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ViSa OS- I Will Shield You.
"Rohan stay away from me. Rohan dont come closer. Rohan go away", the fears of sarita were increasing with each step rohan was taking towards her. Rohan exclaimed,"How come, you think that i will leave you. Its because of you that now Vikrant jeeju hates me. Its because of your marriage with him, that i dont have place to live. And still you think i will leave you. You messed with a wrong person, and after today your life would be a hell. Even jeeju wouldnt accept you after today". Sarita begged," Please rohan, i took your sisters place. Atleast respect me". Rohan continued to walk towards her, "If you really meant that, you would have asked jeeju to bring me back home, but you never did that". With each approaching step of rohan, sarita was moving back, and then suddenly her back touched switch and the lights went off. This gave sarita an opportunity to run from there. Rohan immediately switched on the lights, to see sarita nowhere. He looked for her, but he found her nowhere, he shouted, "See, sarita i know you are here. You should better come out yourself, or else it would not be good for you". But sarita didnt come. He, in anger threw a vase of flower. And looked for sarita, here and there. Sarita, saw her phone on the sofa, and she thought of calling vikrant as only he could do something. She carefully, approached towards her phone, but she accidentally stepped on the broken vase, due to which blood started to flow from her feet. Still, she somehow managed to pick up her phone, and dial vikrant's number.
Vikrant was in dilemma. "Whom should i believe. The papers which i saw in sarita's cupboard. Or what sarita said today". Vikrant saw visa papers of sarita in the cupboard. He was deeply enraged. He confronted sarita that day, when she returned back. Sarita was equally shocked, she tried convincing him. But vikrant already made his mind, he left saying, " Sarita i thought you would be perfect mother for my son. You indeed became one, then with your each progression towards this relationship, i thought we can live forever like usual man and wife. But you indeed prove me wrong. You never moved on, and you can never move on. But eloping with raj. How can you steep ao low, betray me abhi and even your friend divya". And he left after saying this.
Suddenly, his phone rang, it was sarita's number. He wanted to pick up her call, but he was not in a state to talk to her, because of the visa papers. He was in dilemma.
On the other side, rohan dragged sarita from back, due to which phone fell on the ground. Vikrant picked up the phone, but only to hear noises. "Leave me rohan, if vikrantji comes to know this, he will not let you live". Sarita warned rohan. "Firstly, after today jeej would not accept you, even if he tries to he would not be able to". Vikrant was unable to believe his ears. Sarita's respect and dignity was at state. He ran to save her, forgetting his dilemma, and all his issues with her. He sat in his car, and drove like crazy. At that time, he was not a decieved person, but a huaband and a lover who can go to any extent for his wife. He called police also to arrive his place.
On the other hand, Sarita tried alot to escape from rohan's trap, but she was unable to. He dragged her with her hair towards the Sarita's room. "Rohan please, i beg you. Atleast not for me but for shiela's sake, whom you love or for abh's who is your sister's son". But rohan was too adament to listen to her. He dragged her, due to which a picture frame dropped and it broke. He tied her on the bed, and was about to come close to her, when vilrant literally broke the doors of the house. He saw blood on there floor with footsteps. He became deeply enraged, rohan saw vikrant looking for him and he locked the room. But vikrant was there to save sarita, so vikrant took his gun from the drawer. Sarita started shouting from the room for vikrant. Vikrant realised that sarita and rohan were in the room. He broke the door. And within a milisecond, strangled rohan. He pointed the gun out at him. "What were you doing. You should have been grateful that i didnt asked the police to arrest you when you were about to rape shiela. But now, you can go so low, and rape another girl. How dare you touch sarita. She is my wife, you have no right to touch her. Or even glance at her. How dare you think that i would never accept her, if you touch her. I love sarita and would love her for eternity, even if she doesnt. I will never let anyone play with her respect and dignity". Sarita was shocked to hear this from vikrant, was it the actual site of vikrant or the one she saw in the morning. All she was wondering, how can a person be so different. In the morning he was accusing her of her plan of eloping with raj, and now he is the one supporting her. And even the one who saved her.
"But jeeju, this girl is not good for you. She planned to go away from you. Yes, jeeju she would elope with raj. I followed her to the visa office. She and raj are planning to betray you". Vikrant was already disgusted by rohan he slapped him and said, "even if she dies. Would you find it a opportunity to forcefully form a relationship with a woman. What type of human being you are. Do you rven know, woman should be respected". Rohan was least interested in the talks of vikrant, he was looking for the opportunity to escape from there. Vikrant continued,"You were my wife's brother. I once considered you my own brother. I dont want to kill you, but i would give you to police". the grip of gun from vikrant's hand loosened a bit. Rohan immediately took the gun from his hand and pointed on vikrant. "You cannot kill me, but indeed i can. So jeeju you considered me your brother and still you didnt let me live here. Now i will take revenge of that slap from you by killing you". He was about to shoot vikrant, when sarita saw broken pieces of glass on the floor. She immediately picked a piece, and pushed rohan, due to which gun fell on the ground thereby pointing the sharp edge of glass towards rohan. "How dare you try killing vikrantji. I will cut you off if you tried doing anything to vikrantji. Dont consider it as a sheer warning, a wife knows how to save her husband from devils like you". Vikrant said to sarita, "Sarita leave that, police would be here by now". Sarita continued, "No Vikrantji, this guy doesnt deserve to live. He ignored all the chances you gave him. Despite the chances, he tried killing you".
Police arrived, before sarita could do anything and arrested him. Vikrant realised that sarita is badly injured, he made her sit on the bed, and brought first aid kit from the cupboard. He started dressing sarita's wounds. Sarita saw care for herself on vikrant's face. Sge removed her feet, and asked him, "why are you doing this Mr Suryavanshi, when you think that i would run with raj. When today i, the morning you yourself saw my visa papers, why did you come to save me". Vikrant replied, "You know why i did this, but why did you save me when you love raj". Sarita continued," i indeed know why you saved me, but you certainly dont. Mr Suryavanshi, i never wanted to elope with raj. I always wantwd to start my life afresh with you. I have seen how much of a good person are you. Hoe much do you care about the people you love. And in this process, i felt for you. I indeed did. But raj thought that i loved him, which i never did. Saw i and divya made this plan. But now Mr suryavanshi, i dont want you to suffer because of me. Today rohan pointed gun on you. What if he would have killed you. I think Mr suryavanshi we were good seperate". Vikrant knew sarita was being too pessimistic, he held sarita's hand, kissed it, which shocked sarita, "i am sorry sarita, for misunderstanding you. I never thought that this was a plan. I m really very sorry. I love you sarita, i indeed do. And after today, i respect you alot. My love for you has increased, but now i m guilty in my own eyes for what i did with you. You can leave me for the sake of yourself, but dont say that you dont deserve to live with me. Because actually, i m the one who should be punished". Tears started rolling down from vikrant's eyes. Sarita kissed vikrant's cheek, and said," i love you too, and this tears would never come between us. My all misunderstandings regarding you were removed when you came to save me". They both hugged eachother passionately. And it was there first night together as man and wife. First night towards there new life.
P.S So finally i am back with another fiction. Its kinda cliche. You people would have seen it in movies amd serials, but i wanted somewhat ViSa take like this. Not that much good, but a rough imagination of my sleepy mind at 2.00 am ;) Do tell me how is it. And yess, no show ending discussions here.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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this is awesome... thoda filmy hai but has logic and suits ViSa better.. wish cvs had rread ur fiction before writing a script.. beautifully written😳😳 i loved reading it👏
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Great update. nice story so what if it resembles movies .
it suits Visa perfectly.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Superb Update👏 beautifully written...loved reading it
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Posted: 11 years ago
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wel written sheetal
loved it v much wanted it to be a bit more longer though
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: coolbakes

this is awesome... thoda filmy hai but has logic and suits ViSa better.. wish cvs had rread ur fiction before writing a script.. beautifully written😳😳 i loved reading it👏

LOL yeah a bit fimy ;) but inspiration it is ;)
and Thankss ;)
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: beatrice_89

Great update. nice story so what if it resembles movies .
it suits Visa perfectly.

Yess, it does suit ViSa. i actually wanted something to happen like this.
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Originally posted by: nandinidavid96

Superb Update👏 beautifully written...loved reading it

Thaaannkyyyouuu 😉

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Originally posted by: Meriam25

wel written sheetal

loved it v much wanted it to be a bit more longer though

even i dint knew it would be this much shorter. next os would be longer pakka ;)
have another os saved in my computer. will share it soon.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: --Nisha--

even i dint knew it would be this much shorter. next os would be longer pakka ;)
have another os saved in my computer. will share it soon.


we are al cravin fr visa scenes here so badly
jus wanted to read as much as poss
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do share the other OS😳
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