AarYa fiction 'Devil's Vengeance' - Chapter - 9, Page - 42 - Page 13

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Posted: 8 years ago
You've done a fantastic job on the update Nikki. Didn't see it coming but I love the twiast and turns. I liked that Arpita confronted Yash in front of his family and i'm glad that both sisters agreed to be each other's support at this time. So looking forward to what is in store next.
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Posted: 8 years ago
shocking revelation suri isn't nice guy 😲
he is aakash & want to destroy sindhia 😑
how nicely behave with aarti just to make sure aarti would never meet yash 😑
thank god aarti didn't tell him where she is going
past is still mystery what prateek did to arpita that give her nightmare?
yash is completely jerk ass just think abt his brother 😑
still didn't believe what arpita said
I love the part where yash got slapped from arpita & gayetri maa πŸ€—
but yash deserve more then slap for breaking aarti aarti's heart 😑
poor aarti my heart goes to that innocent soul πŸ₯Ί
thank god prashant is supporter for aarti & arpita πŸ€—
I really hope that prashant isn't fake
I love gayetri maa pankaj & vidhi at least they r not heartless like other sindhia
uff vidhi still worried for that beast yash? 🀒
now how did yash met accident?
continue plz
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: lassekool

Hats off to you. What a thriller. Reading it with an open mind. So looking forward to the next update, and more insight on the characters.



Thanks so much LK for such a beautiful comment. πŸ€—

I'm debating who's story to show in the next part, Aarti's or Yash's. The moment I take that decision I'll start to work on the next chapter 😊
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: BusiMusi

Chapter 4 pretty please.

Wow wow wow wow wow wow wow wow wow wow wow wow wow wow wow wow wow wow eyo this unbelievable. Hmm it seem like the cat caught my tongue πŸ˜›.

Am just just heart broken πŸ₯Ί and NIKKI DI you owe me some tissues that i wasted wiping my flowing tears while reading this update.

I just hope Yash will get well soon and i just hope Aarti will get the news Yash is hurt in the critical condition😭. Suri or Akash beware Yash aka Jaidev will come for you.


So sorry Busi to make you cry like this. 😭. I wish I could hug you right now. πŸ₯Ί

But till then this should do. πŸ€—

I hope you are happy with Prashant. He is not evil or bad person in this story, 😳. But Aakash will be 😑

It'll take time for Yash to get well.

i haven't yet decided as what punishment Yash should give to Aakash and his father. 😑
We have a long way to go. We have plenty of time to think on that πŸ˜‰


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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: alekhika20

Gr8 updt,cont soon.
Waiting 4 nxt part


Thanks Alekhika. 😊
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Tessaloni

Didu, Didu, Didu, Didu! my head is spinning with so many twists in just one update!

at least I guessed one thing right in this complex web! Arpita did assume Aarti's identity and that is how Mr Perfect Devil came to make a mistake! Aarti not only got a rude awakening, she finds out that her sisters immature acts have resulted in her ruination. I get why she does not want anything to do with Yash. she is guarding the little bit of self-respect she still has, also despite it all she is in love with him and she knows that would make her vulnerable to him. he used her naivety against her before, now he could use her love; she knows that he is that ruthless. she just wants to move on with her dignity intact and preserve the good feelings she still has for that innocent live within.


I wonder just what transpired between Arpita and Prateek; still mother always knows best so I think Gayatri's hunch that he isn't all that blameless may just be right. still Yash holds onto and tries to justify his stance because the alternative is accepting that he made a mistake and that he let his true love slip away through his own doing, that he was capable of denying his own child and the symbol of that love. so yes he stubbornly defends his actions. yet deep down he knows, he knew Aarti could not be that callous, getting his confirmation when Arpita showed up. he must have struggled to marry the woman his brother intimated to the one he met... not listening to his gut will cost him dearly as now he ended up in an accident, yet in peril he called out her name, he expressed his love... poor soul but he only has himself to blame.


I love the bond of the trio. The two sisters know they can count on Prashant in any situation. he drops everything and comes to them. he wants to defend their honor too, only Aarti won't allow him to. Aarti acted out in hurt and anger and tried to push her sister away but Prashant serves as their glue by justifying Arpita's actions to her. now they can remain a united force supporting each other through everything.


Gayatri, Vidhi, and Pankaj are stuck in a prideful, arrogant, patriarchal household. I like the depiction of Pankaj here. now I get why he chose fashion instead of going the family route. still I wonder what role Vidhi had in the top secret story that Yash said he avenged her too. yet she is not a vengeful person and she is disappointed in her friend's actions. still she looks out for him, she knows he will need support because deep down he is the good friend she always loved and once he gets back to his senses, he will need support.


in hindsight it had always been obvious the Surinder is a villain but we are as innocent as Aarti so he managed to dupe us. Who quits a livelihood no matter how much you want to stand by someone? it was good and well that he took Aarti home but he seemed a little too interested in her business. why did Aarti have to ask him to leave when it was obvious she was discussing personal matters with her sister? he was too sugary and we all know too much of a good thing is not good. wonder who they are and just why they hate the Scindhias so much, just what role they played in separating AarYa... Nishi hmmm just who is she, what does she want?


yes Didu my poor head is still spinning to no end! I am getting more and more intrigued with every update and I can't wait for the next chapter so you best have more sleepless nights soon πŸ˜†πŸ˜† kidding. I don't want you to burn out Didu. but yes update soon you hear? 😑 😑 😑



Tess Tess Tess Tess Tess. πŸ€—

You read my characters so well that sometimes I wonder if you are the writer and I'm the reader.
Once again you are so right in what you said about Aarti. She already gave her everything to him. Now she doesn't want to give away whatever self respect she has left in her. As small scene on this will come in the flashback.

Right now Yash is completely blinded by revenge. He is not thinking at all. Once it sinks to him what he has done then Vidhi's worst fear will come true. Vidhi will have her own backstory. And once again you are right about Pankaj. Right now he is the sane son in the family and he knows the true nature of his grandfather. That's why he is not into family business and started his own company.

And you are right about Suri also. He was too good to be true. He sole intention was to keep an eye on Yash and Aarti's every move. He wanted to make sure that Aarti leaves town and never comes back.
He resigned as his work was done, which was to ruin the mighty Sindhias.

Right now my brain has gone for a small vacation that's why I'm not able to work on anything. The moment it returns, I'll start working. πŸ€—



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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Sharlene1410

Hi Nikki I think i will like this more than MTB β­οΈπŸ˜† I am loving the villains Sorry πŸ˜† this is mysterious thrilling exciting i Just love it β­οΈπŸ‘πŸ˜†

I like G3 poor lady Vidhi is her nice supportive self, in this family Pankaj is making his voice heard good luck to him
Aarti Aripta Prashant their friendship nice but honestly i am more interested in AarYa good or bad together or apart πŸ˜†
Now Akash is in the mix yes i want to know more about him and his father their evil plans πŸ˜†πŸ˜†
I love that this FF is different πŸ˜†β­οΈ
Continue soon πŸ˜†


And here I was tossing and turning in my bed thinking that I've broken Sharlene's heart 😳 πŸ€”

Who knew that the same Sharlene would end up loving the villains. πŸ˜†

Boy you really are in LOVE wth Suri that's why you don't mind to see him in any form πŸ˜‰

Yes in this story, Pankaj will be a strong person who won't meekly listen and follow his father and grandfather,

AarYa won't come face to face for a while as the story will start in flashback from decades back. 😭


Even I'm loving working on this story.

Thanks so much Sharlene for being one of my biggest supporter. πŸ€—



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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: chikcyy

Suri is evil??????!!!! Nikki, you will be my death. I love the bond between Atu and Apu. Prashant is a friend indeed! Yash doesn't feel guilty? Interesting... He truly is a DEVIL BTW,I'm a newbie that is in love with your work πŸ‘


So you have been a stalker till now? πŸ˜‰

Well let me officially welcome you to the forum and to my writing world. πŸ€—

Yes Suri is Aakash, who is evil along with his father.

Here Prashant is a good hearted person. 😳

Thank you so much for such an lovely comment. πŸ€—
Edited by lovely_nikki - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: lovely_nikki



So sorry Busi to make you cry like this.😭. I wish I could hug you right now.πŸ₯Ί

But till then this should do.πŸ€—

I hope you are happy with Prashant. He is not evil or bad person in this story,😳. But Aakash will be😑

It'll take time for Yash to get well.

i haven't yet decided as what punishment Yash should give to Aakash and his father.😑
We have a long way to go. We have plenty of time to think on thatπŸ˜‰


Ooh my poor cradiot 😭. Am just hoping, praying and fasting that he doesn't get amnesia.

At least there are still good people here 😊

plz cont soon sis πŸ˜ƒ
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: B-onesie

I am actually going to stop commenting and just wait for the story to unfold. There are 2 many devils here. I can't keep track. Too much intrigue. I think I might just stop reading till the story is completed


This is by far one of the BEST Comments πŸ‘

Why and how???

It's so good to know that I scared away a reader. 😭

Stop making excuses. 😑

And don't you know by now that with speed with which I write and with the length of my stories it takes ages and ages for them to end? 😳

By then you'd have become a Grandmother. 🀣
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