ViSa FF:Baatein Kuch Ankahee si..Kuch Ansunee si..Hone Lagi..Pt 3 Pg 5 - Page 2

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Posted: 10 years ago
#11
Awesome girl !! Beautifully written . I could visualize everything and couldn't just get enough of it.. Missing Visa badly and this OS has enlightened me..👏😛
Amazing... please do continue..


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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hey all!!
Sooo sorry for not having updated for sucha long time...
I've been coming online all these days with the intention of writing but then sooo many beautiful OSs, FFs and VMs that I end up reading and viewing them and then I start missing ViSa so bad that I start viewing ViSa moments in old epis and all my intentions of writing part 2 go down the drain...
m working on part 2 right now...hopefully will try to post it tonight!!!

P.S. A BIG BIG THANK U TO ALL WRITERS AND VM MAKERS... YOU'LL HAVE REALLY MADE MY DAY IN THE LAST FEW DAYS!!!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
#13
Eagerly looking forward to all OS' and FF's.
A big 🤗 to all creative intellectuals.
Edited by Elita - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#14
This forum is blessed with so many awesome writers like you👏 Thank you for keeping our ViSa memories alive. Would have loved to see this morning after scene between ViSa. So they are going to Mumbai ek baar phir and this time they are in love! no misunderstandings👍🏼. Please update soon😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Ok so here's part 2 for u guys... Sooo sorry for the delay...

It is not what the prologue spoke about but u can say that it is a part before the part I actually had in mind as part 2... a pre part 2!!

Reading some of the romcom kinda OSs and FFs, I too felt like some fun, teasing, ruthna, manana and all the fun mushy stuff...

And there's a bit of surprise at the end too...

I've started work on part 3 so don't worry won't keep you'lll hanging too long...!!!!

Hope you like reading it as much as I am loving writing it!!

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Part 2:

Sarita's eyes popped open at Vikrant's words, "Honeymoon pe???"

Vikrant couldn't figure out Sarita's reaction; he had expected her to start jumping with joy! "Haan, honeymoon pe. Kyu? Tumhe yeh idea accha nahi laga? Was I that bad last night??!"

Sarita blushed profusely but eagerly went on to clarify his doubt, "Nahi, nahi Mr. Suryavanshi...Aisa kuch nahi hai...Mera matlab aisa nahi tha...Seriously...Mera yakeen kijiye...Sacchi...Main toh bas...I mean..."

Seeing Sarita get all harried, he understood she had something else playing on her mind and what she said was all innocent but Vikrant decided to tease her further in order to enjoy her maximum attention, "Jaane do, Sarita. Tumhe jo kehna tha, tum ne keh diya. Main samajh gaya exactly what you meant."

"Nahi, nahi Vikrantji. Please, please believe me, main toh bas yeh keh rahi thi ki..." Sarita tried explaining again.

"Ki kya?" Vikrant cut her short. "Haan? Bolo? Tumne mere dil ke kitne tukde kar diye hai, kya tum jaanti bhi ho?"

Now Sarita understood that Vikrant was simply taking her case. She knew her Mr. Akdu all too well now to know that in real anger, he would never crack such filmy dialogues. She smiled mentally thinking that Mr. Akdu wants to be cajoled and pampered by her and hence, was playing such tricks. The thought of Vikrant desiring her attention filled her with such immense joy that she could not describe it in words.

At first, she thought of playing around with him too but, then gave up that idea in lieu of pampering him and showering him with so much attention that it would indeed make his day. So, Sarita slowly reached up to Vikrant and looked deep into his eyes. I can see my whole world in his deep, smouldering eyes,' thought Sarita to herself and she had to quickly reprimand herself that she had to make him lose himself in her eyes and not vice versa!

Sarita's deep gaze was seeping into his soul. Vikrant didn't want to lose contact even for a fraction of a second by even a tiny, miniscule action such as blinking. But Sarita had something mysterious on her mind and broke the eye contact herself by closing her eyes.

Vikrant stared at her, feeling a little disappointed for no longer being able to see right down to her soul through her beautiful eyes. Little did he imagine that the shutting of the eyes was only to make way for an even better treat; Sarita reached up to his lips and placed first, a tiny kiss on them. She stopped for just a moment but, even in that moment, she did not break contact between her lips and his. She then, kissed him again, a little longer as if now inviting him to join her. He did not disappoint her and immediately took the cue. He kissed her back matching exactly the magnitude of her passion. Their kisses deepened further and further and everytime went up quite some notches so much so that they too were getting surprised by the intensity of passion they had for one another. Finally, though quite unwillingly but, on account of dire need for some air, they broke apart.

Vikrant had a goofy smile on his face like that of a teenager who had had his first kiss. Sarita wondered amusedly to herself if Vikrant would react at all times as if it was his first time! She was falling more and more for her Abhi part II'! She lovingly ruffled his hair and smiled at him gleefully. He thought like he no longer belonged to the human world and was in some sort of a heaven where he was continuously being treated to all the good stuff.

"Mr. Suryavanshi, kya hume honeymoon pe jaane ki jaroorat bhi hai?" Sarita teased him. She continued shyly, "Hum humara har din honeymoon ki tarah hi celebrate kar sakte hai..."

Vikrant was jolted back to his senses, "KYA?? Par kyu?? Tum kyu honeymoon pe nahi jaana chahati?"

She smiled at his childlike tantrums.

He almost pleaded now, "Sarita, hum of course yaha bhi har din celebrate karenge, I do promise to love you for life but, why not on a honeymoon as well...???"
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Posted: 10 years ago
#17
Awesome update😊 But still want the Mumbai trip😉 ,hopefully soon😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#18
Hope you have done your exams well.
Good to see even CA can write as well.
I also try myself, but cant pen down my thoughts.
It's sweet and simple writings.
Keep writing
😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#19
it is v beautiful
visa has made so many writers amoong us
awesome part loved reading it
do continue sooon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#20
What a beautiful, beautiful update! It made me so happy that I felt overwhelmed and it gave me a huge smile on my face.

When ViSa go on honeymoon what will happen to Abhi?

Continue soon👏
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