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Posted: 11 years ago
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Wow Sheetal finally caught up with last two parts and it's amazing!! I loved the way Sarita made Vikrant understand it was not his fault that Raj died, the way the story is narrated it seems we are watching it!! The feelings feel real.

I'm not liking how Sarita still thinks about Raj but hope she changes her heart once she reads the final letter.

Keep it going!!πŸ‘πŸ‘
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Epilogue:

Sarita cries badly, then she suddenly realises its already 12:10 am, she rushes to

open the last letter by raj. She opens up the letter, and starts to read:

So Sarita, my journey with you is over now. I m leaving you. I left you physically

long ago, but now my letters would not be there with you. Sarita, now you are

ready to live your life without me, you have a person by your side, who loves you.

She gets flashback of how vikrant proposed her some minutes ago.

A person who would save you from any hurdle. She gets flashback of how vikrant

rushes to save her when she was about to get hit by car. A person who knows

everything about you, and wants to change himself for you. She gets flashback

of the day when they got wet in the rain together and when vikrant accompanied

her to her place. A person who knows that you were once meant to be with me,

but still can not help it to fall for you. She gets the flashback of the compliment

which vikrant gave her when they were with vikrant's colleagues. She still

ignores these flashbacks and continuously tries to convince herself that vikrant

cannot replace raj in her life. She continues to read. Sarita, life is too long to

live like this. My journey came to an end, my life came to an end, my letters

came to an end. Now, i want you to move on, start afresh. And i know, even

you are also falling for him. Sarita nodded her head in no. I know Sarita you

do, dont lie. Who said you can fall in love only once, sarita love is not competition,

which has numericals attached to it, when you both click, you both fall for eachother.

And i know, that felt for someone. Dont think that i am feeling bad about it. I aint,

I really aint. Sarita, i m tired of convincing you with these letters. How much

will you love me. Sarita leave me, I want to go, but i cant, because you are

just too sad. I want you to live happily, With kids with a husband. Build your

own small world. Sarita please learn to move on, we were not meant to be

together, and here we are. We are not together, So i want you to now burn

these letters and learn to live alone.

P.S Bye Sarita, all the best for your life ahead.

Sarita realised raj for the first didnt wrote i love you in his letter,

does that mean there love ended with this letter. She recollects

vikrant's words "jhanvi has a different place in my heart, and you acquired a

different place in my heart". She realises only she was the one who thought

that vikrant was replacing raj, vikrant never replaced raj. Like she made a

different place for herself in vikrant's heart. He also made a different place

for himself in his heart. She realises what she did for vikrant was truly because

she had something for him in the heart. Now, when raj finally left her, she

saw how much vikrant was there for her. She realised that she wasnt the only

one, who lost a vital part of her life, even vikrant and abhi did. But they

succeeded in moving on, and she was there, still not leaving raj's hand. She

shouts in anger," I hate you raj, for playing with my heart. I hate you for

leaving me like this. How dare you went like this. You have no right to play

with my and Vikrantji's heart.Raj i m alone, please come back, how can i love

someone else, just how can i do that, when i still love... She closes her eyes to

let the tears flow from her eyes, but instead of raj all the memories of vikrant

snap in front of her. She says to herself, "Sarita, you are also lying to yourself.

How can you love raj, when vikrant is rulling your heart". She questions

herself, "this means that i dont love raj anymore. This means i never loved

him, if i can fall out of love so easily". She reads all the letters of raj,

to get answer of her questions, because her world was now divided into

two parts. She finally realises that the answer is not in these letters, but only

she can answer these questions

Next Morning, She wakes up on the couch, she realises that vikrant didnt come

back to room. She looks for Vikrant all over the house only to be told by aarti

that vikrant called from office saying that he has to leave for Mauritius for

a meeting there. He has asked for his bags to be packed and brought to the

airport, he would collect it from there. She realises what she did last night,

she first gave hope to vikrant, and now she herself backed off. She went to

her room, tears started flowing from her heart, "I was about to tell vikrantji

that finally i want to move on. I want to start a new life with him, and

just then he also left me alone. Why life is so unfair with me". She wipes

her tears and says," I couldnt do anything when raj left me, but now i will

not let vikrantji go like this".

She rushes to his office but doesnt find vikrant there. His secretary

tells him that he left for Mauritius, and asked her not to accomapny him,

as he would be there for a long time. This came another shocker for sarita,

vikrant was at the perks of leaving her alone forever. He was going to never come back.

She rushes to the airport, but airport authorities dont let her in. She pleads

them to let her go inside," Do you think i look like a terrorist, Please

let me go in, My husband is going, i want to meet him, I want to clear

some misunderstandings. Please i will leave him forever if i didn't meet him,

Its really important". Vikrant sees a lady in saari arguing with airport authorites.

He goes closer to see sarita, at first he was overwhelmed that

sarita is finally there but he gets a flashback of what sarita said to

him, so he just rushes inside in anger. The authorities after much argument

let sarita in, only on the condition that a person would accompany her.

Sarita looks for vikrant everywhere, but is unable to find him,

vikrant sees sarita from a distance but doesnt go to her. He keeps on hiding

from sarita. He sees the passion in sarita's eyes while looking for him. Her eyes which

depict desperation to see him.He misses his flight. After searching everywhere,

those authorities ask her to leave as vikrant is nowhere to be seen.

Sarita helplessly walks out. She is there in the waiting area still

hoping that vikrant didnt board that plane. Vikrant notices everything from a

distance, and he just gets carried away with sarita. He follows her outside.

Vikrant plans to tease sarita more, he asks airport authorities to just only

inform Sarita that the plane which just took off for Mauritius crashed.

The authorities after much negotiation agree to do that. They go to sarita,

and do as per vikrant said, Sarita couldnt control herself and breaks down.

Tears starts to roll down her cheek, She realises how much vikrant meant to her.

This news, just shook her to her wits. She says to herself,"Godd, nooo.

You cant take vikrantji away from me. I love him. Why do you always have

to do this with me, whenever i start loving someone, you take them away from me.

Why you are so unfair. I love you vikrant ji. I m really sorry that i realised

it so late, i m really sorry for what i did last night. I wanted to live with you

vikrantji. How can you also leave me. You gave me a complete family,

abhimaan and the love. But now you yourself went like this. Why so much

anger that you had to just go away forever leaving me alone. I want you back

vikrantji, i just want you back". Vikrant is shocked to see sarita so shattered

and devastated just by the news of the plane crash. He walks upto her.

Sarita who is already in a state of shock, when sees vikrant, rushes to hug her.

Everyone watches the dramatic scene. She says to him," ThankGod

vikrantji you are alright. Vikrant i m really sorry for last night. I really

love you alot. I cant afford to loose you, Please dont go away".

She continuously says this, as if she is traumatized just by the news.

He breaks the hug, cups her face and says," HUSH HUSH Sarita, i m here

with you. I will never leave you. Please dont cry". She replies competely

ignoring what vikrant said," Nahi, you wont leave me. You cant leave me".

He hugs her and says," Sarita dont cry, i will never leave you. I cant leave you,

i m bound to be with you. Please dont dont cry. i asked them say this to you". Sarita stops crying

and is about to save something when

vikrant notices that everyone is looking at them. So he takes sarita outside.

She Shouts,"how can you go like this. You left me completely alone.

I know did wrong last night, but yes as you are Mr. Vikrant Suryavanshi, you

had to take revenge on me. Go like this. If something would have happened to

you, have you ever thought what would happen to abhi, and...ME".

And then she shouts," I Love You, and you... You are leaving like this".

Vikrant interrupts her," But last night you yourself said i m your friend".

She shouts again," You are living with me since a month. You dont know

i m mad, i just dont realise what i say. You should have talked to me in the

morning". Vikrant replies," Ohhkaay, so this is also my fault". Sarita says,"Yes

completely. I mean how is this right to leave your lawfully wedded

wife alone in the house, and then next day, you asked aarti to pack your bags.

I mean you dint even bother to call me..."Vikrant realises how much changed s

arita is in a day. She is rightfully arguing with him, not like a friend but like a wife.

He drags sarita towards himself from her waist. Sarita gets shocked and she

stops arguing, he plants a kiss on her forehead, saying," this is for my wife,

who is finally here in my arms". This makes sarita blush. Vikrant leaves her,

but sarita holds his hand and says," Vikrantji, you know i completed the journey

from your friend to your wife long ago, but realised last night and today.

I thought we guys were together because of abhi and because raj left me.

Those feelings which i had for you, i always that they were only as a friend.

That care, which you saw in my eyes for you, was really love. I know,

you forgave me, but Mr.Suryavanshi i m sorry. I loved you long ago, and with

each passing day, my love for you got stronger. I was just unable to bear the fact

that you took place of raj, but you never took his place, you just made a

seperate place for yourself in my heart, so much deep, that now my life is incomplete

without you. People say marriage is for seven lives, i want to live this life

with you to the fullest. I want to wake you up each day like a obedient wife.

I want to make food for you, I want to kids with you. I promise i would

always protect you and abhi. I want to share my every happiness and every

sorrow with you. I want to just die in your arms " Vikrant interrupted," and

i promise that our kids will witness our love. I will always be there with you.

I will never let tears fall from your eyes. If any hurdle comes in your life, i will

be the first one to face it. Each day and every day, i will love you more

and even more".

They both hugged eachother and left for home like a newly wedded couple.

Indeed they were, there lovestory just now started. Now they were completely ready to

fulfill the 7 vows of marriage.

OHHKAAYY, so finally the epilogue is here. For some it maybe a short part, and some might

have expected a suhaagrat, but actually i wanted to end this on this note. With a kiss, and

a promise to be together. Kinda emotional part, because i m kinda saddy saddy today.

But i really worked hard on these dialogues, and maybe wrote them from my heart, and as

it is said, From one heart to another, so hopefully it will touch your hearts also. And yes, please

avoid discussing that she show is going off air in this thread.

So me signing off from P.S I Love You.


Edited by --Nisha-- - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#83
An update, runs to read :P

Edited by Liashna - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#84
Nice one dear!!!
Keep writing nisha. It will be great if we can get
SR as well from you.
Thanks a ton πŸ‘
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Posted: 11 years ago
#85

How can you do this to me? How can you end this?? 😭

Hehehe.. Superb update 😳

Made me go from sad to hope to happy to laughing and now smiling

I have a complaint, couldn't you just let Mr.Suryavanshi come to Mauritius? Sarita could have just followed him na πŸ˜† And i would go and hug Mr.Suryavanshi to make Sarita jealous and make my heart happy 🀣 Problem solved πŸ˜†

Not so glad that it ended πŸ˜› But definitely loved the way it ended. Beautifully written πŸ˜‰

How's your exams going?
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Posted: 11 years ago
#86
Thanks for the amazing update...loved reading it❀️
indeed emotional and heart touching...keep posting buddy

P.S. I love you and your works so much
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Durresyed

Nice one dear!!!
Keep writing nisha. It will be great if we can get
SR as well from you.
Thanks a ton πŸ‘


no not SR πŸ˜† patanahi kyun but i just cant type it πŸ˜† sorryy
and thankssπŸ˜ƒ
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Posted: 11 years ago
#88

Originally posted by: Liashna


How can you do this to me? How can you end this?? 😭

Hehehe.. Superb update 😳

Made me go from sad to hope to happy to laughing and now smiling

I have a complaint, couldn't you just let Mr.Suryavanshi come to Mauritius? Sarita could have just followed him na πŸ˜† And i would go and hug Mr.Suryavanshi to make Sarita jealous and make my heart happy 🀣 Problem solved πŸ˜†

Not so glad that it ended πŸ˜› But definitely loved the way it ended. Beautifully written πŸ˜‰

How's your exams going?


GODD, i dint realise that you also live in mauritius, hahaha next time maybe πŸ˜‰ and maybe then sarita would have brought back to your senses by slapping or something πŸ˜‰

awww you wanted me to continue it? πŸ˜‰ and thankss πŸ˜ƒ

and exams, some went good, some went okay, still left with mcqs
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Posted: 11 years ago
#89

Originally posted by: nandinidavid96

Thanks for the amazing update...loved reading it❀️

indeed emotional and heart touching...keep posting buddy

P.S. I love you and your works so much


Thankyouuu for sucha good response to my writing πŸ˜ƒ
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: --Nisha--


GODD, i dint realise that you also live in mauritius, hahaha next time maybe πŸ˜‰ and maybe then sarita would have brought back to your senses by slapping or something πŸ˜‰

awww you wanted me to continue it? πŸ˜‰ and thankss πŸ˜ƒ

and exams, some went good, some went okay, still left with mcqs



Same here mcqs and chem p5 n physics p4 🀒

Hehehe, I do 😳 I'd prefer a slap from Vikrant than Sarita πŸ˜› But well since it's Srishty here, i don't mind πŸ˜† But it could just be she leaves him, and it'll be me n Mr.Suryavanshi πŸ€ͺ

I WANT you to continue it πŸ˜‰ Though it's upto you 😳 I can just re-read this so many times ⭐️
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