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Was it really that easy? Or was my fault? I did my best, to adjust to his lifestyle, to his ways of living, living with his family, made them my family but now, now it will all be over. Soon, we will go our separate ways. It's just so hard to believe. A 2 year long relationship, broke in a span of two weeks. I don't get what my mistake was ... I just wanted to help Bhaiya and Didi ... I just wanted to unite them. Maybe, the method was wrong but my intentions, they weren't . Then why am I being punished so badly ! Was it really so hard for him to see my point of view, my side of the story? In the 2 years we spent together, he trusted me with every small thing ... From waking him up in the morning to making sure that every single file he needs for work is in his bag but he couldn't trust my intentions regarding this matter. Maybe, maybe this situation was a test for our relationship ... Which turned out to be weak. But does that mean all the times we spent together, all the beautiful moments, all of them were meaningless? My love for him meant nothing to him? I wish I had answers to these questions but I don't ... But I also think this divorce will decide whether he had feelings for me or was I just a namesake wife for him ...

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Why did she have to sign those papers ... Why? I guess, she wasn't happy in our relationship. Maybe she found the differences between us only becoming worse that she thought that divorce is the best option. But these differences wouldn't have even arose if she didn't go and plan Shraddha and Kunal's wedding. We all had already been against it yet still she was stubborn on getting them married. Why couldn't she just understand that my sister wouldn't be able to live in that house! Her mom would never let Shraddha live in peace if she had married Kunal. And Dhruv, god knows to what extent that lady can go ... Her behavior has already caused Dhruv bad, to think that he would live with her and call her Dadi ... Was just no making any sense. All I could and can see her as is a harm to my sister's life, which I will make to remove any essence away from anyone of my family members. But, she could have just realised her mistake, said sorry and we could have lived as before. But no, Kittu will remain at her point. And the outcome is out ... We are getting divorced. Our divorce starts to make me think, whether any of the times we moments together meant anything to her ... whether, I meant anything to her anymore. But at times I also tend to think, was I too harsh on her, did I do something wrong?

Hi people !! I'm Neha !! I'm 14 years old and I have become a huge fan of MB !! This is a short OS by me ... I wanted to write more on Anand & Kittu's point of view on where their relationship was heading towards. I hope you guys like it and constructive criticism will be appreciated.

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Extremely amazing! Please continue dear...im a huge fan of anki and I'd love anything and everything on them!! Awesome work neha!! 👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Are you really fourteen? 😳

I'm 22, and all that I do is write silly poems. 🤢

Constructive criticism? WHAAA! This is brilliant piece of writing.

WAITING FOR MORE! 😊


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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hi neha..cant believe u r just fourteen!! Omg u write so well at this age!!👍🏼..
Loved reading both POV's..do write more!😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Excellent post Neha.. keep writing more.. we love ANKI.. loved your point of view for their point of view.. keep loving them..
you are rocking at 14
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Posted: 12 years ago
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First of all, welcome and secondly OMG, only 14.
Nice post, Throughly enjoyed reading it.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Amazing Neha...Very well written👏👏
Keep writing...would love to read more😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
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WOW 👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏
This is...I'm speechless. Your only 14...that is kind of hard to believe because this was just...wow...
You matched how both Kittu and Anand are feeling and even though I hate it I actually really relate to how Anand feels about Shranal and Dhruv and it shows how much he doesn't understand his wife and how vice versa how Kittu feels vulnerable about their relationship. just simply amazing please write more👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Your OS is beautifully written and I loved how you captured both their hurt feelings.
Would love to read more of your work

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