made him more dangerous, not even a complete family, SP couldnt justice with anyone. Well it is already created and now lets see where it will go.

Thank You Bee jee for your love and comment ๐Ÿค—
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Tessaloni

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WOW! VD, I'm blown away! I never saw this coming! I knew there was some back story to Prashant's attitude, and I knew that he was not alone. I never expected such a complex web though! Kudos to you VD!

Coming to the update: I told you I blame SP most for this mess. He was a spineless man and his inaction lead to the seed of hatred being sewn in his own son's heart against him. He especially worsened that by not even including him in his will. I do get the feeling though that whatever amount he gave Prashant would never have been enough.

Prashant had not only become hateful, he also turned into a greedy maniac. I can see that he not only wanted to kill Yash for revenge, it's also because Aarti loved Yash but never loved him. To him, he is just losing another thing to Yash: his father's love, his inheritance, and now Aarti as well. This makes him unstable and all the more dangerous!

Shreya is as evil and crazy as her family. Imagine running after a man, getting close to him, going too far in a drunken state, and not accepting your part of the blame.

Then there is Prashant's uncle. Did he hate SP because he dishonored his sister and never took responsibility? Honor is very important to men so I can see how it can easily transform to hatred. Radha was so good and self reliant yet had such a greedy and hateful man for a brother. I can understand his hatred for SP but to turn his own son against him? To turn a brother against his own brother? That is just sick! Not only is he hateful, he's greedy too! Poor Aarti's father suffered for trusting such a vile man and never even learned the truth!

You said it will grow dangerous and in light of this chapter, I fear just how dangerous it will be. Yash will feel so betrayed and Aarti would only have herself to blame. She was so innocent and really just a pawn. Prashant chose just the right way to ensure that AarYa's love did not stand a chance! Still we all know that there is a very thin line between love and hate, that thin line will be AarYa's one chance!

Loved it VD! Now hurry up! ๐Ÿ˜ก


I have told in Bee's comment also that SP is the main reason. He couldnt stand up for himself and his love and the result is now widespread now that his son and family will face the consequences.
You said it right, Dubey hates SP because he was coward man to face and take his responsibility and for that he used Prashant and poisioned him against his own father and now ge has beckme beast only and can go any way to get his right and power..
Thank You TC, I hope this time i will not get this ๐Ÿ˜ก
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