Love hurts and cure Invitation&part18 page71&94 - Page 63

Originally posted by: anumeha_rajat

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Originally posted by: niyaati

gd morning jaan

aww...i loved dis dialogue!!

prithvi is sooo romantic

superb rakhi

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hahha..d cockroach scene is amaizng...

overall..very romantic n nyc part

thanxx 4 such a romantic ud!!

hi all

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Originally posted by: anumeha_rajat

diiiiiiiiiii.......wonderful....wat an awesome ud............sooooo sweet n lovely.........

if u dont mind can i give a long review of the ud.........

Originally posted by: PrithviSanyo1

Part18:-

Prithvi and Sanyo sat in the car, due to long journey; Sanyo falls in sleep.Prithvi saw at her and smiles at her innocent beauty.After some time they reached at home.

Prithvi:-Sanyo,utho, ghar pauch gaye hain, hum.

Sanyo:-Hummm, baas 2 min,

Ashok heard it and said iyeiska bachpan ka adat hain.

Prithvi smiles and said to himself mujhe pata hain. then he again said uth jao Sanyo, it's very late. Room mein jake so jana.

Unwillingly Sanyo open her eyes, and look at prithvi then other side and realized where she was now.

Sanyo quickly said aapne mujhe uthaya kyuon nehi?

Prithvi:-Kya, meine uthaya nehi, good.Aab chaloge mere sath iya'

Sanyo:-chaliye, meine kab maana kya aapko?

Prithvi shook his head then said ok chalo'

After they enter the home, prithvi feels little different,

Prithvi's p.o.v:-Aaj toh peheli baar iha nehi aaya mein, kab se aaraha hoon but aaj kuch alag sa eheshaas ho raha hain, par oh kya hain, kyuon aise ho raha hain, may be isse pehele jab aaya tha iha tab mein sirf ek dost tha Sanyo ka aur aaj uska pati hoon, aur last time iha se jaise gaye hum dono'

Prithvi's chain of thinking broke by gasp from Sanyo and she clutched prithvi's hand tightly.Prithvi looks at her and understand her feeling.He take her hand and said don't worry,mein hoon, chalo''..

Both enter the house and found every one stand there.Sanyo's mother arti kya dono ka then both enter the house.Prithvi clearly see the annoyance on everyones face except, Sanyo's parents and brother and bhabi.

Prithvi know that Sanyo also saw it and feel bad and hurt also.At first he ignore it and said to his father in law that they are tired and ant to take rest.

Ashok agreed and prithvi and Sanyo goes towards Sanyo' room.

Here at living room, one of Sanyo's chachi said, kitna besharam hain, chala gaya, jada baat bi nehi,kya, huh,jaise iha aake eheshan kya humpe.

Ashok:-pls, aap sab so jaiye, raat bahut ho gayi hain.

Then all of them goes from there but that chachi again said, but what about anu?

Ashok:-Good night,

That chachi smirked and said good night.

Here at the Sanyo's room, prithvi saw one single bed (Little big of single bed and little short of double bed) and then at Sanyo who is blushing.

Prithvi:-change karlo, I'll arrange everything,

Sanyo nodded and goes from there.After changing her dress; she came and saw prithvi talking with her mother in law in the phone.

She smiles and goes near to prithvi and shakes him little.Prithvi turns and give her the phone and then goes to washroom for change his dress.

After some time, he came and saw Sanyo stand near the window silently.

Prithvi:-Sanyo, so jao bed pe'mein floor pe so rehi hoon.

Sanyo turns and said kya aap, abhi mujhse naraj ho?

Prithvi looks confused and said naraj par kyuon?

Sanyo:-mein toh aapki haar baatman lia, ha tab aapse baatnehi kya, mujhe aapne aape gussa aaya tha, isliye. Aur thora, ek thora sa naraj thi app ke upar, kyuon ki aapne mere but she couldn't complte her sentence.she feels a soft finger on her lips and then she look and found prithvi gazing at her lovingly.

Prithvi:-shhh, bahut bolti ho. Kisne kaha mein tumse naraj hoon,meine tumhe danta par iska matlab iye nehi mein tumse naraj tha, mein jitna bhi gussa kar, dantu tumhe ,naraj kabhi nehi ho sakta, aab chalo, so jao,mein floor pe.

Suddenly Sanyo jerked his hand and said aap jhooth bol rehe hain, aap mujh se naraj ho.

Prithvi:-nehi Sanyo, mein tumse naraj nehi hoon.

Sanyo:-jhooth and turn another side and crying silently.

Prithvi placed his hand on her shoulder but Sanyo moved it and sittin near the window and said, iha aayi socha, sab mujhe dekh ke khush honge par nehi, sab mujhse nafrat karte hain, aur toh aur mere pati hi mujhse nafrat karta hain, kyuon, mein itni buri hoon,

Prithvi feel his heart became heavy and he goes near to Sanyo and said Sanyo, chalo so jao, sab tumse bahut Pyaar karte hain, par aab so jao,bahut raat'

Sanyo:-mujhe aapse baat nehi karna' aap so jaiye, kyuon kuch din pehele toh mere bina easily so gaye the, abhi kya hua, jao so jao, mein buri hoon.but soon Sanyo feel she is not sitting in the floor any more but someone already take her in his strong arms and give a light kiss on her lips and said I love u jaan.

Sanyo saw the love, care, passion all in prithvi's eyes, she lowered her eyes but her lips curved slightly and that indicate everything.

Prithvi ne Sanyo bed ke paas le gaya and said so, jaan, meri bahon mein sona hain iya, bed pe'

Sanyo fighting with her blushing and then suddenly she encircled her arms in prithvi's neck and said meri pati ke bahon mein and hide her self in the prithvi neck.

Prithvi smiles at her jesture and placed her on the bed.Then he lay besides her and said Sanyo, ek baat aaj mein tumse kehe na chatha hoon,

Sanyo looks at her and said kya?

Prithvi make his face serious and said it's very important.

Sanyo looks scared and said kya?

Prithvi:-I '..

Sanyo repeat it I'.

Prithvi quickly kissed her cheeks and said I love u jaan.

Sanyo full shocked and surprised and saw at prithvi then understand and lowered her eyes and she blushing terribly.

Here, Prithvi said good night jaan.

Sanyo: - good night.

After some moments, Sanyo placed his head on prithvi's chest and closed her eyes.Prithvi also wrapped his arm around her waist.

After some time both dose off to sleep.

Next day morning Sanyo wake up and find prithvi in his deep sleep.She slowly said prithvi, uthiye, subha ho gaya'

Prithvi wake up and saw her beautiful wife, and prithvi just kissed her forhead and said good morning jaan.

Sanyo blushed and said, good morning, muhe choriye pehele,

Prithvi: - kya karu mere hath chuth nehi raha hain.aab kya karu mein?

Sanyo blushed and said aap bahut natkhat, ho rehe ho.

Prithvi:-accha mujhe toh pata nehi, mujhe dekh ke sab bolte hain mein kitna masoom hoon aur tum kehe rehe ho, mein natkhat, hoon.hey bhagwan, mere patni ko dekho'

Sanyo slightly push him and run from there and said iye baat aap sochiye, mein ja rehi hoon.

Prithvi saw the same childness, innocence in Sanyo's face.

Prithvi smiles widely and again lay on the bed.

After some both, came to the drawing room and found onone is there but suddenly Sanyo saw her mom is there.She goes there and take blessing from her mom.

Damini give both of them blessings and then said aao, subha ke puja kar lete hain.

Prithvi:-Baki sab nehi aayenge.

Damini looks sad and Sanyo uinderstand it.

Sanyo:-aap chaliye na, baki sab aajayenge.

Prithvi nodded then they enter the puja room.After some time prithvi, Sanyo, Ashok, Damini and Sanyo's dadi, Arjun and arjun's wife doing puja.

Sanyo give every bod Prasad.Prithvi continuously noticed, many member didn't attain the puja and Sanyo's dadi looks very disturb and jab Sanyo unhe Prasad dene gaye.

After that prithvi sat on the sofa with his father in law and brother in law.

Here, Sanyo goes to kitchen but heard something bad from her chachi,

Chachi:-iha kyuon aayi ho, jao, aapne room mein iya aapne pati ke paas, hum sab karenge, tumhara help ki koi jarurat nehi hain.

Sanyo:-par, chachi'

Chachi:-ruk, tu mujhe chachi nehi bulayegi.aur ha,iye ansoon, drama kahi aur karna iha nehi, mere liye mere anu hi sab kuch hain'.

Sanyo uha se chala gaya and sidha jake prithvi se takraya,

Prithvi saw her tears a nd sad face.

Prithvi:-kya hua, tum ro kyuon rehe ho?

Sanyo:-are ro kaha rehi hoon,iye toh baas cutting onion so.

Prithvi held her cheen by his finger and said jhooth bolna aata nehi toh kyuon bolte ho?

Sanyo hugged him and said mein kya itni buri hoon prithvi'

Prithvi:-kisne kaha tum bure ho,tum toh sab se acche ho.

Sanyo:-par,mujhe sab kyuon dante hain abhi bhi'

Prithvi:-jisne danta hain tumhe mein bhi unhe dantunga. Aab chalo, mein kuch der bahar jaraha hoon,tum chalo, aur mein na nehi sunna chatha'mein ma and papa se permission bhi le lia,

Sanyo:-kya, par'

Prithvi:-ulta unhone kaha, aapne patni ko kahi le jane ke liye humara permission ka koi jarurat nehi hain, aab chalo, par, unhe kya pata mere patni, aajkal mere sath nehi jana chahithi.

Sanyo:-prithvi and starts to hit him by her small fist.

Prithvi defend him self and said are wah, kya jamana aagaya hain, mere patni muhe mar ra aha hain, sab dekhenge toh kya kehenge.

Soemone said from behind iye ki, iye aapko deserve nehi karti, usse bhi accha koi hain.Both, prithvi and Sanyo stunned to heard it and turn and saw anu stand there with evil smile.Prithvi:- Sanyo, chalo iha se'.

Anu:-mujhe tum se baat karni hain.

Prithvi:-par mujhe nehi'

Anu:-par but prithvi stop her and goes from there.In the room Sanyo looks upsate and sat on the bed and said aap, jao, mein iha rehethi hoon,

Prithvi:-Sanyo, ready ho jao'

Sanyo:-aap, anu ko sath leke jao'

Prithvi:-utho aur ready ko aao, hum do ja rehe hain.

Sanyo:-par'

Prithvi: - tumhara problem kya hain mujhe aaj tak pata nehi hain'koi bhi kehega ,kuch aur rona suru karoge, haar baat pe mujhe galat samajhna,kyuon Sanyo, meine kya galati kar dia, tumhe kya mein iye eheshas nehi dila paaya abhi tak ,ke mere zindegi meinsirf aur sirf tum ho, aur koi nehi hain,par mein kuch bhi samjhun ,tumhe toh'

Sanyo get up and just hugged him tightly and said sorry.

But prithvi stood there with out movement, he didn't hugged her and just said tum reho iha ,mujhe nehi jana aur nahi tumhe kahi jana hain'

Sanyo hugged more tightly and said sorry prithvi, I'm really sorry, par aise mat kaho, mujhe pata hain,aap hurt ho, par'

Prithvi;- mere hurt hona aur na hona se tumhe kuch nehi hota'

Sanyo:-hot ahain, par aap mujhse agar aise baat karoge, tohmein sach mein kahhi aur chala jaungi, and tears breaming in her eyes.

Now, prithvi cannot take it anymore , he gather her in his arms and said shhh, rona nehi, mein naraj nehi hoon ,oh baas ,uss lerki ko dekh ke, chalo jaldise ready ho jao.hum donoghumne jayenge.

Sanyo nodded and ready hoke baahar gaye dono.

They enjoys lots in the Jaypur.At the night they return and after their dinner.In the night , Sanyo's in their room , sanoy, aapse ek baat puchu,

Prithvi:-aapko kabse mere permission ka jarurat pa raha hain.

Sanyo goes near to him ,placed her head on his shoulder and said, aapne jaan bhoojhke bahar dinner ..

Prithvi smiles and said yess jaan.

Sanyo :-humm,waise mujhe baut accha laga kitne din baad hum dono ek sath, prithvi kalmujhe shopping karna hain, aap chaloge mere sath?

Prithvi:-aap agar hume nehi kehete tab bhi hum chalte par, hum aapse ek promise chathe hain.

Sanyo:-kya?

Prtivhi:- aajse tum rona thora kam karoge,aur doosre ko baat ko ignore karoge.

Sanyo looks at her husband seomtimes then said yes,and hugged him.,