ViSa OS: I Own the Bloody Shop!!

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OS: I Own the Bloody Shop...!!

Basically this is a fun OS. We all know how hot and happening our AKDUji is and his success just adds to his glamour making girls weak at their knees. Girls will be roaming around him like bees to catch a glimpse of the hottie...handsome husband come with perks😆

"Awww He is so hawwt!"

Sarita choked on the sip of water that she had just taken. Sarita, Vikrant and Abhi are in Rohan-Sheela's reception at a star hotel

"Excuse me?" Sarita asked the girl next to her, who must be of 22-23 years, indeed very pretty.

The girl looked at her coyly and fluttered her eyelashes grinning from ear to ear

"Don't tell me you haven't noticed the hot guy?"

"Not really! Who are you talking about "enquired Sarita

"Ooh you have wasted few good minutes, see he is freaking handsome" she pointed towards Viki, who is talking with guests a bit away from them.

Sarita swallowed the irritation that rose up her throat in the form of fury. She controlled herself not to kick the girl out of her sight

And the girl continued "Poor you. Do wedding annul your licence to look even? Surely window shopping is not a crime, especially when the mannequin is so hot& sexy?"

Sarita did not know how to respond to that stupid statement. She could hardly tell her she had the right to more than window shop. She owned the bloody shop!

"Don't understand how his wife left him free...she must be insane!"

Sarita could only hope that the noises of the guests camouflaged the sound of her gnashing teeth. She wondered how is she able to hear the girl's blabbering without breaking her bloody face

"How do you know all of this, his wife left him free...and anyway, she must be busy with some work? Maybe he's impossible to live with?" Sarita added with irritation

"God damn it, if he were mine, I'd find him impossible to live without ...especially at night!"

Sarita felt the blood rush to her face. How incorrigible was this girl? And what the hell did she know about the nights? And the thought of night, brought back the memories of their first encounter a day before, her face flushed with shy thinking of her Akdu husband

A sigh emerged from deep within her at the thought of sharing bed with him. A kaleidoscope of images flashed through her mind. Of lying under the duvet with their arms and legs entwined, lips searching out each other's pleasure points, deep groans and murmured endearments, reaching out to the stars as one before coming apart in each other's arms and then the bliss of aftermath.

"Ooh...he's coming...!" jumped the girl with joy

Sarita looked to see him walking towards them. Damn, he indeed looked good enough to eat raw, she cursed her own thoughts...And she was not the only one to notice. The witch was looking at him like he was a giant lollipop that she wanted to slurp on

"Listen, is my face looking alright...and my lipstick is not smudged, right?"...girl asked Sarita hurriedly setting her hair straight

Sarita felt like telling her that she looked a fright. The truth though was the girl looked indeed beautiful.

He flashed a big grin seeing them...wait why is he laughing at the random girl, a thought crossed her mind

As he neared them, the girl jumped into his arms grinning ear to ear and Vikrant hugged her tightly patting her head...leaving Sarita perplexed.

After a couple of moments they parted; "how are you my little minx" he asked her in a teasing tone

"I am chillax as always...what's up dude, howz life"...girl asked him still clinging onto him making Sarita even more confused.

"Btw, I know the answer, you look the same drool worthy boring dude...just good for eyes, take me as your girl, I'll add colour to your life" ...She mocked at Vikrant

Hearing her words Sarita felt a fresh bout of anger rising in her heart.

"Shut Up, you never change"...he patted her on cheeks

Vaise tumhari Biwi kaha hain, mujhe meri souten se milayoge nahin, she asked him

"Tum bi na...kabhi sudaroge nahin" ...he faked anger and continued "tum usse milchukihona...??"

"mujhe nahin pata...main kab mili tumhari biwi se" she retorted.

"OK baba...chalo ab milo ye hai meri patni Sarita"...he turned to Sarita and introduced her to the girl. Sarita slipped her hand in his fore arm holding him tightly and flashed a hesitant smile.

"toh bina jaane hi tum dono itni derse kya baate kar rahete" he enquired.

" Vo toh kuch girl talk hain, mujhe introduce nahin karoge" she continued

"Aur Sarita ye hai Jhanvi ki choti behen, ye hai toh jhanvi ki cousin par hum dono ki zyada bantiti" he added.

"Arent you kidding Jiju, ...main toh tumhari aadi gharwali hoona, toh ye jhanvi ki behen kya"...she complained making Sarita to leave a sigh of relief

"Ha ha meri Child Bride bool gaya tha...maaf kardo" he said flashing a pleasant smile, seeing his smile Sarita skipped a heart beat

"Vaise be JIJU tumhe badi zaldi hain...kisne kaha itni zaldi paida hone keliye, tab maan liya mere naseeb nahin hain...jab suna ki tum phirse shaadi karnekeliye tayar ho...socha ab toh mera lottery lagjayega...Par JIJU you are such a mean...mere aane tak ka intazar nahin karsakte, mai to dus saal se tumhari wait kar rahi thi...she snapped him in fake anger

"mujhe kya pata tum abi bi mereliye intazaar kar rahiho, mujhe laga itne saal foreign mein reheneke baad tum toh koi phirangi se shaadi karogi"...he teased her forgetting Sarita's presence

"Jiju shayad tum boolraheho yaha didi bi hain" she reminded him

Hearing her...Sarita laughed in her mind as she understood the girl was indeed teasing her by drooling over Viki while Vikrant stood rooted to spot fearing Sarita's outburst.

Seeing his expressions, wicked idea came to Sarita's mind...she wanted to play with his confusion and left the place with fake anger, not before winking at the girl.

"See what you did, now I have to bear the brunt"...he said to the girl.

"Par JIJU mujhe kya pata tha ki wo tumhari biwi hain, mai toh bas uhi..." She stopped abruptly

"Kya uhi...tumne kuch kaha use"...he asked eagerly

"Chill JIJU...tum toh pure jhoru ka gulaam bangaye, itna bi daro mat, agar kuch kahegi toh main hoona hain"...she teased him

"Just Shut Up and tell me what you said to her" Vikrant asked her.

"maine kuch nahin kaha bus kuch flirt kar rahi thi tumhari biwi ko chidane ke liye", she ended.

"toh tumhe pata tha, Sarita meri biwi hain aur tumne us ke saamne bak-bak karrahithi" he asked.

" If you forgot...you mailed me marriage CD; And JIJU will I ever forgot anything related to you, she spoke emotionally. I am so happy for you JIJU, finally you found your true happiness and peace...she choked on her words her voice cracking into tears.

He pulled her into a hug, kissed her on head saying "I missed you so much honey...I was indeed living in peace with no one to eat my brains"...he teased her lighting the mood

"JIJU"...she cried hitting him on chest playfully.

"Sorry baba...Vaise tum Sarita ke saamne flirt kyu karrahithi" he asked.

"Time pass kar rahithi JIJU, aur une bi pata hona chahiyena mere JIJU kitna handsome hain"...aur handsome pati ke saat saat kuch perks bi hote hain, mere jaise deewani's, she added in a chirpy tone.

"Btw you should thank me JIJU, aaj mere vajah se aapko double shift karne ka chance milega" she winked at him

"You are an impossible impasse...my little minx will you ever change" he hugged her lovingly...!!


This is a time pass OS...hope you guys find this worth entertaining...!!

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Posted: 10 years ago
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FIRST😃

What a fun FF😆
When I started reading I thought at the end Sarita will go to Vikrant and will kiss him right in the mouth and look at the girl and say ' I own the bloody shop'🤣😳 I didn't know she is Jhanvi's cousin hahaha.

Can't wait to see how Vik manaos his wife.

Please do continue and SOON😉
Edited by -Srishty- - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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nandu plz continue
this is si awesome love it
m gettin my daily dosage

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Posted: 10 years ago
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bet me this tym
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A really big, big 🤗 from Akdu Suryavanshi only for you nancy. Go Party
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Originally posted by: Meriam25

nandu plz continue

this is si awesome love it
m gettin my daily dosage


Thanks Monica😊

This time I'll take One Shot seriously no extensions😆

I wrote this to brighten up my mood so that I can concentrate on FF😳
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Na, na, nara, nana *does happy dance* 😛


Nandini: I want that hug☺️ and I edited my first post.
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Originally posted by: -Srishty-



Na, na, nara, nana *does happy dance* 😛


Nandini: I want that hug☺️ and I edited my first post.


Go Nancy...go get your hug, he is all waiting there for you☺️
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: -Srishty-

FIRST😃

What a fun FF😆
When I started reading I thought at the end Sarita will go to Vikrant and will kiss him right in the mouth and look at the girl and say ' I own the bloody shop'🤣😳 I didn't know she is Jhanvi's cousin hahaha.

Can't wait to see how Vik manaos his wife.

Please do continue and SOON😉


I was making Eijaz collage, and was dreaming...aww he is so hot and suddenly I thought of writing some thing fitting the phrase, here is the OS😉

No need to wait to see how Viki manaos his wife...that's left to your imagination> You can use your wildest imagination😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: nandinidavid96


Go Nancy...go get your hug, he is all waiting there for you☺️



I'm greedy and I want a kiss too☺️
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