ViSa Pyaar Impossible? yaa Possible? fanfic Part 8 pg 10 - Page 4

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Posted: 11 years ago
#31
good part..finally they had some moments together:) continue soon!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#32
Hai, very nice ff.love to read it.pls continue soon...
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Part 6

Sarita grabs Vikrant's umbrella and goes out the car to pick up Abhi, who rushes to hug Sarita

Sarita: hello prince kaisa tha din

Abhi: boring mama but now I seen you its all good

Sarita: so sweet my darling prince chalo jaldi se in the car its raining

Abhi gets in and hugs Vikrant

Abhi: hi daddy

Vikrant: hi champ you ok?

Abhi: haan

Vikrant smiles and driver drives home and as they are on way home

Vikrant notices Abhi showing his school work and she hugs him as she is proud of him and kisses his cheek Vikrant smiles on as they reach home abhi comes out and quickly jumps on the mud splashing over Vikrant he freezes as he sees his dad get angry and quickly hides behind Sarita

Vikrant: AbhiMaan Suryavanshi

Sarita: Vikrant ji dont shout he gets scared

Vikrant: tum *points finger* dont interfere

Sarita: he is a kid aur mein uske maa hoon so I will interfere

Vikrant takes Abhi's hand and takes him inside as Sarita looks on

Abhi: I am sorry daddy :(

Vikrant: nahi beta I am I shouldnt of shouted

They both hug each other and Vikrant helps Abhi with his homework hour later whilest Sarita is finishing cooking dinner

Sarita: sono

Sanjay: ji madam

Sarita: call Vikrant ji and Abhi its time for dinner

Sanjay: ji madam

Sanjay goes to call Vikrant and Abhi for dinner they both come downstairs and sit on dinner table to see all dishes set out and begin to tuck in

Vikrant: aao Sarita come join us

Sarita: uh nahi wo main pani puri jo

Vikrant nods

Vikrant: I understand

Sarita: have some more

Vikrant: nahi I am full

Sarita thinks: karoos didnt eat much how odd aur full hai

Abhi: finished mama such yummy food

Sarita smiles: thank u prince

Vikrant: Abhi chalo lets finish your homework then its time for bed

Abhi: ok daddy

Abhi gives Sarita a hug and kiss and makes his way upstairs and Sarita smiles an hour or 2 later Vikrant comes downstairs wearing long kurta and jeans with umbrella Sarita looks up and frowns

Sarita thinking: arrey wah karoos aaj suit remove kiya jaldi se leekan kaha jaa rahe hain

Vikrant & Sarita: sono

Vikrant & Sarita: bolo

They both shake there heads

Vikrant: chalo

Sarita: leekan kaha

Vikrant ignores Sarita's questions and calls Sanjay and tells him to tell the driver to bring the car out

Sarita: Mujhe jawab doo Vikrant Ji

Car pulls up

Vikrant: sab kuch revealed hoga chalo

Sarita thinking: yeh karoos bhi na kabhi nahi samjo ge issko

Sarita and Vikrant enter the car and as they drive Sarita notices the Paani puri she smiles and just looks at Vikrant

Sarita: hum yaha

Vikrant: you know what your problem is you ask too many questions

Sarita becomes irratated: haan tou

Vikrant: chalo

Sarita comes out of the car and its pouring down with Rain she goes and sits on the bench where paani puri's Vikrant orders the paani puri's

Sarita: tou issliye you didnt eat much

Vikrant: hmmm

Vikrant puts one plate of paani puri infront of Sarita and one infront of him

Vikrant: lets see who can eat more shall we?

Sarita: fine but I must tell you mein tou champion hoon iss comptition mein

Vikrant: dekhte hain

After going through 5 Vikrant is full he looks at Sarita who is just on her 10th one and she looks at vikrant and eats it slowly

Vikrant: tum larki ho na

Sarita: kyun koi shak haar gaye ho aap karoos ji

Vikrant stands up: kya kaha

Sarita: karoos, akar

before he could go face to face with Sarita she quickly goes by the car in the rain

Vikrant pays the guy and just shakes his head as he looks at Sarita splashing herself with rain he comes out with Umbrella and Sarita grabs his umbrella and throws it out of his hands and laughs he grabs her hand and goes closer to her then looks at her intensively and removes a strand of her from her face there eyes meet suddenly he lets go of her hand and her eyes lower and they both get in the car total utter silence apart from there thoughts

ViSa: yeh maine kya kiya

Vikrant: khud ko dhoka de raha hoon she loves Raj still and she is just the mother of my child bas I cant love her I cant

Sarita: I am just the mother of Abhi bas nothing else, aur Raj ji he is still ruling my mind kya karon

on the entrie journey way home they both remained silent

to be continued if you want me to that is lols

Love Noori

Edited by CrazyNoori - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#34
Nice one...hope to see such fun loving tracks in the show...ViSa eating paani-puri & getting WET in the rain...๐Ÿ˜‰
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Posted: 11 years ago
#35
awsum..plz pm me ur nxt update... plzzz :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
#36
very nice continuation..Sarita and Vikrant are falling in love!!continue soon ๐Ÿ˜Š
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Posted: 11 years ago
#37
thanx for liking and commenting guys means alot! mwahs xxx
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Posted: 11 years ago
#38
i wish they include these scenes...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#39
vry nice, i like your ending vry nice i think this would happen in the show in a few months i guess.
plz continue๐Ÿ˜›
waiting eagerly

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Posted: 11 years ago
#40
Awesome...Update Soon & Plzzz PM Me ๐Ÿ˜Š
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