AarYa fiction 'Devil's Vengeance' - Chapter - 9, Page - 42 - Page 5

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saf24 thumbnail
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Posted: 8 years ago
#41
Congrats on the new story and very interesting start. Piqued my curiosity immediately. Looking forward to what is in store next. Great job as always.
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Posted: 8 years ago
#42
A great start, pls continue soon.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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I don't have anything to say other than i can't just can;t wait for the following chapter. It is just getting more and more intriguing. The prologues suggests that he loved yet her ruined her life and she knew who he was. Now in this chapter, she doesn't know him but he knows he and goes to great extremes to make her accept a position in his company. And all to fulfill a plan of vengeance.
Like you say, I won't make any judgments before i know a little bit more about the story but I generally don;t like vengeful people. But i am also believe in redemption for every one. If you want to be redeemed that is.

Eagerly waiting!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 8 years ago
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y Yash want revenge on Arthi???
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Posted: 8 years ago
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awesome story and different...
did arpita is cause of yash revenge ?

plz update next chap
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Posted: 8 years ago
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👏👏👏
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Tessaloni

Aarti: naive and starry-eyed! Ambitious with a thirst to prove herself. She believes she is at the right place to kick start her career, little does she know that she is stepping into the devil's lair: into her own distruction before she even gets to live out her dreams...

The signs are there: the look she can't discern the very first time she feels he recognizes her, then again when she enters and meets him up close. She still questions because it seems too good to be true but his reasoning seems plausible. Being true and sincere she does not question when her doubts are cleared. She must be wrong in seeing that look... Right?

Wrong: Yash has set up the perfect trap: DDD my foot! Well at least it applies perfectly to him; he set it up without fault. He ensured that she will fall right into his trap and would satisfy is thirst for vengeance...

Let the fireworks start or better yet, let the fire of his hell start scorching: just be careful that he does not burn along with his victims...

Waiting for the shower of intense emotions from the twist you have up your sleeve Didu



Don't we all feel sorry for Aarti. She entered the building with so many dreams in her eyes only to get trapped in the Devil's Lair 😭

Tess here the DDD suits the Devil the most...

He is Dedicated to ruin her

He Desires to Ruin her and

He's Determined to Ruin her

And that he will 😭


Next intense chapter will come as soon I finsih replying and writing the extra special note for the next chapter 😳



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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Sharlene1410

awesome start ⭐️ nikki i enjoyed reading it 😆 i like aarti and yash will wait to find out more about him 😆 and his vengeance 😆


Thanks so much Sharlene

The next chapter will be up as soon as I finish replying and writing the note. Get ready for lots of angry Emo's for Yash 😭

And lots of sad Emo's for Aarti. 😭
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: cuteariya

interesting chapter
poor aarti got job in sindhia's company
she is very excited for her job but she don't know what big mess she enter
why does yash want revenge from aarti? 😕
she doesn't even know yash
look like aarti got impress with yash charm & personality
continue plz



Thank you so much Manita

You are right Aarti got impressed with Yash's charm and personality not knowing the real face of the Devil. 😭
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: _SharmeenLuvsGC

Kehna ghalat baat hai lekin I would say I LOVE YOUR HUBBY 😆😆

Kia mast titles dete hain yr 😉😃
Hello n Thanku bolna meri taraf se 😆


Originally posted by: _SharmeenLuvsGC

Congratulations n Celebrations for starting a new story 😉
Wonderful Update Nikki ji 😃😃
Aarti Dubey went to Yash's offfice for job.. wo usko dekh ke pehchan gya HOW 😕
I know ye aage pata chal jayega 😆
He wants some kind of revenge fom her.. but she doesn't know him 🤓
Kon tha wo jis ko Yashu ne phone kia
Bht saare sawal me dimagh me 😆
Cont. soon



Ma'am your message has been duly and passed to my hubby 😆
I even told him that you Love Him 😡. Just kidding here. I don't want to embarrass either of you 😆

But can you believe that he has not yet read any single story of mine? Heck he doesn't know what MTB stands for. . This is the first time he heard any of my storyline that also in couple of sentences
Yet he gave the perfect title 😆


Thanks so much for your wishes on my new fiction,

The next chapter will also be full of suspense, mystery and twists and heartbreaks so get ready for it 😭

And thanks for spamming this thread with GuriKa pictures. 😆



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