AarYa fiction 'Devil's Vengeance' - Chapter - 9, Page - 42 - Page 14

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Posted: 8 years ago
THANKS FOR THE PM NIKKI


these days i am getting a big treat of aarya...i am just reading pv stories whenever i get free time...


So eager to know the identity of the real devil
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: lovely_nikki


And here I was tossing and turning in my bed thinking that I've broken Sharlene's heart 😳 🤔

Who knew that the same Sharlene would end up loving the villains. 😆

Boy you really are in LOVE wth Suri that's why you don't mind to see him in any form 😉

Yes in this story, Pankaj will be a strong person who won't meekly listen and follow his father and grandfather,

AarYa won't come face to face for a while as the story will start in flashback from decades back. 😭


Even I'm loving working on this story.

Thanks so much Sharlene for being one of my biggest supporter. 🤗




Hi Nikki every writer in this forum is evolving taking chances at various topics and making a success of it ⭐️ In this FF there is a huge mystery and with every update we as readers are sitting gripping our seats as to what it is this is like looking at an interesting thriller on tv where at the end of each episode you are anxiously awaiting the next and counting down the days or as a good book you jump to the middle or back to find out what happens only in this case we have to wait patiently 😆😆😆
This FF falls in that category 😆😆
Yes i like the villains as much as the heroes because your description of them is intriguing 😆😆

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: ksen

interesting part

with lots of twists and turns
like prashanth's character and his bond with the sisters
looking forward for the story to unfold
thanks for the pm



Thanks Ksen

Yes Prashant is positive in this fiction. He will be a strong support system to both the sisters. 😳
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: sass8

First I hope its not going to be as painful as MTB (wonderful stroy by the way) but oh well , lets see where you'll take us.
Wow, so much pain and betrayal. First hourray for Gayatri for standing up for what is right. She is right and hope can redeem her familly (althought.. with the upcoming secrets you must have under your sleeve I won't hold my breath). I wonder what happened to Yash and I am intrigue by Aarti attitude.
So Yash who is always so quick to judge deserve a bit of suffering , Prateek who knows what happened , Arpita immature actions and its consequences. and so on . So many twists. 😲




Thanks so much my friend for reading, commenting and liking this fiction.

Sorry to say this but this story will also be a painful like MTB. AarYa won't get together till the very end as the hurt is very deep for Aarti to forgive him this easily.

The only thing common in MTB and DV is that here also Gayatri will be a loving and caring MIL.

Now there won't be any surprising twists as the story will go into flashback mode and from there the real story will start.


One by one all secrets and mysteries will start to reveal. 😊



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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: saf24

You've done a fantastic job on the update Nikki. Didn't see it coming but I love the twiast and turns. I liked that Arpita confronted Yash in front of his family and i'm glad that both sisters agreed to be each other's support at this time. So looking forward to what is in store next.



Thanks so much Saf.

Yes I gave a Shocking twist. That's why I had been warning everyone to not form any opinion or get attached to any characters as some of them are not what they seem.
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: cuteariya

shocking revelation suri isn't nice guy 😲
he is aakash & want to destroy sindhia 😡
how nicely behave with aarti just to make sure aarti would never meet yash 😡
thank god aarti didn't tell him where she is going
past is still mystery what prateek did to arpita that give her nightmare?
yash is completely jerk ass just think abt his brother 😡
still didn't believe what arpita said
I love the part where yash got slapped from arpita & gayetri maa 🤗
but yash deserve more then slap for breaking aarti aarti's heart 😡
poor aarti my heart goes to that innocent soul 🥺
thank god prashant is supporter for aarti & arpita 🤗
I really hope that prashant isn't fake
I love gayetri maa pankaj & vidhi at least they r not heartless like other sindhia
uff vidhi still worried for that beast yash? 🤢
now how did yash met accident?
continue plz


Thanks so much Manita.

You always give such detailed comments. You cover all major scenes in one small comment that in itself is praiseworthy. 👏

It's always an honor to read your comments. 🤗

In one chapter Yash got two slaps. Three if we count the one that Aarti gave him in the office. Yes he deserves more than just three steps for being such a beast 😡


Prashant on the other hand will be a strong supporter of both sisters 😳


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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: BusiMusi

Ooh my poor cradiot 😭. Am just hoping, praying and fasting that he doesn't get amnesia.

At least there are still good people here 😊

plz cont soon sis 😃



Busi you and your sense of humor. 😆. But I'm a fan of it ⭐️. I'll always remember you for this. 🤗

Hoping and praying is good but we don't want you fasting as we want a strong and healthy Busi. 🤗




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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: rakenduvadana

THANKS FOR THE PM NIKKI


these days i am getting a big treat of aarya...i am just reading pv stories whenever i get free time...


So eager to know the identity of the real devil


Thanks Madhu

You are right these days we are getting lots of Amazing treats on AarYa as we've got so many new and amazingly talented writers ⭐️, and not to forget few old ones also.

The identity of the real Devil will be revealed in chapter 5, as I've decided to first show Aarti's background story in the next chapter.

I'll try to start working on it soon 😊



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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Sharlene1410


Hi Nikki every writer in this forum is evolving taking chances at various topics and making a success of it ⭐️ In this FF there is a huge mystery and with every update we as readers are sitting gripping our seats as to what it is this is like looking at an interesting thriller on tv where at the end of each episode you are anxiously awaiting the next and counting down the days or as a good book you jump to the middle or back to find out what happens only in this case we have to wait patiently 😆😆😆
This FF falls in that category 😆😆
Yes i like the villains as much as the heroes because your description of them is intriguing 😆😆


Sharlene you've said such a precious thing to me that I literally have no idea how to thank you. This should express my feelings on what you've said. 🤗 ❤️

I was so touched, overwhelmed, ecstatic by your comments that I even showed them to my husband and he was equally touched.

Since last 2-3 days I was feeling lazy to work on anything. But your kind words have brought back energy in me.


And I agree with you that every writer here is trying to bring something new and unique and fresh in this forum. ⭐️. Can't thank them and you enough for bringing back life in this forum. 🤗




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Posted: 8 years ago
oh wow what to say ?

I had decided since I read the first chapter tht I wouldnt comment till at least chapter 10 so I cn see who is who bt I jst couldnt resist .

brilliant ! excellent ! super !
so I am jst going to go ahead nd say it I have this nagging feeling tht Arpita is not good ! like who does tht to ur own didi .



and I bet Akash or suri nd his dad had something to do with whatever happened to vidhi tht yash spoke about .

where in the world is Prateek ?


Nishi hmmm I bet she is bomb waiting to explode

G3 : let me wait nd see if her good character holds

YASH : NO COMMENT !

wow wow wow nikki you are an amazing writer love it alot .




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