ViSa Pyaar Impossible? yaa Possible? fanfic Part 8 pg 10

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Ok guys I decided to do a fanfic on what it would be like if ViSa got married the story will start from pre cap but I will add my lil bit to it ;) but if u want me to continue please comment below :)


Part one

Sarita rushes to Vikrant's house as she has decided to tell him that she can no longer marry him and break the condition set she reaches the house ringing the doorbell continuesly the servant answers the door and Sarita rushes inside and orders the servant to call Vikrant this instant after a min or 2 vikrant enters and gestures Sarita to sit as he is on a call

Vikrant: dekho I want that deal at any cost understood make it happen

Vikrant disconnects his call and looks over to Sarita whose still standing and figiting with her fingers as she looks at Vikrant

Vikrant: kya hua everything ok?

Sarita: I cant marry you

not knowing to them Abhimaan is listening to everything

Vikrant: kya matalab have u forgotten our little condition?

Sarita: I am sorry Vikrant ji but I I

Sarita then turns to leave but Vikrant grabs her arm tightly

Vikrant: you cant just leave and say you cant marry me

Sarita: RAJ ji LOVES ME

she shouts

Vikrant is shocked and Abhimaan runs away from there and goes to his room tearing down each and every photo of Sarita whilest Vikrant grips her arm tighter

Vikrant: after ten years he treats you like a fool and now *he laughs* he loves you because your suddenly getting married again wah kya pyaar hai

Sarita: dont you dare question his love

Vikrant pulls Sarita close to him: listen and listen good I will do what I want when I want because I am Vikrant Suryavanshi and this marriage will happen and you know why? For my son he looks up to you as his mother and look what your doing

Vikrant lets go off Sarita and storms off whilest Sarita suddenly realises about Abhimaan and leaves the house teary eyed and gets into the rickshaw

Sarita: main yeh kaise bhol gaye kay mein Abhimaan ke maa baney wali hoon aur mein yeh rishta thod ne wali thi *she thinks to herself*

as she enters the house and goes to her bedroom she sees Raj sitting on her bed in the dark and she frowns

Sarita: kya hua Raj ji

Raj: Mubarak ho *he scoffs*

Sarita frowns: matalab

Raj: arrey you told Vikrant you want to marry him tommrow thats the reason u went there not to tell him its over

Sarita: nahi raj ji thats not true

Raj: bas huh bas he rang and told me

Sarita: no please listen he is lying

Raj leaves her room as she tries to explain and then returns with the wedding outfit she wore on there wedding day he throws oil over it and lits a match and burns her wedding outfit right before her eyes then he grabs her and removes her mangal sutar and the beads slowly hit the ground and finally removes her sindoor

Raj: ab tum azaad ho iss rishtey se mujhe se

Raj leaves and sarita drops down with tears comin down her face as she sees the flames

To be continued?

You guys want I continue?

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Plz do i so hope Viki and Sarita get married :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
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you could continue but Vikrant and Sartia must live happily and in love.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Yes, I am waiting for further story...
btw, boy's name is Abhimaan! ;)
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Yeah continue then send to he CV's lol, they need some inspiration
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: shahsb_26

Yes, I am waiting for further story...
btw, boy's name is Abhimaan! ;)



lols my bad πŸ˜† and thanxxx, thank u for your comments guys part two will be up tonight πŸ˜ƒ
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Posted: 11 years ago
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very nice so farπŸ‘πŸΌ..I would like the angle where Vikrant not as much as forces Sarita but Abhimaan's situation leaves them in no choice but to get married..which leaves room for Vikrant's character to be positive and Sarita-Vikrant's relatioship starting from there!..please continue 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Part 2

As Vikrant is about to go to his room he notices Abhi's room pictures of Sarita all torn and he pretends to be asleep but Vikrant can hear his silent cries and enters his room and sits on his bed and jus hugs him tightly

Vikrant: abhi yeh sab kya hai?

Abhi: daddy, mama isnt coming is she?

Vikrant: kya matalab who told you this

Abhi: I heard you and Mama arguing she said she loves Raj uncle and I got angry and just

Vikrant cuts him off: nahi beta she only loves him as a friend bas you heard wrong

Abhi: ok daddy I love you and mama loads

Vikrant: I love you too beta chalo sleep tommrow is going to be a big day

Abhi frowns and shrugs and just closes his eyes as Vikrant is tapping his head lightly as he thinks

Vikrant: dont worry beta I will bring your mama home to you any way poss

Its the next day and suddenly theres loud knocking on the door Raj wakes up and goes to answer it everyone else one by one come out to the hall we see Raj looking shocked

Vikrant: kya hua Raj arent you going to welcome us in *he smiles*

We see Vikrant along with friends and family in wedding attire all of Raj's family look on shocked and the entire family and friends come in including decorators to do the house leaving Raj taken aback, the pandit ji sets up everything

Raj: uh haan come in come in I will be right back

Raj goes into his room and wakes sarita up

Sarita: um kya hua Raj ji

Raj ji: aaj aapke shaadi hai khosh ho na aap

Sarita frowns: kya

Raj: haan Sarita ji haaan

then suddenly theres a knock Raj goes to answer and we see its vandana Holding a big tali which is covered with red cloth

Vandana: can I come in *she smirks*

Raj moves and walks out angry Vandana grabs Sarita's hand and sits her down infront of the mirror and removes the cloth we see her wedding attire and jewellery

Vandana: jao change into this

Sarita in stunned mode goes and changes as vandana smiles Sarita returns and we notice more girls in the room all giggly and happy in helping sarita get ready whilest Vikrant takes Raj aside

Vikrant: kya did you really think you will take Sarita from me? For my son his happiness means the world to me and sarita I am with for his happiness as he sees her as his mother I asked u both many times and at the last minute u decided to fall for her?

Raj tries to walk away but vikrant gets in the way

Vikrant: tell me why now after 10 years why now? Raj

Raj is silent and looks down then then the pandit ji says

Pandit ji: call the bride its time

The girls giggle and bring a dumb struck sarita and sits her down next to Vikrant whom she looks at as he looks on serious the pandit ji begins to chant and Abhi is all excited sitting down next to his dad whilest Raj walks out

Pandit ji: you may put the garlands around each others necks

Vikrant and Sarita get up

Vikrant smirks as he puts on Saritd and Sarita jus freezes so Vikrant grabs her hands and puts around his neck and everyone cheers

They both sit back down and begin the rest of the wedding vows

then the 7 Rounds then they both sit back down and the pandit ji gives Vikrant the Mangal sutar as he ties around Sarita's Neck

Vikrant whispers: smile or else abhi will get upset and sense something is wrong

Sarita snaps out as soon as she hears abhi's name then the Vikrant slows puts the sindoor on Abhi cheers then Vikrant and Sarita get up and take blessings from everyone

To be continued

Guys its going to be a Hate Love story basically

First comes the hate

then slowly I wont drag it but then comes the love!

If you guys still want I continue pls comment below :)

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Posted: 11 years ago
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amazing update. can't wait for the next on. thanks for the pm 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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wow!!! Can't wait... Ab Kya hoga Raj ka!!
Lol.. I don't care... ;) Don't focus there
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