Originally posted by: rumela711926
Kalyani.ji Sorry for not replying earlier but i am loving your story 👏
well dne kaly👏👏👏 wonderful jus loved it...the convo between sanyo n prc was superb...tis is how sanyo shud be or shud hve been shown!! tough ,sensible n strong headed rajputani!!!!complete faith on herself n on her love....she wasnt scarred of her decision n showed prc the rite path 2 take the correct one.....im thinkg now if like tis the stry of prc had proceeded then after the leap thy wudnt hve been differences between the 2....sanyo wudnt hve the hatred 4 prc,.... she wud wait 4 his return aftr digvijay n wudnot commit herself 2 any1!!! definately she wud be tied down in mehal by jc if possibly knowg her luv 4 prc ...bt im waitg how wud u write...how wud u seperate the lovers ....as the main struggle mentioned above is jc finding it out the affair!! keep it up n pls do continue as im xcited 2 kno wat will happen!Originally posted by: anasrashid_fan
PART 2:
RECAP:PRC is caught between his love n duty'.n is unable to take decision'.so he decides to meet sanyo.
In Kannauj,Sanyo was getting ready to go the temple of Shivji n also to the lake.She was very happy n excited coz always when she went to that lake,she would fell so happy to light a diya of PRC's name.She took Vaishali n Chamki with her'Jaichand stopped her saying "Beti,aap kaha jaa rahi hain itni raat ko."'..She told"Pitaji,hum jhil ke kinare wale shivji ke mandir jaa rahe hain.Aap chinta na kare,hamare saath hamari saheliya hain.Hum jald hi laut kar ayenge."'''.Saying this she went off to the temple.
'''In Ajmer,PRC also got ready n took permission of Kamlavati before leaving''He was desperate to meet sanyo'''He rode away on his horse as fast as possible'In the temple,Sanyo prayed for well being of Prithvi n went to the lake leaving chamki n vaishali behind.
The weather was very nice.Cool breeze was flowing n moon luked beautiful as it was poornima'..Sanyo luked at the moon n remembered the yatra days n PRC too.She smiled pleasantly to herself.The whole environment was so pleasant that sanyo was not willing to leave the place.The moon,cool breeze n the view of the lake took her away in some kind of trance'..She lit a diya for Prithvi n prayed to God"Hey bhagwan,hamare Prithvi ka hamesha khayal rakhna.uspar koi sankat na aane dena."''.Suddenly,she heard a sound of horse galloping''Her heart told her that her Prithvi was coming.But she laughed at the thought n said"hum bhi kitne pagal hain.Prithvi yaha kaise aa sakta hain!!"'''then to her surprise she sees none other than PRC coming towards her!.....She feels very happy''.PRC quickly climbs down from the horse n run towards Sanyo''He hugs her '..Sanyo says"arre wah ,lagta hain hamara bhagya aaj jaag utha hain.!!Ajmer ke maharaj ko aaj itne dino baad hamari yaad kaise aayi!"'..PRC gives a faint smile to her.She could make out that something is very wrong with him'.She asked"kya baat hain,prtihvi.Tum kuch pareshan lag rahe ho.kya hua?"''PRC says"Mujhe tumhare saath ki zarurat hain,sanyogita.Meri madad karo.yaha baitho ,mein tumhe batata hoon."''..They both sat near the shore of the lake.Sanyo was totally confused n worried''PRC said"Sanyogita,Nanaji chahte hain ki mein Delhi ke singhasan par baithu.Meine unhe bahut samjhane ki koshish ki ,ki yeh mera hak nahi hain.,balki maharaj Jaichand ka hain.Lekin woh ye baat maanane ke liye tayyar nahi hain.Ab mein kya karu mujhe batao.Pehle hi hamare rishton mein iss wajah se darar aa gayi hain."''..Sanyo was silent 4 sometime.She didn't spoke a word'..PRC was getting restless..He said"kuch toh bolo Sanyogita,aisi chup mat raho'.mujhe jaanana hain ki tum kya chahti ho aur sochti ho."'''Sanyo made herself calm before speaking.She said slowly"Prithvi,isme itni sochne waali kounsi baat hain.Par 'nanaji ko kaho ki tum delhi ke singhasan par baithne ke liye tayyar ho."'PRC was utterly shocked to hear this from Sanyo.He had not expected any thing like this.He said"yeh tum kya keh rahi ho ,Sanyo."'..She said"hum thik keh rahe hain ,prithvi'..Tumhe par-nanaji ke faisle ka samman karna chahiye.Unhone ye faisla soch-samajhkar hi liya hoga na.Agar unhe lagta hain ki Delhi ke samrajya ki zimmedari sambhalne ke kabil hamare pitaji se zyada tum ho toh tumhe '''."He cut her sentence in middle n said"yeh tum kya keh rahi ho'.tum jaanti ho ki mein tumse kitna pyar karta hoon aur mein tumhe kho nahi sakta.."''..Sanyo had tears in her eyes.She said"hum jaante hain Prithvi ki tum humse bahut pyar karte ho'.lekin agar tum sirf hamare liye apna kartavya taal rahe ho toh hum tumhare zindagi se chale jayenge,kyunki hum tumhare raaste mein koi rukawat nahi daalna chahte."''.saying this she started crying'.These words pierced Prithvi's heart like a dagger.He couldn't imagine the thought of Sanyo going away from his life for ever''..She said"Prithvi,hum rajput hain.Aur tum yeh humse bhi acchi tarah jaante ho ki hamare apno se zyada hamare liye apna kartavya zyada zaruri hota hain''Aur hum tumhe sirf hamari wajah se delhi ke singasan par baithne se mana nahi kar sakte.yeh kayarta hogi''.Tumhe kayar pasand nahi hain na prithvi'.Aur aaj tum hi dar rahe ho?......PRC was surprised to hear all this from his Sanyo'.He remembered the yatra days that how his Nandini was at that time n how she has become so mature now'..His heart filled with pride for Sanyogita.The girl whom he loved so much was so sensible n wise'.He was feeling very proud for her'Prithvi holded her hands n said"Meri junglii billi itni samajhdar kabse ho gayi.!!.....Saying this his eyes filled with tears'.For some moments,sanyo n PRC kept on luking at each other which seemed ages.PRC said"Toh thik hain Sanyogita.Mein Delhi ke singhasan par baithunga.Mein tumse ek vada karta hoon ki mein tumhe kisi bhi halat mein paa kar hi rahunga.Aaj mujhe meri sanyo par bahut garv hain."''Sanyo wiped PRC's tears n said"hamein tum par pura bharosa hain prithvi.Ab ro mat.kyunki Delhi ke honewale maharaj ki aakhon mein aasu shobha nahi dete."''.PRC n Sanyo hugged each other very tightly'''PRC said"Ab mujhe jaana hoga.Nanaji ko mera faisla sonata hoon.Woh bahut khush honge."'.Sanyo said"ha prithvi jao.Hum tumahre saath hamesha hain.Apna khayal rakhna. Aur apni zimmedari ko acche se nibhao.Hum apne prithvi ko ek mahan raja bante hue dekhna chahte hain."''..PRC said"haa sanyo.jab mere saath tumahri dua hain toh mujhe apni manzil pane se koi nahi rok sakta.Tum bhi apna khayal rakhna."''.Sanyo n PRC smiled at each other n PRC went away''.Sanyo was in tears.She also knew in her heart that the true struggle for PRC will start when her father will come to know that Sanyo is in love with his enemy ,Prithvi'''..But somewhere she had full faith on her love n God.She knew that some day PRC will win her fighting all odds''..She went away to her palace.
There,PRC reached Ajmer'.He saw that Nanaji n his ministers were very worried.He asked"kya baat hain,nanaji.Aap sab log itne pareshan kyun lag rahe hain?"'.Nanaji told him that there was a big problem in Delhi.Suddenly,many houses had caught fire in which many people got injured n they had lost their homes n everything.But fortunately no one lost their lives''..PRC said"Aap chinta mat kijiye.mere hote huye Delhi ke logon ko kuch nahi ho sakta''.hum abhi issi waqt Delhi chalte hain."
PRECAP:PRC solving the probs''..PRC's coronation ceremony'..JC gets furious on hearing the news that PRC has agreed to sit on the throne of Delhi.
Ok frnds''.I hope u like my update'.plz comment.
well dne kaly👏👏👏 wonderful jus loved it...the convo between sanyo n prc was superb...tis is how sanyo shud be or shud hve been shown!! tough ,sensible n strong headed rajputani!!!!complete faith on herself n on her love....she wasnt scarred of her decision n showed prc the rite path 2 take the correct one.....im thinkg now if like tis the stry of prc had proceeded then after the leap thy wudnt hve been differences between the 2....sanyo wudnt hve the hatred 4 prc,.... she wud wait 4 his return aftr digvijay n wudnot commit herself 2 any1!!! definately she wud be tied down in mehal by jc if possibly knowg her luv 4 prc ...bt im waitg how wud u write...how wud u seperate the lovers ....as the main struggle mentioned above is jc finding it out the affair!! keep it up n pls do continue as im xcited 2 kno wat will happen!
Originally posted by: rumela711926
will wait 4 d next 😊
PART 3:
RECAP:Sanyo helps Prithvi to take decision.He promises her that at any cost he will win his love fighting all odds..PRC reaches Ajmer n comes to know that suddenly a major fire broke out in Delhi n many houses were burnt leaving the citizens homeless but fortunately there was no any casualty.
PRC,Nanaji,Kamlavati,Pratha n PRC's friends got ready to go to Delhi..PRC was very worried..when they reached Delhi,they were shocked to see their people in that pitiable state.Vaidji was treating the injured people.Prithvi immediately sent orders to Nanaji's ministers.He said"jo log ghayal ho gaye hain unhe turant rajmahal leke aao.unka ilaaj yahi par hoga..aur rajvaidji ko bhi bula kar lao.woh bhi ilaaj karne mein vaidji ki madad karenge.......Following his orders,the soldiers brought all the injured people to the palace..They were treated by the vaids.Fortunately,all were saved n were alright.
PRC immediately told all the ministers to b present in Nanaji's room in the evening..In the evening,all gathered.....PRC also came n all became silent at the very sight of him..He came in n sat beside Nanaji n said"Kuch pata chala ki itni bhishan aag kaise lagi logon ke gharon mein?".....One minister replied"Ji maharaj,who bas ek ghar mein khana ban raha tha aur chulhe mein se pure ghar mein aag lag gayi aur aas paas ke gharon mein phail gayi".....PRC said"Thik hain...Toh hum ye maan lete hain ki is haadse mein kisi ki chal nahi thi....khair....ab zaruri baat......bhagwan ko dhanyawad kehana chahiye ki isme kisi ki maut nahi huyi aur saare log thik hain..Lekin logon ka kaafi nuksan hua hain......Mahamantriji?.......minister replied"agya maharaj!".......PRC ordered"jin logon ke ghar jal gaye hain,who saare log rajmahal mein hi rehenge jab tak unke ghar firse ban nahi jaate....un logon ko yaha kisi bhi cheez ki kami nahi honi chahiye...sabko dhan ,kapde aur bhar pet khana diya jaaye....aur bhi jo nuksan hua hain uski saari bharpayi ki jayegi."....Mahamantri said"Jo agya maharaj,aap chinta na kare,hum sab sambhal lenge."....PRC ordered all of them to leave n start preparing.....Nanaji was silent.....He was luking very pleased with Prithvi by the way he handled the situation so bravely....PRC said"kya hua nanaji,aap chup kyun hain?kya meine koi galat aadesh diya hain?"....Nanaji said"nahi beta,hamein ye dekhkar bahut accha laga ki tumne apni zimmedari acche se nibhayi.".....He patted his shoulder n went away....Nanaji was not knowing that prithvi has agreed to take the responsibility of Delhi...For this Nanaji was very worried that what decision PRC will take.
As per the orders,all the affected people were told to stay in the palace only.All people of the delhi were so happy to hear this decision from PRC..All the people hoped that PRC must take their responsibility ......All of them loved Prithvi a lot.
When all was fine again,PRC went to meet Nanaji n kamlavati..They both were discussing about what decision PRC must have taken....PRC saw their worried faces n said"Nanaji ,maa ,meine faisla le liya hain.".....Nanaji got up from his bed.He luked more worried.....PRC said"Nanaji,aaj se aap saari chintaye bhul jaye.Mein Delhi ke singhasan par baithne ke liye tayyar hoon..Aur mein aapko vachan deta hoon ki aapki saari umeedon ko mein pura karunga."...Nanaji n kamla felt very happy....They both gave ashirwad to him.....Nanaji said"Tum nahi jaante beta ki ye faisla lekar tumne hamari kitni badi chinta dur kar di hain.....hamein pura bharosa hain kit um apni zimmedari ko acche se nibhaoge.".....Saying this Nanaji hugged him very happily n feeling very proud for prithvi.........Nanaji gave this good news to everybody that from now Delhi will b getting a new n young King who will take Delhi's kingdom to greater heights.......This news spread like a wild fire amongst all the citizens of Delhi.....All were rejoicing n were very happy......Maharaj Anangpal gave orders to decorate the whole palace.....All people were celebrating this joy by singing songs,dancing etc......They were also decorating their homes with rangolis,diyas etc.....because this was not less than a festival or occasion for the people of Delhi.
In Kannauj,Sanyo felt very happy that today she was able to show rite path to her Prithvi.But at the same time she was worried about her n PRC's future....But she did not care about the future at the moment......She told everything to Roopsundari n Nayantara....Sanyo said to them"Aaj agar hamne Prithvi ko Delhi ke singhasan par baithne se mana kar diya hota toh hum apne aapko kabhi maaf nahi kar pate.....kyunki Delhi ki praja ko aaj unke maharaj ki zarurat hain....Hamein apne pyar par pura vishwas hain.....Hamne prithvi se pyar kiya hain aur hamein darne ki koi zarurat nahi hain....Humne thik kiya na maa?"....Nayantara n roopsundari had tears in their eyes.They were feeling so proud of their princess....Nayan said"Sanyo,beti aaj aapne jo faisla liya hain woh bilkul thik hain.Aaj aapne saabit kar diya ki aap ek sacchi aur bahadur rajputani hain.Hamein aap par bahut garv hain beti.".....They both hugged each other....Since it was night,Sanyo went to sleep.....Rupsundari said to Nayan"Hamari Sanyo itni badi aur samajhdar kab ho gayi pata hi nahi chala.....Asli ladhai to tab shuru hogi jab Jaichand ko Sanyo aur Prithvi ke baare mein pata chalega...Bhagwan jaane tab kya hoga......Hamein bahut chinta hone lagi hain....Aur phir Prithvi Delhi ka raja banane ke liye tayyar ho gaya hain,ye baat jab JC ko pata chalegi tab toh woh gusse mein kya karega pata nahi"??..nayan says"Kuch bhi galat nahi hoga ,maaji.....aap chinta mat kijiye"...N she goes away.
In Delhi,the preparations for PRC's coronation ceremony were going on.The whole palace was decorated beautifully.All the dasis were overjoyed n Kamlavati was supervising everyone in their work....Especially,the royal court was decorated with huge n beautiful rangolis,thousands of diyas were shining brightly in the rajdarbar..It was luking as if all the stars from the universe have come to see the grand coronation ceremony of PRC.......garlands of flowers were put on the arches of the entrance of all the doors leading to the court room......then the ceremony started.
Nanaji ,Kamlavati,Pratha n all of the PRC's frnds took PRC in the huge pool room.....PRC satthere n the pujaris bathed him with milk.along with that they were chanting some mantras......then PRC got ready.He was in his room......A sainik came n said"Maharaj ki jai ho!!Sab aapka intezar rajdarbar mein kar rahe hain.Bade Maharaj aapko bula rahe hain."..All the people, ministers,nanaji,kamlavati Pratha n his frnds were waiting for PRC...Then a soldier made a lalkari"Maharaj prithviraj Chauhan rajdarbar mein padhar rahe hain!!!"....Hearing this all the people became silent n stood up from their seats....then PRC entered the darbar.....He was luking very smart.....His dress was made with silk n velvet deep blue coloured cloth.....His jewels were shining brightly.....PRC was just a boy of 15 years but he was looking like a young man!......PRC smiled at everybody n first took blessings of his mom...A painting of Maharaj Someshwar was also placed there.He luked at the painting n there was tears in his eyes.He remembered his dad n thought that how nice it would have been if his dad was also present in that ceremony....But he controlled himself as he knew that it was not proper to cry infront of all the people......He came infront of singhasan....Nanaji handed him the royal sword n applied a tika on his forehead.PRC took his ashirwad.....then Nanaji placed the royal crown on his head.....PRC luked so nice that Kamalavati had tears in her eyes to see her son so brave n strong that today he is also taking up the responsibility of Delhi along with Ajmer......PRC sat on the singhasan in a very royal way. He smiled at everybody.He luked on the seat beside him on the singhasan n said to himself"mein aaj ek pran leta hoon ki Delhi ki Maharani sirf Sanyogita hi banegi aur uski jagah koi nahi le sakta"...All the people rejoiced n shouted his name"Delhi naresh Maharaj Prithviraj Chauhan ki....JAI!!!!"......n flowers were thrown on him......Coronation ceremony took place with a gr8 joy n excitement......This news made all the praja so happy n brought happiness in whole Delhi.
PRECAP:Jaichand getting very angry on hearing the news of PRC's coronation as Delhi's King......Sanyo feeling very proud for her PRC.....JC's plans to kill Prithvi n to sit on Delhi's throne.
I hope u liked this part guys.......plz comment!
Wow👏.Wonderful update kalayani.I liked ur this part very much.Ur way of description is just mindblowing.Sanyo is really brave rajputani.I liked her very much.Prithvi is great raja.I like the way he handle the situation.I liked the way he said to himself that delhi ka maharani sirf sanyogita banegi👏.Keep it up kalyani.
Originally posted by: letsrockshona
wow, kali di, first of all i read this first
i loved the part wen prc says delhi ki maharani sirf sanyogita bane githat was so coolwaiting for ur next partas always lovely, awesome and an outstanding updatelove u loadzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz
Originally posted by: veersherafan1
Wow👏.Wonderful update kalayani.I liked ur this part very much.Ur way of description is just mindblowing.Sanyo is really brave rajputani.I liked her very much.Prithvi is great raja.I like the way he handle the situation.I liked the way he said to himself that delhi ka maharani sirf sanyogita banegi👏.Keep it up kalyani.
Wait for the next part.
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