|*My MahiDa Diary*|One-shot story added p9 - Page 3

Originally posted by: rnfandeboo

'Woh wapis agayi?! Aur... kya waqai? Par woh mujhse mili kyun nahi?' So many thoughts are wondering around his mind as all the memories are slowly coming back to him. He is so lost in his thoughts that slowly is losing his concentration from driving, trying hard to concentrate on the road, but he just can't, it's already night time and foggy. A man in his late twenties, with a dusky complexion, dark black eyes, with a style of french beard allowing beard to be grown slightly from both sides of cheekbones. He's wearing black halve-sleeves shirt fitted perfectly against his body with two top bottons undone with grey trousers.hey DD,i can see thw whole scene in front of my eyes.

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Mahindra & Brinda both are sitting on the big stones just placed near the sea, so near that one big wave can hit them, but they are not worried, not tonight. The sky is lightful tonight, filled with millions of stars and new moon is shining, the moonlight is directly falling on them. Brinda is playing with her finger, by doodling on rock meanwhile Mahindra sitting right next to her is looking at the sea and is remembering the past. i can visualize everything

Thanx hun..😳

why is she asking that?they were not frnds 1 year back ,mahendre ne abhi tak sorry nahi kaha na hi kuch aur bola that he was wrong then why is she asking that?

how can she be so good with mahendre?usne toh apni galti nahi mani aur na hi abhi tak kuch aisa kaha ki brinda ko realize ho that he has changed..........

brinda ko toh khush hona cahie tha .scotland me India jaise log nahi the................chavnist

????i don't know what's wrong with her.in episode 4 also she told usman sir she is not happy......"mene aisa koi kaam nahi kia ki khushi ho".................she should be proud of herself.after all she is not fighting crime but the whole world..............when her mom asked her what war she is fighting that is not ending?she replied"hai ek aisi jung"i felt as if she was me or vice-versa

purani brinda means how she was before arjun's death........i guess.but she i think brinda who was in ncb was the best.but i think by "purani brinda vapas aa gai hai"she mens she regained happines as she was fed up of fighting...........although she felt good that she is fighting but kaha tak ladti as u told"kuein ke medhak hai ,kuein me hi rahenge"

nahi galti sirf mahindra ki thi...................

^^For all this read my reply at the bottom of this page.

Mujhe ehsaas howa main tum sab se nahi balke khudse larr rahi thi ?????matalab me samjhi nahi..............or it can be like she was trying to find what she can do????meri larayi khudse. Meri zindagi mein NCB se pehle bohut kuch howa, bohut kuch.. hmm......until now i was thinking that woh jo bhi keh rahi that was about her and her fight with this male dominated society but now looks like she is talking about arjun..........................

No, she's talking about many incidents occured in her life which changed her darastically, from a happy, chirpy girl she became angry one, who always and keep fighting and thinks she has no one.

aur us sab ne mujhe itna badal diya ke aik waqt toh aisa aya ke aainey (mirror) mein main khud ko pehchaan hi nahi payi. Chehra mera tha par woh main nahi thi koi aur thi. Main apne halaat se nahi larr saki toh socha duniya se larr kar hosakta hai khudko itmenaan (satisfaction) dedon. what she mens pls clarify DD

She means she changed so much that when she looked herself in mirror she could see herself physically there but the reflection of her wasn't her, she couldn't recognise herself because she was changed completely. She thought if she's fighting with others it gave her satisfaction inside because she couldn't fight her circumstances na.

Mahindra laughs slightly but quickly recovering from it he looks at her assuring her he's listening. he is laughing mujhe laga use guilt feel hogi

He laughed only hearing when she said she was fighting with him, because most of time he fought with her not vice versa.

Brinda: Jab larte larte thak gayi toh aik din ehsaas howa ke crime se larayi, tum sab se larayi sirf aik dikhawa hai asliyaat mein toh main khudse larr rahi hon.pls DD,clarify why is she telling"khudse lad rahi thi"

Fighting with herself, there's a fight going on within her.

Originally posted by: sehar mehrotra

Hey Ika.........first ov all..........👏....................as we say actions speak louder than words!!!!!!!!!

Awwww... thankyou..☺️

dat ws an awesome one shot...................m totally in luv wid it...........i hav already read it thrice n cn read it many more times!!!!!!!!!!!!that was really very cute..........😊😊😊.....

aww... thanx hun.. am glad you loved it this much.😳

Mahindra: Kya howa Brinda? Darwaza todhne ka naya shauk laga hai kya?

(hehehehhehe😆..........nice one)
😆😆😆 Yea, he was shocked at the way she banged the door!😉

i luvd the way mahendra tried to console brinda................d way he handled d whole situation ws superb!!!!!!!n this tym he dint try to prove himself over her!!!!!!!!😳

Those are the hardest words Brinda spoke in her life, she never thought she would say this to a person she can't stand. But she can't deny them as well, she hates this moment because he was so right. (dis line is sooooooooooooooooooooooooooo perfect.......................😳)

Mahindra: yeh baraf dekh rahi ho na, chalo aik kaam karo yeh aadhi baraf apne sar par rakho aur baki ki adhi khao, kam se kam thoda gussa toh kam hoga tumhara. (mahendra is really funny...................he brought ice ............hehehheehhehe😆)
😆😆😆 gosh.. i imagined it and it was indeed so damn funny!! omg.. the way he was eating ice.😍

'Koi toh baat hai, ajj mere saath woh pehle wala Mahindra nahi tha. Par jaisa bhi tha.... shayad... acha tha.'(awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww....................😳)

Thankyou hun for you sweet comments.😳

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Originally posted by: -Kalindi-

*reserved*
Wil come back soon...

Originally posted by: -Kalindi-

*edited*

Ika.......🤗🤗

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Ab main kyaa kahoon......

You were too good!!👏👏
Awwww... thankyou hun..🤗🤗🤗☺️

Coming to it, Brinda confided in Mahendra..Wow!! Thts good news😳
He stands up from the bed and walks up to her until there's a few inches gap between them
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😳Few inch gaps OMG!!!!😳
I know.. I was WOW... 😳😆

Anger is still there in her eyes, he had never seen so much anger in her eyes before, or maybe he never looked into her eyes before, except that one time where she labelled him as 'chauvinist'.

Haaye.....😳Har waqt jhagadte toh rehte the, time kab milega aankhon mein dekhne ka😆😆
Correcto!!!..😆

Mahindra: Kya Anuj? Kya kiya usne?

His tone suddenly changes from caring one into rather irritating one

Caring Mahendra😳....In short he wanted to say,Agar ussne aisa waisa kuch kia hain naa Im gonna kill him😆
🤣 Spot on!!!

Whole this time Brinda doesn't look up or dare to look at him; tonight she wouldn't be able to see her defeat in her enemy's eyes. Hearing this Mahindra can feel anger building up within him too, even though he doubted him in heart he wished Brinda was right about Anuj. Brinda can't take the anger, the betrayal anymore in swift she pushes everything away everything placed on dressing table so hard they almost fly and fall across the room. Mahindra is shocked to see this action of Brinda as he has never seen Brinda in this rage before. He gets completely stunned seeing this; he can see a tear roll down her cheek. He never thought that she'll be this hurt, he doesn't know how to react or what to say anymore.

When someone hurts u it does pain, shayad Mahi ko yeh ehssas abhi tak hua nahi😕
Hmm....😕 maybe he did felt the pain too, but seeing Brinda going through this was something he never expected.😳

Mahindra doesn't know what to say, he feels dumbstruck hearing and seeing this avatar of her. One thing he knows Anuj has hurted her badly, because he did noticed how much she trusted him. He feels so angry at Anuj right now, if he was here right now Mahindra would have killed him right here, right now especially seeing how much damaged he has done to Brinda.

😍Yeah i know, Mahi wud have done tht..I hate Anuj😡
😆😆 Well... if he's the reason MahiDa are coming close than I can't hate him.😉😆

Mahindra don't know but Brinda's that single tear caused a wave of pain in Mahindra's heart for a second. Brinda looks up at him with fierce eyes as if he is the one to blame!
😳Need I say anything......OMG OMG!!!😍😍Wave of pain, aage aage dekho hota hai kyaa😆
😆😆 Agay toh bohut kuch dikhana tha par time nahi mila.☺️😆😆

Mahindra: dekhta nahi hai kya? Mujhe laga abhi toh tumhari akhein khuli hain.

'And he's back!' she curses herself for thinking Mahindra was different tonight.

A naughty smile appears on Mahindra's lips, which leaves Brinda stunned as she never saw him smiling.

😆So Mahi is back!! With a bang!!Naughty smile,😳😳

😆😆😆 Yes

Mahindra: yeh baraf dekh rahi ho na, chalo aik kaam karo yeh aadhi baraf apne sar par rakho aur baki ki adhi khao, kam se kam thoda gussa toh kam hoga tumhara.

😆😆Koi Mahi ko batao woh Brinda hai....😳

😆 I think he forgot that for a moment..😉

He never fails to surprise me!' Brinda is seriously wondering what has happened to him. Mahindra takes one of ice cube from tray and starts eating it. He signals Brinda to do the same with his eyes, she's completely speechless at his sudden change behaviour. Mahindra takes big bit of ice and ends ends up spilling the ice out from his mouth and it's really cold. Seeing this Brinda laughs slightly, Mahindra looks at her in anger rather pretending to be, seeing him Brinda tries to hide her laugh but she can't as a huge grin appears on her face.

😳Thts MahiDa.....In our Marathi we have a saying"Tuja majha jamena, tukhya vachun karmena" That means. We both cant stand each other n cant live widout each other either...MahiDa are just like tht😳

Haaye...😍 so true hun.. so true..

Mahindra: ab jo bhi karna hai hum dono ko akele aur aik saath karna hai, aik dosre ke ilawa kisi aur par bharosa...

So true...😃

Brinda: takay tum bhi mera bharosa thod do!

Mahindra: kitni ajeeb baat hai na, tumhe mujhpar bharosa nahi hai par es baat par hai ke main tumhara bharosa thodh donga.

Brinda n Mahendra....Jo ho gaya so ho gaya...Now a new beginning...😃

Yes... 😃

Mahindra feels relieved to see her calming down, he just couldn't see her like that he had to calm her anger down. He knows she didn't deserved to be hurt like this because he did saw how much she respected Anuj.

'Koi toh baat hai, ajj mere saath woh pehle wala Mahindra nahi tha. Par jaisa bhi tha.... shayad... acha tha.' As this thought crosses her mind, she slaps her head and tries to remove it from her mind that instant. After all she's becoming same old Brinda!

🥳😍

Ika I luved the one shot......🤗

Thanks a lot dear, Will be waitin for more

Awww... thankyou hun..🤗🤗 I'm so happy you liked it..😃

more?😲😆😆 will try for more..😳

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@day_dreamer

Originally posted by: rnfandeboo

@day_dreamer

i think i started compairing your one shot and the way MahiDa are shown in the show..........

but now i realised it is totaly imaginary and nothing to do with the actual show.

and you are not harsh.......actualy i think i was harsh .............sorry

and let me tell u i loved the whole part...........just after reading a few lines, i don't know why but i was smiling or if i be genuine i was blushing😳😳so badly that i couldn't read further.after a few mins. mene apne apko sambhala and completed reading .i had smile on my face while i was reading the whole shot,.and i have read the second shot also..........liked it awesome...............detailed comment baad me karongi 😃 as my exams are not over yet ...........

Originally posted by: Pooj@

Loved it Ika! It was really very good!

Mahindra sits on back on his chair and closes his eyes. Everyone has left the office except him. He doesn't feel like going home tonight. He opens his eyes and opens the drawer in his desk. He takes out the page which is torn out from a diary, it is torn from Brinda's diary. He found this earlier from one of Brinda's files which she was working on today. Brinda spent her day with shredding lot of papers today which he thinks must be some of her personal pages and this one might be one of them, but by mistake came in file.

Before either of them could realise it was too late. Brinda went home early today and Mahindra was suppose to work on files which he & Brinda were working together. He was surprised to find the page in file but he couldn't stop himself from keeping it somewhere safe, for himself. He really wanted to read it.

Mahindra starts reading it and is surprised to find it's a poem written by her.

Mera kuch saamaan tumhare paas pada hai

Mera kuch saamaan tumhare paas pada hai

saawan ke kuch bheege bheege din rakhe hain

Aur mere ek khat main lipti raat padi hai

Woh raat bhujaa do, mera woh saamaan lauta do

Woh raat bhujaa do, mera woh saamaan lauta do

He is completely shocked to read it, he starts to understand it's actually written on them, their moments together. He remembers once Brinda reciting him the first two lines. Before he could understand Brinda smartly changed the topic.

Mera kuch saamaan tumhaare paas pada hai

Mera kuch saamaan tumhaare paas pada hai

Patjhad hai kuch ... hai na?

O ! patjhad main kuch patton ke girne ki aahat

Kaanon main ek baar pahan ke laut aai thi

Patajhad ki woh shaakh abhi tak kaamp rahi hai

Woh shaakh gira do, mera woh saamaan lauta do

Woh shaakh gira do, mera woh saamaan lauta do

Mahindra remembers their moment together.

Both are sitting on the bike and Mahindra is driving it. Brinda is holding his waist very gently, almost as if not holding it.

Brinda: Oho Mahindra, itna slow kyun chala rahe ho? Us din toh badi badi baatein kar rahe thay Delhi se rotak 3 bar kar chuke ho. Ajj kya howa?

Mahindra: Arre baba kya chahti ho? Bike ko plane bana don?

Brinda laughs slightly as she loves to tease him.

Brinda: Nahi.. woh toh kar nahi paonge. Aik kaam karo na wahan jungle ke beech se chalo.

Mahindra's eyes go wide as he tilt his head slightly and looks at her, then back on road.

Mahindra: Pagal hogayi ho kya?

Brinda: Kyun? Himmat nahi hai? Arre rehne do, tum kya...

Before she could complete her sentence Mahindra speeds up the bike and take it off the road and enters the side jungle. The bike is going really fast through the jungle and the trees, plants are getting in their way but they narrow escape them; everywhere there are fallen leaves and some are falling on them as they go through the jungle like a wind.

Brinda holds Mahindra's waist tightly with both hands. Both are enjoying a lot and both are laughing so much. Brinda never enjoyed a bike ride this much before and Mahindra is loving this ride.

He starts to slowdown slowly and starts to take bike back towards the road. When they reach on the road again, Mahindra stops the bike and looks at brinda. He starts laughing so hard because brinda is covered in leaves, mostly her hairs. Brinda makes a cute face and laughs at him, upon telling he looks himself in rear mirror and is shocked, he's also covered in leaves more or less. Both look at each other shockingly and then laugh out loud.

Mahindra: Maza aya?

Brinda looks at him and nods her head as yes and smiles. He too smiles at her and very gently knocks his head on hers.

Upon remembering this moment Mahindra feels a smile appearing on his lips, along with that he can feel tears roll down his cheeks. He carries on reading.

Ek akeli chhataree main jab aadhe aadhe bheeg rahe thay

Ek akeli chhataree main jab aadhe aadhe bheeg rahe thay

Aadhe sookhe aadhe geele, sukha to main le aaye thi

Geela maan shayad bistar ke paas pada ho

Woh bhijwa do, mera woh saamaan lauta do

Mahindra remembers the moment which is mentioned in this poem. He can never forget that day when both drenched in rain and first time shared an umbrella. A evening before they both had to leave Chamba, Mahindra insisted on taking a walk, explore the place one last time before they go back to Mumbai.

Brinda: Es waqt? Par kya zaroorat hai?

Mahindra: Tumhe nahi ana toh mat ayo main ja raha hon.

Brinda: Theek hai lekin jaldi ana aur zayada dorr mat jana.

Mahindra looks at her angrily and then turns to leave. He really hoped she would come but she isn't interested. Mahindra sighs deeply and leaves.

As he just goes out the of hotel he hears someone calling his name. He turns around a finds Brinda coming towards him, he is surprised to see her.

Mahindra: Ab kya howa?

Brinda: Woh, yaad aya ke news mein sona tha bohut zorr ki bearish hone wali hai, toh maine socha tumhe yeh chatri de don.

She holds out the umbrella, Mahindra looks at her in awe. He takes umbrella from her hand, she turns to leave when he stops her.

Mahindra: ab agaye ho toh saath chalo. Paas hi bohut khubsooraat jagah hai, chalo na. Thodi dair mein wapis ajayeinge. Pakka.

Brinda couldn't refuse this time, without saying anything she starts walking with him. They both were near the place when rain start to pour heavily. Mahindra quickly opens the umbrella. He also holds it over Brinda's head, she finds it so sweet. Mahindra asks her to hold it, Brinda also holds the umbrella.

Suddenly the wind come with great force and their umbrella flies away with it. Both of them get shocked and before could react they find themselves almost completely drenched in rain. Both look at each other and laugh and continue walking in rain.

As the memories are flooding back, Mahindra is finding hard to stop his tears flowing. These are not sad tears or any regretion tears. These are the happy tears afterall these memories are his life!

Ek so sola chaand ki raatein ek tumhare kaandhe ka til

Ek so sola chaand ki raatein ek tumhare kaandhe ka til

Geeli mahendi ki khushbu, jhoot mooth ke shikwe kuch

Jhooth mooth ke wade sab yaad karaa do

Sab bhijwa do, mera woh saamaan lauta do

Sab bhijwa do, mera woh saamaan lauta do

"Ek so sola chaand ki raatein ek tumhare kaandhe ka til" Mahindra is completely speechless to read this, he never thought Brinda could ever be this intense about them. He finds himself blushing remembering the moment when Brinda saw the 'til' on his shoulder.

Brinda: Aur karo heroic stunts.

Mahindra finds Brinda just behind him, he doesn't bother to turn around. He knows she's angry with him.

Mahindra: Main koi heroic stunt nahi kar raha tha.

Brinda: haan haan, woh toh bas tum pagal hogaye thay.

Mahindra turns around and shots her the 'look', Brinda laughs but quickly tries to hide it. Mahindra just shakes his head and turns back around and concentrate on applying medicine on his left shoulder, just near the neck. Today when they were out to capture one of drug smuggler they actually had to face the whoel gang and while fighting one of the gang member tried to attack Brinda from behind with rod and but Mahindra came in between just in time and it hits him hard on shoulder.

Mahindra: Main beech mein nahi hota toh woh rod tumhare sar...

As he thinks what could've happened if he didn't came on time, he feels a strange fear. Fear of losing her, fear of seeing her in pain.

Mahindra: Ah...

The pain of his wound made him come out of his thoughts. He looks up and finds Brinda standing right in front of him, he is stunned to see her. Brinda snatches the medicine from his hand and he just keeps looking.

Brinda: Dawai lagane ke liye hoti hai. Kabse dekh rahi hon tumne dawai pakdi hai par laga nahi rahe apne hi duniya mein ho.

Brinda gently applies medicine on his wound and Mahindra is just dumbstruck and watching her. Meanwhile applying medicine Brinda notices the 'til' on his left shoulder just near his neck.

Mahindra smiles as he remember the moment, but till today he doesn't know why she was surprised to see 'til' on his shoulder.

Mahindra looks at page again and smiles.

Mahindra: Pagal ho tum, bilkul pagal. Par sabse alag. Shayad esi liye tumse....

"jhoot mooth ke shikwe kuch" He remembers the time when he said to her "crime aur police mardon ki field hai" and when in return she called him a 'male chauvinist'. He lets out a laugh on this.

As reads the last paragraph, he feels fresh tears forming in his eyes.

Ek ijaazat de do bas, jab isako dafanaaungee

Main bhi wahin soh jaungee

Main bhi wahin soh jaungee

As he reads the last line he imagine see Brinda through the page, lying down on her bed and closing her eyes with a smile. He holds the page close to his heart and lays back on chair closing his eyes, tears roll down from his eyes.