ViSa ts FEATHERS OF LOVE- !!LAST PART 3PAGE 7 12/10- completed - Page 4

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Lovelyyy...AWESOME.๐Ÿ‘...waiting to c more ViSa interaction...please do continue...
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Wooow tht was really awesome update ohh god so cute plzz update soon I m waiting.
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PART 3( last part )


he dragged her out as she followed him confused and scared of what lay ahead... He took her to the dining table and made her sit by the chair...

she looked at him confused and curious as he signaled her to sit and disappeared into the kitchen..

she sat there figietting her fingers nervously as he walked out with a glass of juice and placed it in front of her...

her glances shifted between the glass and him as he took the chair beside her his legs facing her...

she looked at him as he whispered " drinkkk

she kept staring at his sudden service as he sighed and took the glass holding it in front of her...

she quickly gulped it down...

he looked at her pointing his finger to her face as her hands quickly ran along her left cheeks wondering what was wrong... he shaked his head as he stretched his hand wiping the tears from her eyes

" woh.. something fell " she said as she rubbed it as he smiled " i am not abhi sarita "

she looked at him stunned at his care and recognition...

can i ask you something??? if you would like answering you can" he added

she nodded her head as he smiled " sarita... whats with your wedding with raj?? i mean u told me that you were used as furniture etc right!!" he asked

she looked at him her eyes widened... did he doubt her and raj yet again.. did he come to know the plan and is this gonna be her next step in hell

" if you dont want to its fine " he assured her getting up as she held his hand

he looked at her stunnned at her reaction as she nodded her head asking him to sit...

we married 10 years before" she started and told him everything ... the way he had ignored her.. then dhicya.. then her promise to dhivya and how she had broke ties with her parents ... andthen finally how things begun to change and they ah ddecided on the punar vivah...

vikrant listened to every word as it kept shockign him... how can a girl be this giving ?? sacrificing or foolishness he din knwo to define but respect he had to agree she deserved it

" and then he told me he loves me and we decided to call off the wedding " she came to the pount as vikrant continued" but the dealll.. and you lost it yet gain.. right???" he completed guilt in hsi voice his tone calm and serene with his gaze fixed away from meeting hers

she nodded her head as she got up when vikrant whispered " i am sorrryyy... sarita"

she turned shocked and surprised as he continued " you were right.. i am a duffer when it comes to emotions...thats coz i never dealt with many.. an orphan i was i worked all life to prove myself... and then yeah she was there and with abhi i thought my life would start yet again but she left us ... i had to yet again fight the loneliness but this time with my son... and i felt so protective.. i mean... abhi is the one person i have to say is my own... and after his mother the one direction i had was him... i knew the pain of being deprived coz i was all my life... love included ... my world was my son... and i wanted to do everything i can... so much that in the process of trying to be a good father i lost being a human... and i had not realized that i had brough darkness back into your life when it was just about to go away " he spoke continuous as a tear rolled down when he finished...

sarita looked at the great businessman ... the one who's glare would shut people around stand before her opening his heart... guilt and regret clear in his voice... her own fate was way better than his...

she slowly looked up to meet him " there is nothing that can be done now right" she snapped back

" yeah.. but i can free you from me...i mean how much u should have hated.. even afterthe wedding i never failed to doubt you." he said with utmost sincerity shocking her

" yeah sarita he continued " i am not good in hiding what i feel... i have been wrong.. so much that i hate myself now... but not anymore... you can leave us if you don want to stay?

or abhi " she questioned coldly

" i will make him understand ... he will take time but he will..." he assured her as she smiled

" you want me to leave?? " she asked him straight on his face

" i dunno... but i want you to be happy... i am sure of that... and if leaving us is gonna make you happy i wont or let anyone stop you.. in fact u can leave tomo morning itself " he finished as he walked in...


sarita sat there ... her feelings mixed and confused... did he actually open up to her... did he actually feel guilty... no he was not the rude businessman... nor the helpless father she had dealed with... but he was the man she wished to see.. a man who would respect her.. respect her feelings...for once think about her happiness... so much he was ready to put his little child who meant the world to him in pain for her...

as a lone tear escaped her eyes her lips curved a smile...

she walked in to see him sleeping beside his son!

she sat by them observing the two faces... how similar they can be she wondered as both tossed to one side together

"wah.. like father like son...she smiled as she pulled the blanket over lying beside abhi...

next morning the sun rays creeped through the window panes playing peek a boo on his face a she stretched to find the cot beside empty... abhi was still fast asleep though...

he got up dumb struck ... had she left him for good ?? he had told her she can leave but he also knew he wished she would stay... not just for abhi.. but for him as well...

he got up searching the house for her... she was found nowhere..she could have atleast told him.. he ha dtold her he wont stop her... anger and rage shot in his eyes as she rushed out taking his car keys...

he saw his cook come in as he barked at him " did u see sarita "

" sir madmaji left out " he informed as he growled at the poor man taking fast strides to his car

" Mr.SUryavanshi .. ur leaving without the brown socks" she called ...


he froze listening to her voice... no no he was not hallucinating he assured himslef as he heard the voice yet again" Mr.Suryavanshiii" and he turned to see her dressed in a pink saree smiling bright

she looked all dressed and ready

" you are gonna leave " ?? he asked her a bit dull as she nodded whispering " yes...

his face fell as he choked for words and finally managed to say " i will drop you where you wish to go" he offered ...

" sureee..." she agreed..." one minute i will be back and she went into his house

he stood there drained and emoted ... must she really leave " tell her you don want to leave vikrant" his heart told him ... but do you even deserve her... let her go be happy his mind alerted him..

she walked out with her pink purse and smile d" shalll we go??

your bag" he asked her curious

" its already in the car she told him coldly

" already there... he asked...as she smiled..." you wanted to leave so badly " he asked again

" you want me to stay " she asked her tone teasing like ever

noo noo.. lets leave he said as they heard another voice... mummmy dadddyyy good morning...

little abhi came running.. vikrant could hardly smiled knowing his sons smiled would soon be tears...

" abhi go in... i will come in a while " vokrant lashe dat his son as sarita added" abhi beta will come with us " abhi smiled

" why dont you understand... he will feel bad vikrant hissed

" why will he feel abd when he comes with his mumma and daddy she spoke back

" he will feel happy when he comes.. but when we come back he wont

" whyy" she asked all innocent

" well if he comes back without his mumma he will " vikrant blurted...

who said hes gonna come back without mumma sarita said adjusting little abhis hairs...

what!! vikrant was shocked and happy " you are coming back with us ?? he asked

then... don forget i am Sarita Suryavanshi now she said pointing to her mangal sutra

" oh o mumma daddy don start now itself.. mummy we will get late for the park abhi complained as vikrant looked at the mother son duo crunching his eyebrows

" park" he asked

" yeahhh... climate is too good na.. abhi wanted to go " sarita told

you told me you were leaving " he asked ignoring little abhis presence pulling her close by her shoulders

" yeah.. to the park " she whispered

and the bag " he cleared his final doubt

" oh o.. picnic bag daddy little abhi explained

vikrant looked like a toffy given baby as abhi ran to get his shoes " i told you can leave if you want to.. you dont have to force yourself he told her yet again

you told me to leave to a place where i can be happy... right" she asked as he nodded

" so how can a mother be happy away from her son..." she smiled a she continued " vikrantji...love din have a place in life till now... it did go wrong and fate played well... as sarita i dunno how happy i am.. but as abhi;s maa i feel i have got all that i lost.. all the love... all the blessing... there is nothing mroe i could ask for... and you have helped me in a way to keep up my promise to dhivya.. if this was destiny for me... i am more than happy today she said as abhi ran into her arms kissing her on her cheeks as she showered him back

vikrant smiled as he whispered " thank you sarita "


she smiled back " you are not an akdoo after all Mr.Suryavanshi she complemented as they got into the car!!

once back vikrant was talking to some lawyers as vandana and kajri walked in

mom your papers he stretched his hand as vandana looked on confused

" they are your house papers.. i have made the arrangements for the stay to be cancelled... you can live happily there like before he smiled as sarita and abhi walked out

: Mr.Roy this is Abhi my son vikrant introduced and She is my Wife .. SArita he said with firm and pride in his voice shocking the entire lot,,,,and yeah sarita get the guest room ready..ur parents would be coming once we are back after a wekk

" my parents she asked "lost into her world.. yeah when you can forgive us they can forgive you he smiled as he walked out

Mr Roy got up to leave with vikrant following when he turned " Saritaaa he called snapping her out of her thoughts

" help mom pack her things... i have arranged the car in another hour he smiled yet again as sarita hid her chuckles and vandana managed to smile

thye were gone in an hour and abhi smiled mumma mumma we are all alone.. and i have holidays.. we wil play all day" abhi went on with his ranting as sarita was lost in her thoughts...

Vikrant entered " abhii what about a holiday to disney" he smiled as abhi ran to him kissing him tight Mumma mumma.. you will also come na abhi jumped as she nodded her head

yay mumma wont leave me na" he asked as sarita kissed his cheeks nodding ehr ehad and abhi rushed to hsi room to pack his clothes

sarita got up to go when vikrant held her hand" saritaaa...i am not good at words... but plzz don leave him anydayyy he spoke as she turned nodding her head

and just as she was about to turen he whispered " and me tooo...

she looked at him as if thunder had struck her... their gazes met and she could see more thna respect for her in his eyes

she looked at him as she whispered " Mr.Suryavanshiii

vikrant smiled " i Love you...

sarita was taken aback by he blow after blow in her life since last evening.. she had thought her life was filled with darkness and now looked like every gap was shining

" woh... vikrantjii" she hesitated as he said " you take your time... i will wait.. even if its all my life

and walked in

she smiled lost for words tears trailing down her face .. they packed their bag as abhi hugges his father excited both smiling to glory!!

sarita stood ther epouting ehr face as vikrant wondered if his confession had pissed her off

" you are angry with me" he asked

she nodded her ehad

" i am sorry .. i din mean to " he spoke a sshe cut him off " both father and son forgot me in the hug na she fussed

vikrant felt his heart skipped her beat as she nodded his head smiling " Are you still gonna wait all your life ???

vikrant hugged her the next minute pulling her close .. she was taken aback initially but slowly her hands raised over his shoulders pulling him close...

" i am sorry he whipered into her ears

she smiled " you dont have to be...

"yayyy mummy daddy gave friendhip hug...

they smiled as they bent down huggin abhi and both kissed him together

mummy daddy you wont fight na

vikrant smile mischiveouly : if your mumma does not start abhi

" your papa always starts she snapped back

its you Mrs jagdoo he growled

no.. its you Mr Akdoo she scremed as little abhi sat with his hands on his head " ek bhar phirse... Oh God"




and it went on.. but this time their fights led into a happily everafter!!

sarita had indeed been blessed with the most deserving family.. afterall real ppl and real sacrifices have their way... may be god does not answer the way we want but he surely does plan it even better



so that was really long and it din turn out the way i wanted it... hope you all liked it.. plz plz like and leave ur comments!!

if you liek to see more visa OS from my side !! i would love to have genuine opinions and suggestion!!

loads of love
coolbakes



Edited by coolbakes - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#34
Its very nice ๐Ÿ˜Š and loving
Of course do continue writing !!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#35
Aww That Was Sweet. (:

Loved The Ending.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#36
Just loved your story...is indeed beautiful
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Posted: 11 years ago
#37
hey update epilogue of it
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Posted: 11 years ago
#38
Wooow this is so cute

Loved it aaa the way sarita said I luv u


Omg I m tor gone case

I want more bt this is ending part bt I luved it soo cutewa...

Plzzz do write ffs..
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Posted: 11 years ago
#39
awesome..awesome..awesome๐Ÿ‘โญ๏ธ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ!!..such a lovely and beautiful SS on ViSa..totally loved it..you should write more and more dear!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#40
NIce ending ...
Hope u'll do more FFs in the future ...
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