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Posted: 11 years ago
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A/N: hey guys! So many of u liked my previous works on Visa, thank you so much dearies.๐Ÿ˜ŠI wanted to write a ViSa FF for so long so here it is. The story continues from prev episode where Vikrant misunderstands her...

Note
: Hey guys I'm saddened that PV is ending. Also the MUs are now cleared.. so I may not continue this Story. With my exams coming up I'm unable to catch the last few episodes of the show either. So.. umm I may continue but I cant guarantee. thanks for liking my work...๐Ÿ˜Š Ur appreciation meant so much. And so sorry for ending this SS here.


Prologue


Raj and Divya's wedding ended on a happy note. Happiest of all was Sarita, now that shadow Raj and Divya's worries left her brain, she wanted to devote her full time to Abhi and not to forget Vikrant. She always craved for love living in the wrong place and just when she thought she was in the wrong place she found love.
She smiled as she recollected the memory involving Vikrant's gift. So Mr. Akdoo knew how to impress a lady. That love card was enough to bring a dreamy smile on her face. What does this mean? That she loved him back.. yes! May be.. No.. She's definitely in love!
This feeling was different not like the feeling she used to get when she saw Raj ages ago. This was pure, devine, blissful.. n one that was not under her control. She always loved Raj because she was his wife! But being Abhi's mother she had fallen in love with Vikrant. Truth to be told love just happens. Like it happened with her.
It was her first Karwa Chaut. She could see Vikrant was a little busy ever since Ravya's marriage commenced. so much that he wouldn't talk much except when interacting with Abhi. She insisted he should spend his time with her, at least during evening to which Abhi forced him agree.
She found it strange.. what happened to that Vikrant who helped her in kitchen, who'd hold her hand or smile at her?? Something was wrong.. She shook it off as her imagination.
But that evening, after he returned from his work she came face to face with that side of him that she was not capable of imagining.
She had been to Divya's place helping her with her karwachaut, sharing some quality girl time with her. Vikrant was not expecting she'd be there silently watching him through the room.

7PM:

Abhi was in his room. Sarita reached to see on Vikrant when he heard him talking.

"Kaise.. Kaise karsakti ho tum mere saat! Ithna bada jhoot.,.ithna bada dhoka!! Aur mere aur Abhi ke saamne tho badi nek banke ghoomti ho. Lekin aaj - aaj tumhe apne gunaahon ki saza milegi.."

The plate of sweets, pooja thali slipped from her hands and he turned around to face a stunned Saritha.

"K.. Kaisi jhoot? Kaunsi saza.." she asked him.

"K.. Kuch nahi.." he hid the revolver behind him which she saw.

"Kya hua Vikrant ji?? Kuch problem hai.. mujhse koi galati hui? Aur kya kya chuparahe hai aap-"

She moved and snatched his hand and was taken aback as revolver fell down on the floor.

"Yeh..yeh gun? Kiski baatein karrahe the apne aap se?"

Vikrant stayed mum.

"KUCH BOLIYE.."

Again silence.

"Mere baare mein? Aap ko lagta hai ki main ne jhoot bola? main natak kar rahi hu? Achanak aap ko ho kya gaya hai?Kya yahi waja hai ki aap muje ignore kar rahe hai?? Maine aaj pura din aap k liye vrat rakha aur aap- Boliye bataay-"

"HAAN! HAAN TUMHARE BAARE MEIN BOL RAHA THA MAIN! main kuch bhi bardasht kar sakta hu lekin JHOOT KO NAHI! AUR JHOOT BOLA HAI TUMNE MUJHE- MAZAK BANADIYA MERE PYAR KO TUMNE!"

"Kya.. main kuch-"

"BAND KARO YEH NATAK! Kab tak karti rahogi yeh jhooti pyar ka drama?? ..Yeh gun dekh rahi ho.. main tumpe ussee din goli chalana chahta tha jis din maine tumhe Raj k saat dekha--- jab tum uske saat bhaagne wali thi.."

For Sarita it was blow after blow. How did he know?

"Kya?? a- aap ne mujhe dekha sangeet k din-"

"HAAN DEKHA MAINE-"

"Aur galat samjh liya.. ek baar bhi mujhse nahi pucha ki kyu gayi waha?" she was shell-shocked obviously.

"Aur kisliye jaati tum., tumhare Dubai visa papers bhi dekh chuka tha main-"

"tho usee waqt puchna tha aapko! ki yeh sab kya hai sarita? Haq banta hai aapka mujhpe.. pucha kyu nahi?"

"Kya puchta? Sacchayi mere saamne thi! Main, mera pyar, Mera Abhi.. tumhare liye kuch maaine nahi rakhta dekh chuka hu main- Maine tumpe ithna vishwaas kiya.. ithna bharosa kiya!! Meri galati thi. meri galati thi ki main tumse pyar kar baitha! "

"Main jaanti thi ki aap mujhse pyar karte ho.. aur main- main aap k pyar mein ithni pagal thi ki maine.. maine aap ki narazgi ko aap ka tension samajh liya, aap ka mujhe waqt na de paane ko maine samjha kaam hai.. LEkin aap tho.. Vikrant ji! Maine koi jhoot nahi bola hai, koi natak nahi kiya. Dhoka maine nahi diya.. dhoka aap ko hua hai. Aksar hum jo dekhte hai, woh sach hota nahi; jo jise jhoot samjhte wohi ach hota hai.. Main intezar karti rahi kab mujhe aap do pyar k shabd sunayenge! Ithna pyar karne lagi aap se Abhi se- Accha toufa diya hai aapne badle mein.. Marna chahte hai na? Maariye.. chalaayiye goli.."

Both Sarita and Vikrant were crying, the pain increasing every second.

She holds on to the gun's end asking him to press the trigger.

"Aap ki nafrat se jeena tho accha hai ki main mar jaaon! chalayiye goli!"

Vikrant drops the gun unable to bear to look at her tear strained face anymore.

"Chali jaao yaha se!" he yelled.

"Jaungi.. aur tabhi vaapis aungi jab aap ko mujh pe vishwaas hojaye. Jaane se pehle yeh kehna chahti hu ki - main bhi aap se pyar karti hu.. sirf aap se! Raj ji se nahi! Kabhi socha nahi tha ki iss tarah kahungi yeh baat aap se! Main samjhaa sakti hu ki woh Visa papers, woh raat ko Raj ji se milna kisliye hai.. lekin aap.. aap samajh nahi paoge.. Jaate jaate yahi ummeed hai ki aap kuch dusron ki sunenge bhi. Kyu ki aksar batein dil mein dabaaya nahi, share kiye jaate hai. Aur unn baaton mein hi galat-faimiya dur ho sakti hai.. good bye!"

With that she left him crying her heart out as she left. Abhi was crying, standing in the door way as he never saw his parents so upset. This was a big fight, he knew. She gave one last hug to Abhi and ran out. No she couldn't bear to see that angry look on Vikrant's face, the fact that he misunderstood her so much that he picked his revolver.

Saritha reached her maayka. There Vikraant was crying while hugging Abhi.. Sarita too was weepin unable to bear this separation...

*BG Ishq Maasoom hai...*
Mohabaton mein Jeene wale Kushnaseeb hai
Mohabaton mein Marne wale bhi Ajeeb hai
Azeem hai humari dastaan jane maan
Fhaaslo pe rehten hai.. lekin kareeb hai


Humkoo maalum hai ...
Ishq maasoom hai
Dil se ho jati hai galtiyannn.
Saabrr se ishq mehruum hai ...


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So how was the prologue.. where did she go?How will Vikz find out truth? Do drop in a comment and lemme know if I should continue..

Dint recheck.. so sorry for spell errors๐Ÿ˜ณ

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Posted: 11 years ago
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wow...new FF...you made an awesome start buddy. I have read your OS...they are amazing. Nice in your story Sarita is aware of Vikrant's state and she left him...this is indeed mind blowing. Please update ASAP๐Ÿ˜Š
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Amazing๐Ÿ‘. Very emotional.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Pryam (is that your name?) wow what a mindblowing start to another story!! All these FFs and OSs make me dislike PV even more because there are so many things lacking in the show.

I'm glad your FF starts with Sarita finding that Vikrant knows about her plan. Wondering where did Sarita goes and I hope when she calms downs she comes back and fight to get his husband and his love back๐Ÿ˜ณ

Do continue soon๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘

Edited by -Nancy- - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Aha...
A new ff...I have read ur stories and they are amazing
This one looks promising tooo ๐Ÿ˜ƒ

Continue soon
Pm me
And when is the first part coming??? โ“
Edited by Quboolhai1234 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: anjalijiji

Amazing๐Ÿ‘. Very emotional.



thanks dear :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: -Nancy-

Pryam (is that your name?) wow what a mindblowing start to another story!! All these FFs and OSs make me dislike PV even more because there are so many things lacking in the show.

I'm glad your FF starts with Sarita finding that Vikrant knows about her plan. Wondering where did Sarita goes and I hope when she calms downs she comes back and fight to get his husband and his love back๐Ÿ˜ณ

Do continue soon๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘



Hey thank you Nancy๐Ÿค— (I suppose that's ur name too๐Ÿ˜ณ). Yes I'm Priya/Priyam/Prii depends on how friends call me๐Ÿ˜†

Glad u liked this idea.. Yeah Sarita should know it soon..โญ๏ธ I mean how long will she keep giving dreamy smiles wid out knowing he's been plotting. I'd hate to see that.๐Ÿฅฑ So it wont happen not in my ff๐Ÿ˜›
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Quboolhai1234

Aha...
A new ff...I have read ur stories and they are amazing
This one looks promising tooo ๐Ÿ˜ƒ

Continue soon
Pm me
And when is the first part coming??? โ“



how many have u read dear?๐Ÿ˜† Now I'm scared because people who read my FFs on other forums r ready to throw tomatoes that I've not updated from so long..๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†

kidding.. thank you so much.๐Ÿค—

Yup next part will be out soon.. 2morro may be. Will pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Beautiful, power packed beginning, Priya!
Please do continue! ๐Ÿ˜ƒ ๐Ÿ˜Š
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Wow a new FF
I have read your OSs
pls update soon
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