Madira, aye Madira, uski yaad ghula ja

This is a unique poem. Read it an you'll know why!

 

Madira, aye Madira, uski yaad ghula ja

 

Hai! Kitni lambi hai yeh raat

Tum jo bahoo mein na ho aaj

Pyaasey hai yeh hooth

Madira kay ek boond ke liye

Dhoondh rahe hai haath

Botal kay thandak ko

Sar Chakra Raha Hai

Bas, ek jaam ki hai Uttejana.

 

~Madira, aye Madira, uski yaad ghula ja~

 

Bas, ek jaam ke hai Uttejana

Sar charka raha hai

Haath botal kay thandak

Ko dhoondh rahe hai

Madira kay ek boond ke liye

Pyaasey hai yeh hooth

Tum jo bahoo mein na ho aaj

Hai! Kitni lambi hai yeh raat.

 

~Madira, aye Madira, uski yaad ghula ja~

 

(21 March 2007 – rewritten and edited

December 2006- conceptualized)

 

 

Excellent Preets!! 👏

The poem is quite unique indeed, but is it because the lines in the second stanza are in the exact reverse order as the first stanza?

Cheers,

Anjali

good one preets keep them coming 👏

good one pree

nice and different one

hmm...interesting...I hope I have understood it well...

Originally posted by: amisra

The poem is quite unique indeed, but is it because the lines in the second stanza are in the exact reverse order as the first stanza?

^ yup, you got it right!😛👏

Thanks guys for liking it.

Lotty tai, good to see you back :)