Visa FF- Karwa Chowth UPDATED Part 2.. page 1

Karwa Chowth Day..

Scene 1- Breakfast Table (9:00am)

Sarita is busy serving food to Abhi. Vikrant arrives and sits on his chair.

Abhi- wow Mumma.. ye parathe toh bahut tasty hain...

Vikrant- Aapki mumma har roz tasty cheezen hi banati hai...

Sarita blushes..

Sarita- aur lo beta...

Abhi- mumma aap bhi taste karo na.. aap kabhi hamare sath nahi khati...

Sarita- Nahi beta tum khao.. mumma nahi khayegi...

Vikrant(placing a paratha in his plate ) - baccha zidd kar raha hai toh kha lo na..

Sarita(in a low voice)- nahi... mujhe nahi khana...

Abhi- mumma ... juice...

Sarita- kitchen mein hai lati hoon...

Sarita goes inside to fetch the juice..

Vikrant- ye aaj tumhari mumma ko kya ho gaya...

Abhi- pata nahi daddy... aap hi puchho na kya hua.. unhone nashta bhi nahi kiya mere sath...

Sanjay(house servant) - Sir aaj madam nahi khayengi...unka upvaas hai..

Vikrant who was abt to eat his first bite stopped and asked- upwaas...?? kaisa upwaas??

Sanjay- sir wo aaj karwa chowth hai na... to madam ne aapke liye...(he was trying to control his smile)

Vikrant put his meal back into the plate...

Abhi- Sanjay uncle ye karwa chowth kya hota hai..

Sanjay-Abhi baba... aaj aapke mumma ne aapke daddy ke lambi umra ke liye upwaas rakha hai.. wo pure din kuch nahi khayengi aur na hi pani piyengi...

Sarita came back with the juice..

Abhi (happy) - wow daddy... mumma kitni achhi hai na.. ... aapke liye wo pura din bhooki pyaasi rahengi...

Suddenly Vikrant was blushing..He looked towards Sarita who tried to shy away her eyes...

Sarita- aisa kuch nahi hai beta... sabhi auratein ye upwaas rakhti hain...

Vikrant clearing his throat- Dekho.. ye pura din bhooke rehne ki koi jarurat nahi... bekaar mein tabiyat kharab ho jayegi... chalo khana kha lo...

Sarita(frowning)- aapko mere upwaas rakhne se kya problem hai??

Vikrant- mujhe koi problem nahi... bas main nahi chahta kit um beemar ho jao aur fir uska ilzaam mujhpe lagao...ki mere liye upwaas rakhne se beemar ho gayi...

Sarita - Dekhiye ... aap mujhe karwa chowth ka vrat rakhne se nahi rok sakte..

Vikrant - Thik hai rakho tum upwaas...main to bhar peat khaunga... ye parathe itne tasty lag rahe hain...hai na Abhi...??

Sarita- Dekhiye..parathe ki baat bolke mujhe chiddhaiye mat..

Vikrant- Dekha... parathe ki baat karte hi tumhe bhook lagne lagi na... chalo ab shanty se baith ke nashta kar lo...

Sarita (fuming)- maine kaha na mujhe nahi khana... aap enjoy kijiye apne parathe...

Sarita goes inside her room...Vikrant was smiling ...

Abhi - ye kya kiya daddy... mumma toh gussa ho gayi...

Vikrant (thinking) -Ye gussa nahi tumhare mumma ka pyar hai.. tum nahi samjhoge Abhi..

Vikrant didn't eat at all... He helped Abhi finish his food and went to office...

Scene 2- Visa bedroom (2:00 pm)

Sarita busy adjusting her wardrobe... Her cell phone rings.. It's Vikrant's call..

Sarita picks the call...

Vikrant- busy ho??

Sarita- nahi bas almari saaf kar rahi hoon..

Vikrant- Great.. wo main soch raha tha aaj lunch saath karte hain... mere office ke paas ek naya Chinese restaurant khula hai... tumhe Chinese bahut pasand hai na??

Sarita - aap mujhe fir se chiddha rahe hain...? aapko pata hai na main aaj nahi khaungi... mujhe aapse baat nahi karni... main phone rakh rahi hoon...

Vikrant- are are suno... main mazaak kar raha than na...(his smile could be felt in his voice).

Sarita- hmmm...

Vikrant (in a softer tone)- wo maine ye puchne ke liye phone kiya tha ki tumhe gift mein kya chahiye?

Sarita- gift?? Kaisa gift??

Vikrant- karwa chowth ka gift.. ab tumne subah se mere liye vrat rakha hai to main tumhare liye gift toh la hi sakta hoon na...

Sarita (blushing) - iski koi zarurat nahi...

Vikrant- zarurat toh hai... tum khud nahi bataogi toh main apni pasand se kuch le lunga..

Sarita- hmmm... suniye...

Vikrant- ji kahiiye..

Sarita - agar jyada busy na ho to aaj sham thoda jaldi ghar aa jaiyega..

Vikrant (smiling)- jo hokum madam...

Vikrant disconnected the call...

Both were smiling at their respective ends...

To be continued...

Scene 3- Vikrant's terrace (10 pm)

Sarita was waiting anxiously on the terrace with one eye fixed at the sky and the other one towards the main entrance waiting for Vikrant to come. She was dressed up in a Maroon saaree with heavy embroidery , with her pallu on her head...

She heard the car horn and the sound of main gate opening... Her eyes lit up with happiness and she ran towards the terrace gate but tried to somehow controlled herself . She went towards the far end of the terrace and folded both her hands and tried to sound angry.

Vikrant entered the terrace . Sarita had her face in the opposite direction and she didn't move at all.

Vikrant- are... itni naaraz ho ki mere taraf dekhogi bhi nahi...??

Sarita(rude)- main bhala kyun naaraz hone lagi kisi se...

Vikrant- thodi si to der huyi hai... accha baba lo kaan pakad ke maafi maang raha hoon.. ab toh maaf kar do...

Sarita (turning)- pehle mujhe ye bataiye aap the kahan??? Main kab se bhooki pyasi aapka wait kar rahi hoon aur aap hain ki kaam se fursat nahi...maine kaha thi ki jaldi aa jaiyega magar aap toh aur late aayenge na...

Sarita talked non stop...Vikrant had his eyes fixed at Sarita and was swept off his feet coz of her beauty.. How gorgeous she looked in that saari... He didn't hear even a single word she said..

Sarita- kya hua ?? ab kuch bolte kyun nahi?? Kahan reh gaye the aap?? Main kuch pooch rahi hoon aapse...

Vikrant suddenly regained his senses...

Vikrant(trying to play ingnorant)- kuch kaha tumne??

Sarita - main tab se kahe ja rahi hoon aur aap hai kin a jane kya soch rahe hian... zaroor office ka koi kaam yaad aa gaya hoga... aapka office hi aapki zindagi hai .. aur kuch maayne nahi rakhta aapke liye...

Sarita again turned her face in the other direction..

Vikrant held his hands aroud Sarita's shoulders and moved her towards his face.

Vikrant- Jab meri zindagi mere saamne khadi ho toh mujhe kisi aur ke bare mein sochne ki kya zaroorat hai...

Sarita s couldn't match his eyes... her cheeks turned red.

Vikrant(raising Sarita's face with his hands)-kuch galat kaha maine?

Sarita was all into Vikrant's eyes and could see how much she mattered to him..

Just then, she saw the moon in the sky..

Sarita- chaand aa gaya...

Vikrant(looking at Sarita)- han...mera chaand aa gaya...

Sarita was blushing again.. She moved towards her puja items...

She did the puja and saw chaand from the chhalni... and turned towards Vikrant to see him through it...

She tried touching his feet but Vikrant stopped her..

Vikrant- ye kya kar rahi ho??

Sarita- bina payr chuuye ye puja puri nahi hogi...

Vikrant too bowed down to touch Sarita's feet...

Sarita(moving back)- ye kya kar rahe hain aap?

Vikrant- tumhi ne to kaha ki bina payr chhuye ye puja puri nahi hogi...

Sarita (smiling)- aap bhi na...

Vikrant offered water to sarita who gulped it with glee...Vikrant gave a piece of sweet into Sarita's mouth... He kept looking at her ...

Sarita(interrupting him)- mujhe bahut bhook lag rahi hai...

Vikrant- mujhe bhi..

They moved towards the dining room... On their way down..

Sarita- kyun aapko kyun bhook lag rahi hai itni... aapne apna Chinese lunch nahi enjoy kiya kya...

Vikrant- nahi...nahi kiya...

Sarita (thinking...suddenly she stopped )- aapne lunch nahi kiya...

Vikrant tried to move ahead without answering...Sarita grabbed his hands ..

Sarita- bataiye na...

Vikrant- nahi kia..

Sarita- aapne naashta kiya tha na...

Vikrant didn't answer..

Sarita- aapne subah se kuch nahi khaya...? kyun?? Aap ... My God ...mujhe bataya kyun nahi...aapne...

Vikrant- kyun ... main tumhari lambi umra ke liye vrat nahi rakh sakta... ??

Sarita- ye vrat patni ke liye hota hai... pati ke liye nahi..ye sab karne ki kya zaroorat thi...

Vikrant (giving her own words back)- jab mujhe koi problem nahi to tumhe kya problem hai mere upwaas rakhne se...

Sarita had tears in her eyes...Vikrant swept off those tears smiling..

Vikrant- mere peet me choohe kood rahe hain.. plz khana de do...

Vikrant and Sarita both smiled and moved towards the dining hall... They both had their dinner...

Scene 4- Visa Bedroom (10:30 pm)

Sarita changed into her normal clothes...Vikrant entered...

Vikrant- Abhi so gaya itni jaldi??

Sarita- han aaj bahut pareshan kiya hai isne... thak gaya tha...

Vikrant - pareshan wo karta hai ya tum karti ho sabko??

Sarita- accha... main pareshan karti hoon?? Mujhe itni der terrace par wait karaya.. karwa chowth ke din late se aap aaye... aur pareshan main karti hoon...

Vikrant got something from his office bag...

Vikrant- pareshan toh aapne aaj mujhe bahut kiya hai... samajh mein hi nahi aa raha tha kya gift pasand aayega madam ko...

Sarita saw a small gift pack in his hands... She tried to grab it but Vikrant didn't let her take it..

Vikrant- itni aasani se nahi milega... iske liye pure 2 ghante bhatakna pada hai... aur itni daant bhi suni late hone ke liye...

Sarita - ab de bhi dijiye na mera gift...

Vikrant handed over the packet to her..She opened it hurriedly... It was a lovely "sindoor ki dibbi " made of gold with antique stones all over it...Sarita's eyes lit up as she saw it...She opened it to find it filled with sindoor..

Vikrant- pasand aaya??

Sarita - bahut...

Vikrant- main laga doon??

Sarita nodded (blush blush)

Vikrant took a pinch of sindoor from the dibbi and fill it in Sarita's maang.(forehead)

Sarita again had tears in her eyes...

This time Vikrant moved closer and kissed both her eyes.. Sarita was overwhelmed and she tried to grab his shoulders for a hug...

Vikrant moved closer towards her...

Just then... Abhi woke up...

Abhi- daddy aap aa gaye...?

Sarita Vikrant hurriedly drew apart...

Vikrant (trying to control his anger)- han beta... aa gaye aapke daddy...tum soye kyun nahi ab tak han?? Acche bacche itni der tak nahi jagte...

Abhi- main toh so gaya tha daddy.. abhi neend khul gayi...

Vikrant- bahut acche time par neend khuli hai aapki...

Sarita (smiling)- bacche par kyun gussa ho rahe hai... Abhi... so jao beta... bahut late ho gaya hai...

Sarita couldn't control her laugh now...

Abhi- mumma aap hans kyun rahe ho?? Aur daddy gussa kyun ho rahe hian???

Sarita- aapke daddy pagal ho gaye hain beta..aap so jao ...

Vikrant gave an angry look to Sarita and slept on his side of the bed...Facing against Sarita..

Sarita- good night mr.Suryavanshi..

Vikrant didn't answer.. He forced his eyes to close..

Sarita had another laugh before she slept..😊

Vikrant too was smiling... 😊

Thank You...

hmmm... suniye...hume ye kehnatha ki this is simply awesome...I'm grinning from ear to ear while reading the phone conversation.

it was lovely dear👍🏼..please please please continue soon😃

Heehee fun!! Looking forward to more. Loved this exchange particularly:

Originally posted by: raja.rani

Sarita(frowning)- aapko mere upwaas rakhne se kya problem hai?? Vikrant- mujhe koi problem nahi... bas main nahi chahta kit um beemar ho jao aur fir uska ilzaam mujhpe lagao.

Very in character for both of them! 😃

wow amazing please update the next part soon

well written i loved it dear plz continue 😳

Lovely fic, dear! Enjoyed reading it! Thank you for sharing! 😃

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Thanks a lot!! Please post the rest. I was too afraid