AarYa fiction 'Devil's Vengeance' - Chapter - 9, Page - 42 - Page 15

lovely_nikki

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Posted: 8 years ago

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Originally posted by: duloharaes
oh wow what to say ?

I had decided since I read the first chapter tht I wouldnt comment till at least chapter 10 so I cn see who is who bt I jst couldnt resist .

brilliant ! excellent ! super !
so I am jst going to go ahead nd say it I have this nagging feeling tht Arpita is not good ! like who does tht to ur own didi .

and I bet Akash or suri nd his dad had something to do with whatever happened to vidhi tht yash spoke about .

where in the world is Prateek ?

Nishi hmmm I bet she is bomb waiting to explode

G3 : let me wait nd see if her good character holds

YASH : NO COMMENT !

wow wow wow nikki you are an amazing writer love it alot .

Oh my! What an complement!

Thanks so much. 🤗

First of all sorry for such a late reply. I'm touched by your praises.

I'm happy that this chapter compelled you to break your silence. I hope I am able to do the same in future also with all my updates.

You said you won't form any opinion but I made you form one on Arpita's character 😉

No she is Not negative or a bad person. Like she said she was only 17 at that time. She was immature and childish. You'll get a much better description on both sisters characters in the next chapter. My only fear is whether I'll be able to do justice to their behavior and characterization.

You are partly right about Aakash and his dad and fully right about Nishi.

I haven't started working on the next part, but do it soon as I know how eagerly you all are waiting for it.

Thanks once again. 🤗

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sass8

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Posted: 8 years ago

#142

Originally posted by: lovely_nikki

Thanks so much my friend for reading, commenting and liking this fiction.

Sorry to say this but this story will also be a painful like MTB. AarYa won't get together till the very end as the hurt is very deep for Aarti to forgive him this easily.

The only thing common in MTB and DV is that here also Gayatri will be a loving and caring MIL.

Now there won't be any surprising twists as the story will go into flashback mode and from there the real story will start.

One by one all secrets and mysteries will start to reveal. 😊

😆oh I wasn't holding my breath on Aarya hapiness cause, well, there will be no story, a short one . Humans are flawed and complex. That said I am happy with the fact that Gayatri will be a loving and caring MIL, I think that add a strong dimension to Aarti & Yash story (beside the clich MIL attitude) and also I think Mother should be strong, giving and supporting especially in difficult time.

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lovely_nikki

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Posted: 8 years ago

#143

Originally posted by: sass8

😆oh I wasn't holding my breath on Aarya hapiness cause, well, there will be no story, a short one . Humans are flawed and complex. That said I am happy with the fact that Gayatri will be a loving and caring MIL, I think that add a strong dimension to Aarti & Yash story (beside the clich MIL attitude) and also I think Mother should be strong, giving and supporting especially in difficult time.

Thanks so much once again.

I usually try not to go the cliche way. Even if I do (which will happen in this story). Then I try to give it my own style. Let's see how and where I go with this one.

There will be three mothers in this story.

Yash's mother. (Gayatri)

Aarti- Arpita's mother (haven't yet decided on her name)

And Prashant's mother. (Shobha)

All three of them will be loving and understanding ladies. Only Aarti's mother dies when she was young.

I was going to start the next chapter with Yash's background story. But I've changed my mind. First I'll show Aarti's background story, starting from her birth.

Happy AarYa you'll see in my other story "Ek Ladki Bheegi Bhagi Si" on which I haven't worked in ages.

What to do, this DV has completely occupied my mind and ruined my peace so much that I can't work and concentrate on anything else 😳

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Jocelyn Phumla

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Posted: 8 years ago

#144

am having a no update epileptic seizures coz am waiting for an update ... i am in complete stalker mode nd I am nw even scared of myself ... update plz

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lovely_nikki

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Posted: 8 years ago

#145

Sorry friends to keep you waiting like this. I'm tangled into something that's why I haven't even started working on the next chapter or any other story of mine. The moment I get out of it, I'll start to work on the next chapter of DV.

Give me few more days time.

Sorry once again 😭

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cuteariya

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Posted: 8 years ago

#146

It's ok sweetie no problem little more day we can wait

First finish ur work dear

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gafulu14

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Posted: 8 years ago

#147

wowww what a thriller ...update
love your story line
u have a wonderful creative thoughts

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Busi

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Posted: 8 years ago

#148

Still waiting nikki Di for your master piece update 😊 please continue sooon sis.

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Busi

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Posted: 8 years ago

#149

Originally posted by: BusiMusi
Still waiting nikki Di for your master piece update 😊 please continue sooon sis.

okay sis i understand 🥺 i will wait until we meet again on your next awesome update. But am hurt 😭

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lovely_nikki

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Posted: 8 years ago

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Sorry Busi dear to break your heart like this.

Like I said I'm stuck with something personal, I've been trying to work on it but am not able to concentrate on it fully due to which I'm forgetting scenes.

I don't want mess with the chapter or else the whole story will be ruined.

I have got an new OS ready. I'll try to post it soon so that you'll get something to read in the meantime. That OS is a sad one, but it's better than not getting any updates

Once again so sorry sweetie 😭

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