AarYa fiction 'Devil's Vengeance' - Chapter - 9, Page - 42 - Page 12

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Posted: 8 years ago
Reserving for don't know what. 😳
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Posted: 8 years ago
Hats off to you. What a thriller. Reading it with an open mind. So looking forward to the next update, and more insight on the characters.
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Posted: 8 years ago
Chapter 4 pretty please.

Wow wow wow wow wow wow wow wow wow wow wow wow wow wow wow wow wow wow eyo this unbelievable. Hmm it seem like the cat caught my tongue πŸ˜›.

Am just just heart broken πŸ₯Ί and NIKKI DI you owe me some tissues that i wasted wiping my flowing tears while reading this update.

I just hope Yash will get well soon and i just hope Aarti will get the news Yash is hurt in the critical condition😭. Suri or Akash beware Yash aka Jaidev will come for you.
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Posted: 8 years ago
Gr8 updt,cont soon.
Waiting 4 nxt part
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Posted: 8 years ago
Didu, Didu, Didu, Didu! my head is spinning with so many twists in just one update!
at least I guessed one thing right in this complex web! Arpita did assume Aarti's identity and that is how Mr Perfect Devil came to make a mistake! Aarti not only got a rude awakening, she finds out that her sisters immature acts have resulted in her ruination. I get why she does not want anything to do with Yash. she is guarding the little bit of self-respect she still has, also despite it all she is in love with him and she knows that would make her vulnerable to him. he used her naivety against her before, now he could use her love; she knows that he is that ruthless. she just wants to move on with her dignity intact and preserve the good feelings she still has for that innocent live within.


I wonder just what transpired between Arpita and Prateek; still mother always knows best so I think Gayatri's hunch that he isn't all that blameless may just be right. still Yash holds onto and tries to justify his stance because the alternative is accepting that he made a mistake and that he let his true love slip away through his own doing, that he was capable of denying his own child and the symbol of that love. so yes he stubbornly defends his actions. yet deep down he knows, he knew Aarti could not be that callous, getting his confirmation when Arpita showed up. he must have struggled to marry the woman his brother intimated to the one he met... not listening to his gut will cost him dearly as now he ended up in an accident, yet in peril he called out her name, he expressed his love... poor soul but he only has himself to blame.


I love the bond of the trio. The two sisters know they can count on Prashant in any situation. he drops everything and comes to them. he wants to defend their honor too, only Aarti won't allow him to. Aarti acted out in hurt and anger and tried to push her sister away but Prashant serves as their glue by justifying Arpita's actions to her. now they can remain a united force supporting each other through everything.


Gayatri, Vidhi, and Pankaj are stuck in a prideful, arrogant, patriarchal household. I like the depiction of Pankaj here. now I get why he chose fashion instead of going the family route. still I wonder what role Vidhi had in the top secret story that Yash said he avenged her too. yet she is not a vengeful person and she is disappointed in her friend's actions. still she looks out for him, she knows he will need support because deep down he is the good friend she always loved and once he gets back to his senses, he will need support.


in hindsight it had always been obvious the Surinder is a villain but we are as innocent as Aarti so he managed to dupe us. Who quits a livelihood no matter how much you want to stand by someone? it was good and well that he took Aarti home but he seemed a little too interested in her business. why did Aarti have to ask him to leave when it was obvious she was discussing personal matters with her sister? he was too sugary and we all know too much of a good thing is not good. wonder who they are and just why they hate the Scindhias so much, just what role they played in separating AarYa... Nishi hmmm just who is she, what does she want?


yes Didu my poor head is still spinning to no end! I am getting more and more intrigued with every update and I can't wait for the next chapter so you best have more sleepless nights soon πŸ˜†πŸ˜† kidding. I don't want you to burn out Didu. but yes update soon you hear? 😑 😑 😑


Edited by Tessaloni - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
Hi Nikki I think i will like this more than MTB β­οΈπŸ˜† I am loving the villains Sorry πŸ˜† this is mysterious thrilling exciting i Just love it β­οΈπŸ‘πŸ˜†
I like G3 poor lady Vidhi is her nice supportive self, in this family Pankaj is making his voice heard good luck to him
Aarti Aripta Prashant their friendship nice but honestly i am more interested in AarYa good or bad together or apart πŸ˜†
Now Akash is in the mix yes i want to know more about him and his father their evil plans πŸ˜†πŸ˜†
I love that this FF is different πŸ˜†β­οΈ
Continue soon πŸ˜†
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Posted: 8 years ago
Suri is evil??????!!!! Nikki, you will be my death. I love the bond between Atu and Apu. Prashant is a friend indeed! Yash doesn't feel guilty? Interesting... He truly is a DEVIL BTW,I'm a newbie that is in love with your work πŸ‘
Edited by chikcyy - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
I am actually going to stop commenting and just wait for the story to unfold. There are 2 many devils here. I can't keep track. Too much intrigue. I think I might just stop reading till the story is completed
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Posted: 8 years ago
interesting part
with lots of twists and turns
like prashanth's character and his bond with the sisters
looking forward for the story to unfold
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 8 years ago
First I hope its not going to be as painful as MTB (wonderful stroy by the way) but oh well , lets see where you'll take us.
Wow, so much pain and betrayal. First hourray for Gayatri for standing up for what is right. She is right and hope can redeem her familly (althought.. with the upcoming secrets you must have under your sleeve I won't hold my breath). I wonder what happened to Yash and I am intrigue by Aarti attitude.
So Yash who is always so quick to judge deserve a bit of suffering , Prateek who knows what happened , Arpita immature actions and its consequences. and so on . So many twists. 😲
Edited by sass8 - 8 years ago
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