Malwa, Manyakhet contrast and some whiplashing

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Hi all,
I know this post is terribly late. Actually I wrote it 3-4 days back but it turned out disaster. So was very skeptical to post it. But then again, looking at the forum activity, i thought to torture all the lovely people out there. So without further ado... let the torture begin πŸ˜†



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We saw Malwa flourishing on some healthier relationships
Though the same sent Manyakhet into further hardships
Love, trust and respect flowing in the one
Hatred, deceit, doubt runs freely in other one
Art is a boon here but bane for others there
Wonder, how Malwa king will fix it all over
Certainly he would have to go long long way


That psychopath did a blunder,
He himself earned a hunter
Mrinal whiplashed him like a thunder,
will he mend his ways, I wonder
I anticipated few slaps while Mrinal grabbing his neck
Though she had beaten him blue and black


Sulochana & Mrinal did a commendable job
But What's with the psycho's dad and mom
They kept mum for their son's evil deed
Instead forgiveness for him, all they plead
Ointment is not what he needed
Some thrashing is good for that pigheaded
At least that psycho deserved few smacks
So that he could get some sense, he lacks


Vilas's mom truly shone, she resolved to break the alliance
But had to step back, thanks to political compliance
How they all forgot what have happened
May they bestowed upon some more wisdom

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Beautiful Write-Up
waiting for Prithvi's entry in ManyakeytπŸ˜‰
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Lovely write-up as usual πŸ˜›
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Lovely Lines Neen
Beautiful 😊
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Beautiful neen πŸ‘πŸΌ

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U have a way with words Neen 😊
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I can't believe Psychoshray was forgiven so easily. Mrinal was disappointing that episode. What will she do on coming to know that it's not his 1st time but he raped and killed many other girls? She can give life imprisonment to the ones who were doing art works but can forgive an unforgivable crime like torture and rapd attempt😑.
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Thank u guys for ur kind words 😊
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Wonderful poem!!!!πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘

Well said about both the kingdoms!!!!πŸ‘πŸΌ

As for Satyashray, he cannot be fixed!!!!

Tyrion Lannister had said, "It's hard to put a leash on a dog once you've put a crown on its head. (Game of Thrones)!!!!😳

His nephew Joffrey is a far off relative of Satyashray!!!!πŸ˜†








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Originally posted by: Neett

Awesome !πŸ‘


Thank u Neett.
He is Amrinder gill in your id pic, right?
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