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saf24

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Posted: 8 years ago

#81

Fantastic job on the update Nikki. That was just amazing the way their relationship changed so quickly. I liked that Aarti stood up for herself against Yash and that Arpita came forward to show Yash that he made a huge mistake. Loved every bit of the update and so looking forward to what is in store next.

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jhil

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Posted: 8 years ago

#82

OMG di... What you did..! You snatched my sleep away

😲

Finally i could read it yesterday night and do you know i kept tossing and turning whole night and whenever i slept this SS come to my dream 😲

This is happening with me first time and so unbelievable..

Seriously i had goosebumps while reading it, you showed it this much perfectly that i couldn't stop my worry in my sleep also..

Well i don't know you will believe it or not but i guessed from first that Arti and Arpita is twin, it was just my guess and woaha..it turned true !

At this moment i am so much confused.. Honestly I am hating Yash but don't know why I am finding a soft corner for him tooo. I know whatever the reason can be playing with a girl's feelings, emotions, specially dignity is such a sin which is not forgivable. But why i feel he will be so guilty so soon, and his revenge has a reason. I feel he is also sensitive that's why he couldn't leave her immediately.. It took time for him to set a plan. He could easily decline the baby at that moment and after the trip, it would be enough humiliation for her.. And that made me more confused..

But I have questions, was the revenge for Aarti or Arpita?

And another this why Aarti didn't say Yash about being twins after the birthmark incident? Normally when we are this much close to anyone we share everything about us. And here Aarti was honest towards her relationship then it is strange that she didn't share this much big thing of her life.

Eh I am very very much confused.. I don't know what more to say expect update sooon

😡

I don't want to loose my sleep again so pretty please UPDATE SOON...

i really can't wait.

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lovely_nikki

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Posted: 8 years ago

#83

Originally posted by: Tessaloni
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I will edit once I have collected my thoughts. it really is a long chapter and your additional notes have given me some food for thought too Didu...

I have ample time since you will only resurface on Tuesday 😃

Edited

I think Mr Scindhia bit off a little bit too much than he could chew and now I kind of pity him! Mr Meticulous DDD is actually fallible: his excellent plan actually has a flaw. I think along the way he got emotionally involved. how could he not? Aarti is sweet, intelligent and passionate. she gives herself to him without hesitation and has given her best to him. I sense a bit of hesitation in that firstly, he did no know how to execute his plan, then he comes back and makes love to her knowing full well that it would be the last time he did so, yet he still goes ahead with his vengeance. it was all the more sloppy because he was not prepared to run into Aarti but he must have thought that fate was smiling at him by delivering her right to his doorstep. I am even more curious what exactly Arpita had done to Prateek which festered so much hate within him, it let him deny his own child... is his hate that deep he would be capable of disregarding his own flesh and blood?

Arpita: I think she used Aarti's name instead of her own for some reason at that convention. why else would Yash be looking for Aarti and not Arpita? was she ashamed of what she might have done that she hid it from her sister with whom she is so close? could this one action be coming back to bite her years later through hurting the one person she loves most?

Aarti was all the more vulnerable to Yash because she is an innocent and the ones who could have warned her were both miles away. she fell in love but had to hide it from them and Yash used her vulnerability to his advantage. blinded by love she did not question any of his actions even when they raised red flags, especially when he stayed away so long after knowing she is pregnant and would start to show soon. she loves sincerely and therefore does not see duplicity in others as she expects that same sincerity in turn. now her faith in others has been broken all because of the devil who had it in for her when all she was doing was giving him her best. 😭

Now that Mr Infallible knows he is indeed fallible, let's see how it proceeds! will he admit to his wrong doing and just how will he atone? how will Aarti dare to trust him again? does she want to be with such a vengeful person no matter what his reasons may be? what happens to the innocent life who will be born into this mess?

Didu please, please, please! work on it soon! 😡 😡 😡😛

Once again you read Yash so well. Yes down the line he's fallen in love with her. His hesitation is clear in his actions. The last night they make love, his conscience priked him a little, that's why Aarti thought that she saw a sheen in his eyes. But he covered it up as soon as it appeared. Why he is ignorant and callous towards his own child will be shown much later when the flashbacks will start. There you'll see Yash's feelings and his conflicts more clearly and what kept on pushing him to take his vengeance.

Regarding whatever you said about Aarti 👏

Sadly Tessa I can't comment or answer any of your questions at this point. In fact I don't think I'll be able to give any answer to any questions for a very long time to come. And that also will only happen through my updates, as this story is anything but...

But I can thank you in every comment. 🤗

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lovely_nikki

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Posted: 8 years ago

#84

Originally posted by: cuteariya
aarti made biggest mistake of her life loving yash
more over giving herself to the monster
aarti never in her worst dream thought that would be happen to her 🥺
now she got pregnant with yash child she was really happy
but her happiness shattered when yash true face come to her 🥺
how disgusting yash is he is such a jerk ass denied his own child 😡
just bcoz Mr yash sindhia thought aarti did wrong to his brother 😡
aarti blindly believe in yash now broke everything 😭
finally truth come out arpita & aarti is twins 😲
now yash know what he did to aarti 😡
hope aarti wont forgive that jerk ass yash 😡
continue plz

Thanks so much Manita for your comments. 🤗

At this point all I can say is that Aarti won't forgive him till the very end. Like I've said, this story will be a bit different. You all will have to be patient to see what happens next.

I'm working on the third chapter but it'll take me some time as it will also have unexpected twists and surprises. 😳

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lovely_nikki

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Posted: 8 years ago

#85

Originally posted by: lassekool
Standing ovation! Nothing like I expected. You were right in warning us not to form any opinions yet. Like Miss B, am on edge waiting for next.

OMG

Thanks so much for such high praises 🤗

And thank you so much for listening to my warnings as in this story nothing is what it looks like, well at least in the first few chapters. 😳

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lovely_nikki

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Posted: 8 years ago

#86

Originally posted by: BusiMusi
Wow awesome, beautiful and amazing update sis i loved it❤️

wow that was a turn of event and now the CRADIOT has a lot to make up for and he better start now.

Now i think prashoot will pay hero and marry Aarti😡i feel sick in my inside think about that 🤢

tnx for the pm sis😊and plz continue soon😃

Thanks so much Busi. 🤗

Hey don't get tensed, Prashant is a very nice guy and he truly will love her. But they won't get married as no one can come between our AarYa 😳

Working on the next part but it'll take some time as it's very intense chapter.

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lovely_nikki

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Posted: 8 years ago

#87

Originally posted by: alekhika20
Asum updt,waiting 4 nxt part.

Thanks 😊

Word Count: 1

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Sharmeen

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Posted: 8 years ago

#88

Waiting for the update.. me enjoying Eid 😉
Eid Mubarak

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B-onesie

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Posted: 8 years ago

#89

Originally posted by: B-onesie
Chapter 3 please!!!!

I see that you are already replying and i have not even commented😳.

So my original comment was thusly.

"Mr. Perfect, businessman extraordinaire planned his revenge for 5 years but never bothered to determine that it was not the right person. And I can forgive him for his callous behavior towards Aarti but not rejecting his own child. That is unforgivable. The child is innocent and purposefully conceived by him to exact vengeance. That just heartless. I love the spunky Arpita. I can't wait to see what the Prateek story is. Why do I get the feeling he is not as innocent as his brother thinks? Can't wait for more!!!!"

But may I just add the following.

I know that certain events in your life and even words spoken over your life has a way of shaping your world, your personality and your actions. And this is surely what happened in this instance.

However, creating a child and rejecting it and it's mother and all for revenge, is beyond ruthless. I know there is a story, to the story, to the story ...😕 So far Arpita seems like a decent person and don't know the Prateek character yet, and so I have to reserve judgment.

But ,,,, a biiig but, it is so difficult to accept these actions of Yash as forgivable.

And yet another but ...But I am looking forward to you redeeming him in my eyes. Never mind Aarti's.

So once again ... Chapter 3!!!!!!!🤣

Edited by B-onesie - 8 years ago

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lovely_nikki

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Posted: 8 years ago

#90

Originally posted by: Alamelu
oh wow..poor arti...so much humiliation ...and right now maybe yash is feeling good...but one corner of his heart probably something telling him this is not right...cannot be right...but now after knowing the truth of arti from arti he for sure will be in pain but ofcoruse will not show it...
have a feeling that no way would arpita have hurt prateek that much it probably was prat eek who over did the accusation ..otherwise arti would know the details for sure...

Thanks Alamelu

You are right, right now Yash is feeling good but the day is not far when he'll realize the extent that he went to avenge and then his life won't be the same.

Rest of your queries will be answered after few chapters when the story goes into flashback. For that you'll have to patiently wait as it'll be another long journey to see what had happened in the past and what's happening in present and what will happen in future.

Sorry about that.

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