AarYa fiction 'Devil's Vengeance' - Chapter - 9, Page - 42 - Page 26

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Posted: 7 years ago
Okay back to the future soon nikki di i really need to Know about Yash's accidents and his wrath pretty please sis.
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: BusiMusi

Okay back to the future soon nikki di i really need to Know about Yash's accidents and his wrath pretty please sis.


Sorry Busi, Yash's accident and his wrath won't come anytime soon as we have a long way to go before that.

Right now the story is focusing on what happened between Prateek and Arpita and the remifications and consequences of that. After that Yash will have to find Aarti and then his revenge phase will start. That itself will take some 3-4 chapters.

So I think we have some 10 chapters to go before I show you what you want to see,

I hope I have readers left till then
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: lovely_nikki



Sorry Busi, Yash's accident and his wrath won't come anytime soon as we have a long way to go before that.

Right now the story is focusing on what happened between Prateek and Arpita and the remifications and consequences of that. After that Yash will have to find Aarti and then his revenge phase will start. That itself will take some 3-4 chapters.

So I think we have some 10 chapters to go before I show you what you want to see,

I hope I have readers left till then

πŸ˜” okay i will wait. But i hope it doesn't take too long. It just that am really excited about this story πŸ˜ƒ
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: BusiMusi

πŸ˜” okay i will wait. But i hope it doesn't take too long. It just that am really excited about this story πŸ˜ƒ


The speed with which I update and with the length of the chapters, I don't think it'll happen anytime soon. It took me around three years to work on my other fiction (MTB) which is still not over yet. Don't know how much time this one will take.

That's why I said that I hope I still have readers left by the time I finish this fiction





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Posted: 7 years ago

The Loss of innocence πŸ˜•

It started with a girl with dream and ended up with a woman scorned bent on revenge and lost in her hate partly because of her choice too. All Nishi wanted was to realize some dreams but her father had to take the easy road and sell her for her body. The @sshole got no qualm proposing this awful path. I got stuck on the "darling daughter " comment from her father, so much cynicism from him, selling his daughter without qualm. That seal her fate from that moment. Her mother was no better . The sad thing is they really thought they were doing a good thing for their daughter before of their monetary situation. She became the sacrificing lamb, sad, really sad. I found the "you owe me respect", tragically funny. Really , 😑after selling your daughter, those words no longer mean anything. Where Nishi derailed when the getting the materials things became more important than doing something good of her life despite the awful beginning; she could have risen above this but she chose her path and have to live with it, hence her deep hatred of Aarti, which I think is actually more her own self that she hate because of what she became (but I could be wrong).

I want to feel for Urmila but she has become so hard from being rejected and humiliated by the men in her family. She can no longer see good or bad just her own goal and thirst for revenge. There is no much that can be say about Sanjeev and Vikas except, being a by-product of Urmila hate. Poor Hema, to have landed in this family, her destiny is cruel because she is also a victim. Could she have taken her child and run far away from them, we will never know but her non action is also part of the drama ( I am in no way blaming her because she is too scare to act)

The Scindia, family is a little too haughty (or overconfident), well especially Yash and Prateek, for their own good or for now, but we know that life will teach them a hard lesson later. Vidhi was right, even I wouldn't want a daughter born this way, too much dislike against the feminine gender. Gayatri could see the potential disaster but a little powerless to stop it. Uday overbearing presence is what is causing this and Suraj despite realizing the damage is a little late. Yes, he should have listen to Gayatri.

And what a man to do when your family live hood depends on you. Atul is really between a rock and a hard place. 😑
This chapter was interesting, as you could see the pieces of a puzzle being put together to get to the disaster that we know is coming (since shown in the beginning of the story) and yet I couldn't help to hold my breath and hope things would not get worse but it will. It has the feel of a thriller. 😲

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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: sass8

her deep hatred of Aarti, which I think is actually more her own self that she hate because of what she became

I love this line Sassi sauce and I am in complete agreement!
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Tessaloni

I love this line Sassi sauce and I am in complete agreement!


You both are right. The reason for her hatered is more to do with herself than with Aarti. At the end of the story I've planned to show a conversation on this.

I just hope that I remember those dialogues when I reach that stage
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: lovely_nikki


You both are right. The reason for her hatered is more to do with herself than with Aarti. At the end of the story I've planned to show a conversation on this.

I just hope that I remember those dialogues when I reach that stage



I'll remind youπŸ˜†πŸ˜‰
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: sass8



I'll remind youπŸ˜†πŸ˜‰



You made my day πŸ€—. You have no idea what this one line means to me!

Bless you sweetie ❀️

I'll try to reply on your other comments soon πŸ˜ƒ


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Posted: 7 years ago
oh my...felt real bad for nishi...but then she could have made her choice and stayed away...you are true her parents are responsible of this mess...gayatri did well to bring the sons up well...but inspite of all this yash did really bad with arti...that too knowingly..
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