ViSa Pyaar Impossible? yaa Possible? fanfic Part 8 pg 10 - Page 2

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Posted: 11 years ago
#11
lovely part Noori..Sarita-Vikrant are married:) I am liking your idea of hate love story..really excited for this ff..do continue soonπŸ˜ƒ thank youπŸ€—
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Very good update partner lol. Ur cyber papa is doing amazing
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: kath1

amazing update. can't wait for the next on. thanks for the pm 😊



Thank you and your welcome πŸ˜ƒ

Originally posted by: shahsb_26

wow!!! Can't wait... Ab Kya hoga Raj ka!!
Lol.. I don't care... ;) Don't focus there


Hahahahaha you joker πŸ˜†

Originally posted by: Bul3

lovely part Noori..Sarita-Vikrant are married:) I am liking your idea of hate love story..really excited for this ff..do continue soonπŸ˜ƒ thank youπŸ€—


Thank you so much and glad u loving it πŸ˜›

Originally posted by: sweetsana1

Very good update partner lol. Ur cyber papa is doing amazing


Thank u partner indeed he is πŸ˜ƒ

Originally posted by: farina_1992

i like it❀️


aaww thank you πŸ˜‰

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Posted: 11 years ago
#14

Part 3

Its Bidaai time and as Sarita is walking away from the house she sees Raj by the gate and suddenly Bhula dena Mujhe from Aashiqui plays as she sits in the car she looks down not able to meet Raj's eyes as she leaves in the car

Abhi: kya hua mama

Sarita forces a smile: arrey kuch nahi beta

Abhi: why do u look so sad?

Sarita: nahi tou infact I am excited to finally come home to you

Abhi: and daddy right mama

Vikrant looks at Sarita waiting for her answer instead she just gives a faint smile and nods her head

Vikrant: aur aaj Mama apne prince kay liye ek story bhi sunaye ge haina

Sarita: Ji

Abhi: yayy I am so excited mama

then they reach Suryavanshi residence the house is decorated from outside and as they get out of the car we see Vikrant speed infront and get inside the house as Sarita frowns and holds Abhi's hand she sees the door shut then suddenly Vikrant opens and we tali in his hand

Sarita: yeh saab kya hai

Abhi: uff ho mama daddy aapko welcome karenge na

He does the arti around Sarita's head then throws flowers at her and puts a red dot on her head then puts the pot of rice down and Sarita knocks it down with her right foot as she enters then Vikrant grabs a tali which has red mixture and puts down as Sarita puts her feet in the tali and she starts walking leaving her foot prints behind in red she goes to the kitchen straight away and makes warm milk for abhi

Vikrant thinking to himself: arrey why she gone to the kitchen *he frowns*

Sarita returns with warm glass of milk in her hand

Sarita: mere prince kay liye garam dhood

Abhi smiles: thank you mama

Vikrant: arrey vah sometimes u argue with me when it comes to drinking your milk

Abhi gives a cheeky smile: mama hai itne pyaari naaa

Vikrant smiles at Abhi: chalo be a good boy and get ready for bed hmmm

Abhi: ok daddy

Abhi goes upstairs and Sarita was just about to go upstairs

Vikrant: ek min Sarita

Sarita stops

Vikrant: ek baat mere suno kyunki ek baar I am just going to say this, Never ever let my son know or feel what differences we have at all because yesturday he had torn all your photos up and you know why? because he had heard our arguement plus you and your confession about Raj I had to calm him down

Sarita begins to walk away then Vikrant grabs her hand

Vikrant: not a single feeling or word should utter from you, always remember your only here for Abhi bas

Sarita walks away and goes to Abhi's room

Abhi: mamaaa time for story

Sarita: haan chalo get in bed *sarita smiles*

Sarita begins reading Abhi a story few moments later abhi is fast asleep and sarita gives him a good night kiss then she enters Vikrant's room

To be continued

Wait and Watch

Edited by CrazyNoori - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#15
i can't wait . update soon 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awww love the update. Arrey Noori, Abhi gettin a mama before u πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†. Go and say to Cyber papa u want cyber mama, ask how Abhi gets so quick and u don πŸ˜†
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Posted: 11 years ago
#17
nice continuation dear but plz give longer updates 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#18

Originally posted by: sweetsana1

Awww love the update. Arrey Noori, Abhi gettin a mama before u πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†. Go and say to Cyber papa u want cyber mama, ask how Abhi gets so quick and u don πŸ˜†


you know what i willl! *snifs* lols and thank u guys for your sweet comments i just need a lil more comments then i will continue
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Posted: 11 years ago
#19
thank u jus goin to continue :) writting it now lol
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Omg...this is sooo good πŸ‘ eagarly waiting for your next post...you're superb!!!!
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